HP Parent Generation: Merlin Is on Top!

The characters of James and Sirius are well mastered! The gradual progression and foreshadowing on the emotional line is also logical. The most praiseworthy thing is that a first-grade boy pays too much attention to the girl he likes but doesn't realize that he likes it. There is no separation at all. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future! !

A very nice fanfic! Snape was really that kind of damned person inside. The main plot feels so pitiful, but that doesn't stop his little thoughts from being really dark. Holmes's character is very stubborn. Lily was also a very good little girl. If he hadn't died, I wouldn't have thought what a lively and cheerful little boy Harry would have been. The thing that surprises me the most is Sirius. Every time I think about Merlin's words and actions, I really want to go in and give him two big mouths, but from God's perspective, I feel that he is a little bit pitiful, pitiful and pitiful, but Merlin should not be soft-hearted, humiliate him severely, and let the young master know what the real dangers of the world are. Everyone in it has personality traits, so is Martin really the Martin in Variety Martin? He has so few scenes that I forget about him and Crouch as I watch them. Madam, you are a little cake who is very good at writing novels_(:зゝ∠)_

It's really good😭 I can only say that I'm really surprised to see such a good-looking HP fanfic on Tomato. The plot is very attractive and sometimes the teacher's clever metaphors make me laugh out loud. After reading it, I still feel unsatisfied and want to update again. The main reason is that the teacher's writing of James is really cute and charming. I really fell in love with it! . . . 💖💖💖

From the current point of view, this book is really comparable to the Orange Light masterpiece. Here are a few points. 1. The whole process will not revolve around the love story between the female protagonist and the male protagonists. It will have certain thoughts and things of its own, and its own story. The daily life is really interesting. 2. The insights into the male protagonists are very thorough. This was the first time I was shocked when reading a book. It made me feel that the people I liked before might just be my own imagination and characters, but in this novel I felt that they really existed. 3. The distribution of favorability is very reasonable. For example, in the part about Regulus, children who grow up in pure-blood families will indeed feel this way. After all, they are always surrounded by such people. But Merlin is a person who has been reincarnated countless times from the future. She comes with good intentions, so of course she is different from them. ! (The one about Sirius is also very reasonable and made me think again about Sirius' life experience.) All in all, it really impressed me! ! ! Renew! ! I will be back to review! ! [Send heart] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Listening to books while working, I am often laughed at by Merlin and other children. It is really cute. I personally like the line with Lily better. What is this? Lily? Take a breath... Merlin's portrayal is very charming. I remember Merlin once said that Lily should be able to accomplish what she wants, instead of dying in her twenties after becoming an affectionate background (similar). I think Merlin is an emotional and compassionate person but unable to change (sad) Besides, I really like the name Merlin, it feels like it can create miracles~

It's really amazing that I saw the most appetizing HP article on Tomato. Most HP articles are very OOC and lack that flavor. I have read countless tweets. Either they are very white or the style is very boring. I don't like them. The quality of many people's articles is not high, but this one is very good. It has that feeling and I really like the setting of this article. The strategy game is really interesting. The Potter in this article makes me get his charm for the first time. I think the real James should be like this. Sirius' secret love also makes me feel very moved. Looking forward to the change in darkening value. Remus also likes me very much. He is very good-looking and deserves better.

It is my imaginary parent generation, and it realistically describes the conflicts and frictions between friends. The little daily life is very heart-warming. There is very little description of the family members in the original work. Almost a few lines determine the life of this person. We can only imagine their life in a few words. The author's writing is very beautiful and true. The last time I liked the movie "The Predators" that I liked so much was Orange Light's "The Predators". Unfortunately, it was discontinued...

