Harry Potter: This Ravenclaw Is Too Genius

This book is really good. It feels very warm. Each character has his or her own cuteness. The protagonist basically doesn't understand the plot, so he treats everyone with a normal attitude. Quirrell's writing is really good. People are inherently contradictory. No one is absolute. I hope the author can change The ending of Quirrell, the whole book is also relatively positive. This book gives me the feeling that it is a description of beautiful things in ordinary life, without too much danger. It may seem a bit bland to some people, but book lovers who like daily life will probably like it more. It is just that the number of words is a little short, and it is worth recommending.

Luna writes exactly the same as the original novel, and many times she speaks and acts like an elf from a magical jungle. However, the male protagonist and Luna are able to match their brainwaves perfectly. Whenever the two get along, people always wish they could get married. The character of the male protagonist is also very strong. In addition to being close to and caring for Luna, he is also very talented in Ravenclaw. There is no need to elaborate on how popular a smart and diligent student is in a college environment. All in all, whether you want to watch CP or watch a male protagonist, this book can satisfy you. I haven't read many HP fanfics, so I don't know the average level of HP fanfics. But among Tomato's novels, this book is considered to be at the top level. After reading a few more books, I realized that the quality of Tomato fan fiction is really not good. This book can be said to be one of the pinnacles of the quality of Tomato fan fiction.

I have read more than 80 chapters now. The plot is very exciting, with original plots. God rewards hard work. I like the character of the protagonist, who is smart and hard-working. How can the soul of a Chinese friend not have the word "volume"? Roll up Hogwarts [eat melon]. The heroine should be Luna, but unfortunately Luna has not yet entered school, so she does not have many roles. I hope that after Luna enters school, the heroine's role can be increased, and she can explore the magical world with the protagonist, take adventures together, and show Luna's shining point, and by the way, she will be given sweets [learned]. And we must maintain a single heroine [like]! Maintain the current quality of the novel. I think this book is definitely worth 9 points or more.

It's pretty good. I've read a lot of hp fanfics. This one was written around the protagonist. The other hps are almost the same. The main plot is still the same. The main plot of this original book has become a branch plot and will hardly be involved. The newly written main plot doesn't look boring. It's good to add my own things.

The plot is very exciting. It combines the original HP novel, Fantastic Beasts and Hogwarts Legacy and other elements. The main and branch lines are intertwined to create a unique path to becoming stronger, and it also solves some regrets. There are many details, and it can be seen that the author knows a lot about the magical world and has done deep research, which makes him feel very immersed. The character creation is also perfect. The protagonist is very charming, very smart and studious, pure and pure Ravenclaw, but not a nerd. The emotional line is very well written (Tiantiantian). It is not superfluous. The family gives the protagonist the motivation and strength to become stronger. The protagonist of this book is not closely related to the Iron Triangle of the original work, so the perspective of experiencing the plot of the original work is different from theirs, and you will have a completely new experience. I read it for 6 hours one day, and I forgot to eat and sleep. This book is fascinating. I only know it after reading it. The writing is so immersive. The author's research on the HP world has reached its peak and he has his own unique understanding, as if this knowledge really exists.

The writing is good and there is nothing sinister about it. Getting along with Luna is sweet enough. The characters are well understood. The key is not to stick around the protagonist. It is a good book and I look forward to updating it.

This is not a fanfic that changes the story, but changes the main line of the original novel to the main line, and the character is very delicately portrayed. Snape treats the protagonist from a questioning and disgusting mood, to shock, to appreciation, and later to pride. A series of details made me feel that Snape appeared alive in front of me. The fly in the ointment is that the author can try to maintain the form of cb instead of cp from the two protagonists. They are still children now. It is not too late to develop a relationship after graduation (in fact, I prefer cb instead of pseudo-orthopedics) [Blow kiss]

Oh my God, my God, my God, my God! ! ! I really like this real little eagle! I feel that Ravenclaw is really rare in fan fiction. I was very happy when I saw this book and decided to give you a 5-star review.

I think it's well written, but why doesn't anyone read it? Personally, I quite like Luna as the protagonist. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The best Harry Potter fandom is not Long Aotian's cool writing, but the delicate writing style, the control of the character's personality, coupled with the relaxed and humorous writing style. This is a good Harry Potter fanfic. It is not a story-telling formula, but a small story in life. The author of this book has very well grasped the style that I think Harry Potter should be written in, and also wrote the character of the protagonist very well. Harry Potter fandom should not be fast-paced, but should be gradual and slow.

