My Talent Was Stolen at the Beginning, so I Went to the Second World for Revenge.

It has a feeling that it doesn't belong to a tomato [face covering] It's very well written, the world view is very attractive, and the male protagonist's character has no quirks, which is really a plus. Come on come on

The writing is as smooth as ever, and the crisis is coming. (Spoilers below, don't read if you don't like it) The setting of the second world is more interesting than I thought. The game, entry, confrontation and even the interpretation of the two worlds are more interesting than the plot in the world in my opinion. On the contrary, the so-called players, kill kings and even skills are not very attractive to me. I really want to see the game of Alliance~Empire! The struggles of ordinary people with Advent syndrome! And first world thinking! Um! It does not affect the author's ideas, and I hope to see more excellent works!

I have been following this book for more than a month. It is very interesting. I was attracted by the title at first. At that time, the rating of this book was only 7.8, And few people read it. At that time, I felt confused after reading the introduction, but I still clicked on this book with curiosity, and then I was attracted by the ups and downs of the story. To be honest, I really like this kind of complex, thought-provoking novels with plain language, vivid and profound characters. The setting of the first and second worlds, class conflicts, the decay of the empire, the dispute between the federation and the empire, the sorrow of the residents at the bottom, Wu Youwulu who does not want to be manipulated and is determined to be himself, and Ji's father, Ji's father really left a deep impression on me. I think he is such a good father. Forgive me for not remembering what Ji's father's name is (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ). The residents of Sunset Town are also very enthusiastic and sympathize with the neighbor's eldest sister. They are very grateful to Jiqing for avenging her. They also hope that the neighbor's family has successfully smuggled into the Federation and can live a good life. Hey, I hope that good people will have a safe life (๑ŏ ŏ๑) By the way, I don't want the protagonist to have a love line, and I hope there will be no cp. Say important things three times, I hope there will be no cp, no cp, no cp. (Ps: Although the author updates two chapters on time at 16:00 every day, can you update a little more? T^T Two chapters are really not enough (╥_╥) Please (ㅇㅅㅇ❀))

A particularly good book, Love Comes from Sunset Town.

Let me evaluate it from my personal perspective. I have been paying attention to Zhimaolii for a long time. He is a very hard-working person. I have also read his two previous books. The stories are very exciting and very personal. This proves that he is privately looking for reference on related themes. Tell me what I think is bad. The dialogue between the characters is a bit stumbling and looks very tiring. This may be because the paragraphs are not detailed enough. Sometimes I forget the next sentence just after reading one sentence, which makes me feel confused and confused. This may also be the reason why not many people read this book. The sentences are not smooth and stumbling in reading. However, the characters are described in detail and the storyline is exciting. This is a good story. Keep reading. The score of this book should be 9.5.

This book is a bit interesting. It tells the story of a background where the protagonist can travel between the real world and a kind of cyber world. It's just cool enough, but it's also smart, so it's not completely cool. You're immersed in it, you know? I can't tell which one is east, west, north or south when I put down my phone. I mean it's very real and beautiful. I recommend it!

The same routine as traveling through cyberspace to kill the boss! ! It's very well written, the only drawback is that it's not finished! !

I hope it can be updated to a normal ending like Fanzhu's book [Hold]

There is something, this book is good. There is a degree of relaxation, unlike some small authors who insist on writing turn-based books, reality-second world-reality-second world. The plot is also enjoyable. It's not like you're stuck on one map and grinding for experience. When switching maps frequently, it's done properly and doesn't make anyone feel uncomfortable.

Although I haven't had much time to watch it, the plot has a strong cinematic feel. There are not many fighting scenes, but the description of a world is very realistic. It is very similar to watching a movie shot by a director who is well versed in the audience's psychology.

A good group wear and back-and-forth wear-and-greet series, with very obvious advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The author's early conception is very good. From the perspective of "traveling and occupying another world", he has conducted in-depth thinking and carefully figured out how the civilization being traveled will make a systematic and comprehensive resistance, as well as the impact on society, culture, and ethics. Then the author uses a good rhythm to gradually reveal these issues, and uses the way of characterization of supporting characters. This makes the book achieve two achievements of "the plot gradually gets better" and "the characters are vivid and vivid". It is a good book worthy of adding to the bookshelf. Disadvantages: The author's writing skills are somewhat lacking, and he has quite good descriptive ability, but is slightly insufficient in controlling the rhythm of the narrative, resulting in the description of some intense scenes that are not exciting enough (on the contrary, the design of the character dialogue is very clever and has a sense of substitution). In short: it may not be a masterpiece, but it can be watched!

