The First Sword Cultivator in the Qin Dynasty

From Night Song to Anonymous, the author has always written the story with great care. The characters of the two characters and the story deeply attracted me. Gold will always be discovered one day. I hope the author can withstand time and achieve success not only in writing.

The book is a good book, and the author's writing is very good, especially the naming of the characters and various moves. It is amazing. The reason why it has not been popular, I guess, is related to the protagonist. The general feature of other novels that suddenly become popular is that the subject matter is not necessarily new. There may be a large number of authors writing at the same time, but they are very in line with the public's aesthetics. For example, their protagonists may There are advantages in all aspects, but what remains the same is that the protagonist must have the same characteristics as ordinary people, but I can't find it in Ye Ge and Ying Wuming, because they are extremely talented, cold, decisive, tough, too rational, and the readers do not have a strong sense of empathy. If this book is finished, then I hope that the author can try this aspect in the next book.

It looks great and basically has no shortcomings. The only thing is that when the male protagonist draws symbols, the description always emphasizes how calm the male protagonist is. I personally feel that this could be done less or from the side, otherwise it would be a bit embarrassing. In short, the fighting and plot are top-notch, but the characterization is lacking. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Of course, the author is just lacking. In some aspects, for example, the behavior of the male protagonist and Bai Erwen when they get along is also very well portrayed, which makes the image of the male protagonist a lot more three-dimensional. (This review is not for fear of being criticized, but I think the author's characterization is not without any skills. As a person who strives to be objective, it is normal to add when he thinks of it)

The writing is really good. After reading the first volume, you can already see the author's skills. Everyone can support it. However, the current plot progress is too slow. What kind of Jiange is the Jiange? What kind of Qin is the Qin State? What is the Spring and Autumn Period like? I hope the author will work hard.

It is a really rare good book. The force value and money system have not collapsed. It is relatively rigorous and has a large structure. It was written from the fantasy Warring States period. If it is completed, it will not be weaker than the Qin Dynasty! The author can't hold on any longer, please support me. Don't let it stop.

It's very well written, I hope I can keep up the pace. Rush, rush, rush

This is definitely a good book, the description is delicate and true, but it is not popular. Damn you, Tomato, why isn't this book popular?

I really hope you can come and support me. To me, it's really good. Come and encourage the author. It's beautiful. Come here quickly.

(The following are all personal opinions) This book is relatively readable and can accept the author's style. If it is not to your liking, it will be quite uncomfortable. It is not a very popular type. The author mostly describes the circumstances of the event first and then writes the reasons. Therefore, the foreshadowing of the same battle is often retrieved a few pages or even chapters after the battle. In addition, the early stage focuses on forbearance. Book lovers who are interested in trying it can try to read the first volume before deciding whether to leave (although it is a bit long [face covering], but it is recommended to give it a try)

It looks good, and the villain's IQ is all online, but I feel that some things happen too coincidental, and too many coincidences don't seem like coincidences. It's a bit strange and depressing to read. I hope some explanations can be given for these coincidences, but overall it's very good [please update]

The action scenes are very smooth, and the writing is at the top of Tomatoes. I have to say that I know how to choose names. It is a big improvement over the previous book, and the pace is faster. However, I hope that the protagonist's character can be more detailed, as well as the supporting characters.

A very spiritual book. In this world, not only those who are born noble can have ups and downs stories. Reminds me of Ning Que's revenge in "Jiang Ye". Not only the general's son has the right to revenge, but the concierge's son can still create his own legend. Come on author!

This book is really good, except for the slow pace in the early stages, which may make it difficult for readers to read carefully. But as you read further, you will find that the author controls the plot very well and is very attractive.