Goldfinger is the ancient magic and Obscurus in the game "Hogwarts Legacy". The protagonist rarely participates in the activities of the protagonist group, and the heroine is suspected to be Luna. The protagonist studies hard and is well received by teachers, who also gives some private lessons. The current update is to the middle of the first grade, and Quirrell has not gone to the Forbidden Forest.

What can I say, there is a reason for the high scores. The writing is good, the plot is warm and peaceful, and the magic is expanded. All very well written. The research on curses, potions, souls, etc. Are all well-founded. Unlike other novels, where the protagonist understands a curse in one sentence. This article shows you the causes, consequences, foreshadowing, explanations, and principles of enlightenment. And the writing is not far-fetched. Ps: What I also like most is that finally an author has written a protagonist who cares about the research of transformation magic. The best HP fanfics in my mind should be like this: without changing the original characters, without talking about the original spells, potions, etc., The story of the protagonist is described, so that the protagonist (author) can add magic to his heart's content and expand the magical world. At least it shouldn't be violent, randomly changing characters, or molding others into bad characters for the sake of the protagonist. The author of this article did a very good job and was able to perfectly integrate the story of the protagonist he wanted to write into the plot of Harry Potter, as if the protagonist was a character in the original work, and also fully supplemented the plot details of the original work. Okay, I can't say anything more. Ravenclaw + ten points!

I must say that the plot is very natural, and some of the small details made my nose sore. They are so touching inadvertently. I learned something about the writing. It is very good, beautiful, and I love reading it. I will urge you to update it [sending heartfelt wishes]

A rational, high-IQ, high-execution protagonist, the emotional and master-disciple lines are so heart-warming! It's a miracle that Snape can take the initiative to add points, and that Quirrell can take the initiative to protect him... The magic system is also quite fresh, and the combination of work and rest can also lead to the rhythm of winning the Academy Cup and Quidditch Cup. Our Eagle Academy is rising!

I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics and this one definitely ranks in the top five. Whether it's the character's personality or the setting of the character, it both fits the original work and has its own original plot design. It's a great read. I hope the author can update it more.

1. The author's writing style is very simple and elegant, which suits my taste very well. I came here from the previous book "Martial Arts Professor", but I didn't expect that this one is of higher quality. And Luna and Vizette knocked me to death [shy][shy][shy] 2. Weizet's character image is very distinct, and the studious little eagle simply fulfills my fantasy of a male god. The author's detailed description is very good, and it is also a very good timeline that I have not seen for Potter. There is also the heroine Luna. When I watched the movie, I thought she was very beautiful and had a good personality. It's just that when I read novels, Hermione is basically the heroine. So the author thinks this is unique [thinking][thinking][thinking] 3. But there is one thing that is not good. Why is the author updating so slowly? Please work harder and update five chapters every day! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] Finally, I wish you a happy new year and all the best!

The best Harry Potter fan fiction to date. The background setting combines "Fantastic Beasts" and "Hogwarts Legacy", abandoning the brainless main line of the original work. The protagonist is fictional, separated from the original trio, and does not interfere with the main plot development. The second creation is reasonable, and the magic theory is novel and logical. The treatment of the original characters is extremely restored! Not broken at all! It also reshaped the image of many perfunctory characters in the original work (the ones who play Quirrell are all good guys), focused on the marginal characters of the original work (the heroine Luna, the mischievous twins, the full-level druid Neville and his girlfriend (?) The iron hat king Hannah Abbott, the glorious young master Draco), and even changed the plot development of Umbridge (personal opinion, don't like it if you don't like it) Damn, I don't like the original Toad either, but the book has not developed into the fifth semester, and Umbridge has not officially appeared. She has no grudges with the protagonists, so the current treatment of Umbridge is reasonable), and the relationship between the characters is gradual (there is a slight flaw. Minister Fudge collapsed too quickly, and he was written as an absolute low-end villain). Overall, this book is an excellent choice for those who are not satisfied with the original Harry Potter books. I highly recommend reading it!