I also read many chapters before commenting. Sometimes I feel that the character design may be a bit broken, but the author later saves it. I think Merlin is a very good girl, and she gets along well with everyone. When James confessed her love in public, I also dug my toes for her. The author's writing is really good, and the characters are very good. It's very vivid and makes me feel like it's a real Hogwarts. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages, but I always feel that Merlin is a very painful person. Maybe it's because I only watched half of it. Everyone makes mistakes. I always feel that everyone's characters are awkward. Maybe it's from my perspective as a bystander. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥Please don't curse. I feel that the heroine is inexplicable. James and the others bully their classmates. The heroine is angry with them for a while, and then easily forgives them. I like this happened twice. There is no cp in this article, but the troubles are the same as if there is cp. Although it is an otome, I always feel that some plots are weird. The part about kissing Sirius was really baffling.

My husband wrote it so well... The best HP parent generation. Every character has no OOC at all. Everyone has their own personality and the writing is smooth and natural. I rely on this book during my vacation. Also, can I update ten chapters a day (whisper) Will you be sanctioned (banned) if you score too high? I will keep the score high! ! Also, I really like daily articles like this)) It's very relaxing, happy and warm. Everyone is very cute! It's like a big family. Please be sure to update! !

The writing is very good, and the story is very warm. It is depressing and healing at the same time, because Baby Merlin has escaped for a long time, which is very similar to my mental state at a certain stage, but James often heals me. The character of James is well created and fits the original work very well. He is the best James among the many fanfics I have seen. The character of Snape is also well written, not OOC. Although I don't like Snape, it is undeniable that the author analyzed his character very well. Real people are so complicated. I can only say that Baby Merlin will scold a lot. But I personally feel that Gao Kaiping is gone. It's so boring and depressing later on. Part of Merlin's character has quietly collapsed. I don't know if it can be better in the future.

God, I just discovered such a good-looking novel. It's so good. There are few stories about the family's generation that are so good-looking. Come on! I have modified the follow-up review, I want to see the reading time after my N refresh!

I have always wanted to read this kind of text with options, and I also like cool stories, but it felt awkward to combine them. I couldn't figure out what kind of text I wanted to read. Until I saw this book, it was really amazing! The author's writing style is amazing and the logic is clear. It has always been a cheerful and relaxing atmosphere. All in all, I like it very much! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Sirius really made me laugh to death. Merlin didn't even realize that he liked him until the end of the text [sneaky laugh] (I drank both, but the tsundere Sirius and the wooden Merlin are really a perfect match) By the way, when will the author release a side story about Sirius and Merlin? This pair really kills me [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! Little Angel Lily is worthy of being the royal palace! ! ! ! Everyone else will hurt Merlin, but Lily is so gentle from the beginning to the end. No matter which college Merlin is from, there will be no prejudice (the deer and the dog are really... [Pointing]) I am not a protagonist, but Merlin is my favorite character in so many years of reading novels [Sending my heart] I feel sorry for Merlin, I hope Merlin can realize his wish and go home soon [Blow a kiss]

I just finished reading The Story of My Generation and I couldn't help but want to comment. Such a delicious book actually exists. . It is no exaggeration to say that this is the best HP fanfic I have ever read. Because the original work mainly describes the offspring generation, so before I read fanfics, I always read the offspring generation. This book made me really fall in love with the people of the parent generation. . Following Merlin's perspective, I seemed to see them living in that era, their happiness, pain, and struggles. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and every emotional line is written very deliciously and naturally. If you put in the heart-stirring scene of any male guest, you will also be moved by Merlin. Who wouldn't love her after all, the greatest magician - Merlin! I've read the entire article now! After reading the Slytherin if line, I want to sigh again at the many foreshadowings! However, I still recommend watching the Slytherin if-line extra before watching other extras. Because after reading the Slytherin if line, I suddenly felt resentful towards people from my own generation. After all, it was from Merlin's perspective, and this if line showed their shortcomings vividly. Of course, people's personalities are diverse. The emotions of all the male guests can be described in one lyric: "Self-esteem often drags people down and makes love take twists and turns." I would like to add one more paragraph, that is, the scene where I felt the heartbeat of the male guest the most was when Merlin said "Little Black, the glory belongs to you" when giving Regulus flowers. God, a pure-blood family heir who is to some extent his brother's "replacement", an idealist who has truly been pursuing glory all his life, really wouldn't be attracted to Merlin like this? Finally, I hope Merlin will always be happy! !