The writing of this book is smooth and the writing style is excellent. It is a masterpiece on Tomato. The novel theme is somewhat similar to "The Naming of Night". But the author is really awesome in bringing out the old and bringing out the new. Now let's talk about my speculation. The book always emphasizes cause and effect. It may be like a movie itself being the cause and the effect, but the time is different. So the person who might steal his luck is himself. Just my own speculation, don't comment if you don't like it

According to the rating of Tomato, this book can get five stars. It is obvious that this book is not a trivial article, and those who read mindless and refreshing articles can avoid it. The biggest advantage of this book is that it is a small thing that makes a big difference. Through the portrayal of the supporting characters, the entire background of society is very clearly explained. It makes people feel angry and at the same time can only lament the injustice of the world. Some plain and straightforward sentences are very classic and unforgettable. But I think the biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is always caught up in the trend of the times. He is like a passer-by in the world and has read more than two hundred chapters without doing anything to change society. He is always forced to be involved in certain events and has no opinion of his own. If this is too much foreshadowing, some plots are a bit too deliberate, such as the revenge of the lucky thief. There is too little foreshadowing, so there is not much sense of revenge. It may be that the attribute of luck does not have much sense of existence. It seems that the author has stopped updating recently, and the double book has no results, which is a pity.

Super pretty! There are reflections and a portrayal of reality. The world in his writings is rich and complete, including the lives and thoughts of the people at the upper, middle and lower levels. The logic of the story is clear and complete, and the plot advancement is also very rigorous. I haven't seen any loopholes so far. The pace is moderate. And there are many places that touch me. What is the "lowness" or "nobility" of human life? What kind of elegance does each have? What kind of life do people from all walks of life live? This book gave me a lot to think about, and I highly recommend it!

The protagonist and supporting characters each have distinct personalities. The story is moderately controlled. There is no heroine yet. It should be a novel without a heroine. The story is very good, but I don't know why. I always feel that there is a chance of being blocked. Please read it and cherish it. 9 Points recommended.

The writing is smooth, the text has warmth, and the writing style is also good. It is a gem waiting to be fired. The latest chapter is about the protagonist Huo Ming and his sister An An, "I'm not afraid of pain. When the chair leg penetrated my lower abdomen, I was still rolling on the ground and growing wildly." Touched.

It's good-looking, not a mindless article, the subject matter is novel, come on, I highly recommend it. You can see my total reading time, how many books I have read, and how many books I have collected. I highly recommend this author.

There is nothing poisonous about the plot. On the contrary, the pace of advancement and development is quite good, and the character creation is quite distinct, but it may have been removed from the home page, and the current popularity is not high (normal for Tomato) All in all, it's a very good novel.

The content is wonderful. When will the author come back? I love this kind of story about two worlds.

The writing is very good, it feels like a small size, and there is no trace of water at all. It's not that cool. Maybe the disadvantage is the advantage [not passionate, but more realistic]. The protagonist is a genius who needs to hide himself. The feeling that I know you're angry, but there's nothing you can do about it can continue.

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Beautiful! Come and visit with sesame seeds style! No rustiness!

It's so exciting to watch. Whether it's the writing or the plot, I'd like to call it a masterpiece. The description of the characters is vivid and the author is so awesome [love] [love] [love] [love]

The quality is high and the writing is smooth. The current chapter is on my Tomato top 10. I prefer novels such as cyberpunk. The last one I loved so much was that Jiang killed the boss.

The writing style on Tomato is very good. For example, the sentence "That is the magma of life" is really tense, and there are many such tense sentences. I sincerely hope that this book will get better and better. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Tomato's masterpiece is one of the few that allows me to continue reading it. This work keeps wandering in the relationship between human nature and theology. Although some of the details are not perfect in my opinion, I feel that it is a breath of fresh air for Tomato. The story tells the motivation of the protagonist to join the Smith Game, as well as the protagonist's life experience in the second world, and his thoughts on the second world. Now it talks about the protagonist establishing the Church of All Things in the mining area. I sincerely hope that this book will become popular in Tomato.

A good book with a clear structure, clues throughout the text, and strict logic. In addition, it also contains my favorite elements of science and engineering. It is as detailed as it should be and as simple as it should be. It is comfortable and refreshing to read, and it is a good rest after dinner. After reading it, I couldn't help but pick up a book on electricity, and I want to continue studying engineering.

I don't know why I always feel that this book will be popular. Maybe it's Ji Fan's last question after his death, or the protagonist's continuous understanding of life. The importance of the law of cause and effect is vividly reflected in the article, and I was deeply touched by my own growth process. This is a book that I love very much, and I hope the author can update it soon.

It's not bad. If you ignore the protagonist's rapid transition from autism and no one doubts it, this book can almost become a god in one book. The god I mean refers to the gold content of the red next door in his early years. The author's group portraits are good and he is good at increasing the weight of the characters through side descriptions. However, if you look at the character's frontal description from the perspective of a great god, the plot is too excessive and a little stiff. Of course, this is based on the evaluation of top-notch works. The full score is 100. I personally give it 95.

It has the potential to be a big hit. I suggest you take a look at Japanese comics and Dragon Clan. To be precise, it should be carefully sculpted. Although it is quite thoughtful to draw on the nomenclature of night to shape this belief process and then express it.