I think this book is unique among Harry Potter fanfics, written in such a way that it penetrates people's hearts like a breath of fresh air. This book really needs to be read slowly, instead of just casually reading it and making blind comments. Some people didn't even read it for half an hour before starting to slander it. This book does not revolve around Harry, but uses the special identity of the protagonist Obscurus to provide a unique description of the soul and emotions. The protagonist uses his own emotions to warm the people around him and make the people around him make positive changes. For example, the relationship between Harry, Ron and Hermione became united very early, and Albus also looked directly at his past, especially Professor Kino who was willing to suffer the torture of Voldemort for the protagonist, and finally took action like Voldemort for the protagonist. The Kino in this book is completely different from those in other books. He is given more flesh and blood. He will ask for help from people nearby. He also shows the knowledge that a Ravenclaw academic master should have without being useless. It is the delicate description of emotions that makes this book really worth reading carefully. It can add fireworks to your daily life and heal yourself. I really like novels that tell the characters' daily lives in a trickle like this. I hope the author can take his time to write the next chapter, because a novel that describes inner emotions needs to be polished carefully, and slow work yields meticulous work. I also hope that the author can be liked by everyone. I stocked up on chapters from January to September, and I'm still not satisfied after reading them. The author's writing style is really excellent, and the psychological environment of different characters is described very delicately. The battle has the passion and excitement of a boy's writing, and the daily descriptions also have the small charm of a girl's writing. The author must have really watched the Harry Potter novels and movies many times. The detailed descriptions in them seem to bring people into a real magical world. The detailed settings for potions, spells, and magical creatures are immersive. After reading this Hogwarts fan work, it is really difficult to read many subsequent works of the same type. After all, how can I eat coarse grains after eating fine chaff? [Shy] I hope the author really doesn't mess up the work. It's really hard to see such an excellent work. Come on!

Let me talk about the overall feeling first. It can be said to be the best Harry Potter fan fiction I have ever read. The understanding of the original work is very profound. It can be said that the author's own creative elements and understanding of the novel were added to the novel without changing the original work to the greatest extent. In terms of text, the writing style of this novel is very faithful to the original work, making me feel like I was watching Harry Potter in high school. In addition, the author captured the characters very well in the novel's characters and their way of speaking. It can be seen that he had a very careful analysis of the original characters before writing. Finally, in terms of the innovation of the novel's plot, the protagonist can be said to be very naturally integrated into the plot. Unlike other Harry Potter fan novels that allow the protagonist to advance the plot from a God's perspective, the plot is pushed forward through the protagonist's own analysis of existing clues. In this regard, this book can be said to be completely different from all time travel fan novels and is very worthy of praise and encouragement from readers. Finally, here are my suggestions for reading this book. You cannot read it as fast as other Tomato novels. You need to have the same patience as reading the original "Harry Potter" in a foreign country, and taste it slowly. I believe that many book friends have not read slowly in Tomato for a long time. This is a high-quality novel that can bring you back the feeling of reading novels before. Five-star praise is given [please update] There are not many readers for a novel with so many words. I think the profit from this book is not as high as that of Shuang Wen. I can only say that the author really wants to tell the whole story.

A very good novel. The author has a very deep and clear understanding of various settings in HP, especially magic and potions. People have to wonder whether the author is really a wizard, and he must be a very, very good one. I just saw the latest chapter. It's really hardcore. If the author didn't update it that day, he must have been arrested by the Ministry of Magic. The last time I saw such a hard-core work was a dragon novel. One thing they have in common is that the authors tried to teach me magic.

A good novel. First, there is no male protagonist Long Aotian, no male protagonist crazy dog, no male protagonist psychotic, but a calm, intelligent, and very talented male protagonist. Second, he has no diaosi mentality, is very humble, polite, elegant, gentleman, and has good interpersonal relationships. The key is, work hard and don't show off. Third, the story setting is very good. Some of the original plot settings are retained, and the male protagonist is also used to connect the plots designed by himself. Fourth, the story follows the hero's own story, and the trio are just classmates of the hero, without deliberately highlighting the three of them. So it didn't become a nanny story, which was great. Fifth, the heroine Luna is smart, wise, not surprised, and not violent, so she is very good. I really like this kind of male protagonist. This is the second book I've seen with a particularly good protagonist and story.