I read the author's first book a long time ago, and I liked it very much. I can still remember the excitement when reading it. The exquisite foreshadowing, full-bodied characters and grand world view made me long for the world in the book. Later, I occasionally Then I came across this book and read a few lines and found that it was very familiar. I was really excited when I saw that the author was the same person. I quit reading the author's first book for a long time... I originally planned to save this book until it was finished and then read it, but why did I stop updating it... Tonic 🥲🥲

Very good, one of the few novels that I can read

The story angle of this book is relatively novel, with an interpretation of human nature. The narrative is clear and the logic is quite strong. The enemy also has normal human thinking and high intelligence, and can find flaws in the details. Overall, it's very exciting. I'm still stuck in Novice Village. I hope the author won't be embarrassed when I see a broader sky!

I feel like it is a book that needs to be read slowly. The author's writing style is good and the book is quite beautiful. Although it is not the type of book that starts with a happy start, there are always happy moments as the plot develops, just like the novels that were popular five or six years ago. I was surprised and happy to see this kind of book in Tomato. Not many people have read this book, but the reviews have been very good. Although it seems that not many people have read it despite insisting on more than two million words, but maybe, it is a very good-looking work, and I still hope to finish it. I misremembered, I just checked it again and it was 1.696 Million words [Sending Hearts]

I just finished the first volume. The book is fine. Both the fighting and the emotional lines are very delicate. This book should not appear in Tomato. The beginning is a high-level one. It depends on whether the author can continue to maintain it. But I think it is strange that there are so few people reading it. It seems like it is being restricted.

This book is a rare masterpiece, both in terms of its conception and writing style and the author's attitude! I have read nearly a thousand of the latest chapters. It can be said that this book is better than most online books. Although it is different from the historical data of "The Qin Empire", it is still very readable, which also shows that the author's writing skills are very deep! Come on!

So cool! So cool! After so many years, I saw a true traditional fantasy novel again! ! ! Fairies in traditional fantasy literature. How can there be so much love and hatred, how can there be so many races facing each other? There is only the infinite pursuit of Tao and the constant challenge of oneself. There are not so many literary youths who are straightforward and concise, and there are not so many brainless and forced recommendations of Shuangwen. After seeing more than 400 chapters of The Strongest Hearthfire Realm, it is puzzling that this book will not forcefully open a new map like other books. What we see and hear is what the protagonist should see at this level, and what we should see and recognize step by step. The later plot is foreshadowed by the early details, so there will be no tearing, because there are no various atmospheric and mysterious descriptions like other novels, which is not very attractive. So everyone should taste it slowly, hold on, calm down together, and experience this masterpiece of fantasy literature.

The rhythm is very strong, not draggy, not Madonna, the aura of the protagonist is not very strong, it is closer to reality. Very good novel.

I just read the last book, Night Song is very good, and I've decided to follow this one as well. Good luck to the author!

The characters, plot, details, training, and fighting are all lacking. The level is not inferior to that of any platinum master.

The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and it is better than many books in the starting point. This is a pity. Come on, the author. You can reap the dividends of the subject matter next time or simply change the platform. There is a lot of potential.

Why is it 8:30? I feel that this book is top-notch on Tomato and its traffic is very low. Please give it a try, author. Don't give up. It will become a big hit.

The quality is better than most Tomato novels The quality is very good, much better than hydrology

It's really good. I hope you can be patient and read it.

Why are so few people reading such a good book? Such writing style and storyline are really rare. This one is better than the author's previous one. I hope the author can stick to it and slow down or not let such stories be discontinued. Come on, author.

The foreshadowing in the front is relatively long, and the pace is inevitably slow, but the climax begins after leaving the Black Iron City (it's fun all the way). The writing is quite good, but unfortunately the style is not that of a rotten persimmon. It is a bit off the starting point of Wang Daowen's early rise. Most people who like the fun of mindless cheats at the beginning should not be able to read it (I liked it anyway, and when I saw the cheats in the novel, I just swiped it away [I understand])

I have been listening to it for a few days. The author writes very well. Both the literary and fighting scenes are very good. I have a small suggestion: the proportion of literary drama and fighting scenes. There are too many fights, and it feels like the male protagonist is always fighting. You can add some literary drama or laughter to balance it out. For example, I really wanted to laugh when I heard the part about the three little ones just coming out of the mine and eating for free [Thinking]