Jockey Girl: I Didn't Say They Still Have Memories.

This is the first simulation novel about a horse girl that I have read. The only drawback is that the author's update status may not be stable. You will never know how desperate I was when I read the first chapter which was written in 20 or 3 years ago.

Alas π_π Another discontinued horse racing girl novel [Chigua] What a pity [eating melon] Don't stop updating! It's a pretty good simulation-themed horse racing story!

I think it's pretty good. As one of the few simulation books among horse racing girls, the writing is quite impressive [eating melon]

Very good, except that the language may be a bit verbose. But the overall structure, plot direction, and depth are far beyond the level of Tomato fans. (@ Laughter on a piece of paper Fenghua When you wake up, write code and don't live the life of a young master. The updates have dropped significantly recently. Also, why am I catching up with the big army?)

Give yourself a five-star rating. No one should see it.

Let me complain about Chapter 80. This is the first time I have seen the main character die by sinking into the sea in the world of Saima Musume, and it is the kind of plot where the main character dies forcibly. The main character knows it is a trap. Akikawa Yayoi even said: You are not alone. Such words, but you have to die alone. If you don't ask for help from the Mejiro family and the Symbol family, you have to have one to survive. People are going to die, and the argument for further training in France prepared by the URA old man is also full of loopholes: But I don't want them to be sad about this," the old man said, "So I prepared an argument. URA invites you to France to learn advanced training concepts. It is not convenient to contact you during the study period. You can regain the qualification to coach after you return. I just want to ask, given the relationship between the protagonist and the horse ladies, wouldn't they be suspicious? Shouldn't the protagonist talk to them face to face about this kind of thing before leaving? Then I asked the protagonist's parents and found that the protagonist had not spoken to his parents in person. This statement would normally be suspicious. Then the Mejiro family and the Symbol family investigated and found out that it was false. If the author's simulation was the kind that had subsequent simulations, I guess this would happen: After investigation, the horse girls who learned that the protagonist was drowned said: What does it mean that my friend and lover were drowned? The parents of the protagonist in the simulation: What does it mean that my son was drowned, and then directly called the police. The country of the protagonist in the simulation: What is my name, a Chinese from the Huaxia Kingdom? Xia Zimin was drowned in Japan. If the plot were to be simulated normally, it would be like this: the protagonist and the horse ladies would join forces to call the police in advance. On the day of departure, a tracker would be placed on the protagonist or recorded from a distance. When the protagonist was about to sink into the sea, He immediately rushed out to rescue people. The police arrested the old man URA on the spot and recorded his evil deeds. The Mejiro family and the Symbol family posted the video online. The old man URA was sentenced. The protagonist lived a happy life with the horse girls. The simulation ended.

If it's good, I'd love to watch Showa Ma Niang. Why did the author stop updating it? 😭 It's ok, but there are not many people watching, otherwise I could get a rating [Thinking]

Originally, there were few Ma Niang stories in Tomato novels, but after reading it, I actually found it quite good. Just wait and see when the trainer will be raped hard, dragged into the basement and jumped by the horse

Trayson is still as rotten as ever. 🧐 Why don't you listen to my advice? 😡 You don't understand Trayson's darkness at all! ☝😡 Because of Trayson's conspiracy, our career as a trainer has been turned into a complete nightmare😨 There is no turning back The person who is responsible for the horse jumping has deviated from the right path of human beings and can only keep having nightmares about being jumped by the horse...😔 I am no longer your trainer. 😞 This is the price of selling your body and mind to Trayson. As long as you refuse, the horse will collapse if it cannot jump in place. 🤯 Now you understand, right, the terror of Treson and his racehorse girl. 😡

I said that there is a huge gap between the writing style before and after, from a small piece of writing to a sentimental piece of writing for young people. The time span of three years before and after, After staying up all night and seeing this, I wanted to say a lot of things, but after thinking about it, I decided to keep it simple. I really like the current style and hope the author can stick to it and finish the novel. But as an online article, it is undoubtedly unqualified. It is not direct and specific enough, and it is destined not to attract enough readers, especially horse racing girls are still a niche subject. One star deducted: The update is unstable and the time span is too large. Be cautious when entering the trap.

There is something, but with this update rate, why don't you consider developing in NGA?

It's very beautiful and wonderful. Keep up the good work.

Come on, it's really beautiful [I learned it]

The writing is very good, and it accurately describes the attitude of the protagonist towards the people in the simulation. The transitions are not bad, and the emotions are also very good. It is rare to write about the expectations of many people and the helplessness and guilt of one person, and that person can only choose to choose one person. The actions are also normal, but it does not focus on competition, but more on daily life. There are problems with the dialogue, and there is no emotional ups and downs. Some sentences are too repetitive.

The writing style is getting better and better. It has changed from a simple and refreshing novel to a sad youth novel. Overall, there is nothing wrong with it. If you want to read a refreshing novel, please don't come here, but if you want to watch a romantic drama, you can take a look.

Promise me, the author, that two people must speak in empty lines when talking. I gave five stars because I am really interested in this book, but there are really many places that can be improved. Every time I read it a few times, I lose the desire to read it. I must study other works.

Chef Qian Ming really respects death [blowing kiss]

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Author, I want to read the extra chapter of the first volume, it will definitely be interesting😋

Everything else is good, but why do updates always stop? People watching are worried that there will be no update tomorrow and the update will be completely discontinued.

Can you have a corresponding picture for each chapter?

The content is substantial and beautiful.

Trainer, what exactly? … Could it be that in Treson, the only way out for a trainer is the horse girl Repp who is under his charge? No! Such an ending! I don't accept it! It's obviously supposed to be a passionate youth story about growing up, why did it end up like this? Our Tereson (choking)... What will he become...

Come on! It's great, but the writing was a bit jerky in the early days, probably because it spanned three years, but it's much better now.

I'm very, very satisfied with it. It's the first time I've seen something of this type. Without further ado, I give it a five-star review.

How many people have watched it?

Boss, write about being a horse racing girl for the rest of your life. Oh no, I can do anything!

Chapter 1 of Big Brother, 20 or 3 years old, scared me to tears

Hey, it would be better if the simulation time was shorter.

It's a very well written work. No one wants the author to update it more often. Don't stop updating.