One of my favorite Harry Potter fan creations! ! ! The background of the story is very grand! The expanded narrative based on the original work is very attractive! The plot setting is wonderful and reasonable! The character setting is also very consistent! There is no OOC situation, especially the little angel Luna! My favorite character in Harry Potter is brought to life in this book! Madam, Madam, it touches my heart so much! I absolutely love the cp scenes between the protagonist and Luna! It's killing me. I hope the author won't give up on this couple. If you like Harry Potter and Sister Luna, you will definitely love this book! If you like Harry Potter fan creations, don't miss it! It has a unique and exclusive story line, and it integrates very well with the original work! Come and experience becoming a powerful wizard in this book, experience the emotional interaction with Luna, and experience the ups and downs but wonderful story! I wish the author better and better, and thank you for bringing such a wonderful story. As long as you are in good health, I also hope to update more~[Top post][Please update][Send heartfelt messages]

What I like most is that after the protagonist has learned something, he can use what he has learned to help many people, such as solving lycanthropy, enabling Squibs to use magic, developing soul-healing techniques, and in the first grade, with the help of Old Deng, he fought against the noseless monster to save Professor Quirrell, etc. The interaction with Si when teaching potions was also very interesting. Moreover, many of the author's settings, as well as many of the magical theories that appear in the middle, are relatively self-consistent and very comfortable to watch (the author completely ignores the "Wizards' Statute of Secrecy" and probably escaped from Azkaban). Getting along with Luna is very sweet, looking at the corpse makes me feel warm [laughing evilly]

One of my favorite HP fans. First of all, the setting of magic in this book is very novel and convincing (at least it can convince me), and it is not a very brainless setting. At the same time, these settings also have a certain depth and contain sincere emotions, which makes people feel comfortable watching them. For example, adding emotion to food. This is common in food articles, but combine this with magic and it makes perfect sense. Secondly, this book also does a good job in describing the characters. The daily life of the hero and heroine before was very warm, not depressing, and made people feel extremely reserved, as if it was a light sweet cream, not greasy, bitter or depressing (at least so far). The characters of the male protagonist and female protagonist are also quite likable, especially the male protagonist, who is gentle but does not feel hypocritical at all, treats others with humility, and is talented but not arrogant. The author is also very capable ヾ(≧∇≦*)ヾ who can write this type of protagonist in such a way that I don't feel hypocritical at all. In short, this book combines the magic setting of HP fans with the warmth of light novels. In my opinion, it should be good. (First time commenting, please don't comment if you don't like it) (Come on, author!)

Very well thought out Although it is the same as the main plot of the original work But the characters blended in perfectly The dialogue is well written. Professor Quirrell in the first part was very well written. What Luna writes is also very spiritual.

I have just read the chapter "The Chamber of Secrets" for the time being. Unlike other HP fans who keep changing the soup without changing the medicine, the author uses the identity of Obscurus to write a different protagonist in this HP world. He is no longer the savior's little follower but has flesh and blood and his own story. Moreover, the author has a deep understanding of HP. The world knows that many places have their own unique opinions and there are no very OOC situations. Personally, I feel that there is a slight shortcoming in that there is too little interaction with Luna (at least for the time being, it may be because I am still young. It is estimated that there will be more emotional lines in the Goblet of Fire. I will come back to comment later)

To be honest, this book is pretty good. The author combines the original work with the Hogwarts Legacy game, and then expands it, making it a very innovative read. And I love the single heroine Luna so much! I hope the author will work hard and give five stars whenever the protagonist gets married. [Cool]

Very well written. It was the author who was trying to teach me how to use magic, probably half the time. Then the author discovered that the root of magic has nothing to do with the power of the heart. The magic setting of this book is more scientific. Experimental record analysis and summary, always using science to explain magic. There is a feeling of forcibly disbanding with a lot of pen and ink.

In my opinion, the two most difficult aspects of fandom are: 1. Follow the world view of the original work, and tell different stories based on different stories and different angles that fit the original work. 2. According to the character of the original work, different ways of speaking and different ways of doing things are given, which leads to different changes in the fate of the characters. I think the author has done a very good job. The characters are vivid enough and have the charm of the original work. The overall logic of potions and magic is online, and the analogies when teaching magic potions are really rich!

Although it's not quite to my taste, this is indeed an excellent fan novel that breaks away from ordinary fan fiction and follows the plot. This book really takes the concept of magic seriously. Great