It is a very delicate emotional description, and the person-to-person perspective change is very natural. It does not follow the route of mindless group petting. If there are differences in three views, there will be conflicts and disagreements. The author's writing is very real. I have relatively few relatives. It is rare to see such a good-looking book. There are no surprises. The most important thing is that the author's sense of planning under control makes me feel at ease. Everyone, feel free to speak up. By the way, ask the author if the baby is a J person (super low voice) Damn, it's really not enough. I wanted to put up with it before but every chapter after senior year is wonderful. I can't help but look at that shitty yellow button every day [crying][crying][crying]

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most down-to-earth, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most honest and frank, most simple and simple, closest to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up gorgeousness. The vocabulary does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be sophisticated, and does not add unnecessary cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. The whole process is in plain language, without any subtlety or covering up. Every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple and unsophisticated. Hua's expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that it contains no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and so popular that it is popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and frank without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without paving the way. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

The character creation in the original work is very delicate, and there is nothing OOC about it. The original Martin is also very good. However, what I am most amazed about in the whole text is the protagonist-Merlin. The author's portrayal of her is very rich and three-dimensional, just like a real person living in the world: thoughts and thoughts. , Personal three views, one's own wishes... From being alone to having people standing behind me, to finally realizing all of myself and always believing in myself, every epiphany is a chopping of the thorns of the past, thus cleaving mountains and rivers, moving towards the inner self, moving towards growth, and approaching success. What can I say, I originally just opened this book with a cp mentality. After reading it, I felt that my heart was shocked. I have never seen a character as good as Merlin... Likewise, what kept me reading more than 900 chapters was of course the author's great writing style! The whole text is almost never dropped, the descriptions used are very interesting, full of humor, and the heart-stirring plot is also very immersive (especially when you stay up late listening to the novel and imagining it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) ✧ Please don't imitate here too often!). When Merlin was injured, I couldn't help but grin while listening to the description. It's very humanistic, and occasionally details are included. What impressed me deeply is: in St. Mungo's, when Lily peeled an apple, other authors usually just mention it in one sentence, but the author wrote that the peeled apple fell to the ground, and Lily bent down to pick it up. When I was listening to the book, I was really surprised. A good book does not lie in the lofty words it uses, but in the details everywhere, not only the apple peel just listed, but also the delicate psychology and subtle movements... In short, forgive me for the general use of words, it is far from as good as I feel! So if you are a book lover with the same interest, please read this book, it must be a treasure for you!

Author, you are so good-looking, so temperamental, so beautiful, with a natural beauty, white teeth and red lips, a frown and a frown, like a water hibiscus, graceful and graceful, with a beautiful natural beauty, petite and exquisite, a peerless beauty, picturesque eyebrows, clear eyebrows, as beautiful as a crown jade, a flowery face, a charming face, bright teeth, thousands of charming eyes, charming, alluring, a moth. Eyebrows, like flowers and jade, eyes cut like water, slim and graceful, immortal appearance, Xiaojiabiyu, beautiful and intelligent, young peaches and plums, graceful and graceful, hands like soft jade, beautiful flowers shy of the moon, water lotus, natural beauty, gentle and charming, beautiful and moving, noble and cool, gorgeous than all the flowers, clear eyebrows and eyes, beautiful as a fairy, smart as ice and snow, gentle and pleasant, beautiful as a fairy , Falling wild geese sinking fish, closed moon shy flowers, orchid-like heart, bright eyes and white teeth, pure ice, pure national beauty, fragrant like flowers and jade, elegant and graceful, as graceful as a giant, as graceful as a swimming dragon, showing off its beauty, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, full of spring color, natural beauty, fragrant national color, I feel pity when I see it, Wandering moth eyebrows, Xiaojia Jasper, apricot face and peach cheeks, warm color, elegant face, apricot rain and pear clouds The saliva of the jade beads, the likes and dislikes of Yan Chi, the fishes and wild geese are falling, it is appropriate to be angry and happy, the hibiscus in the distant mountains is of peerless beauty, the lingering clouds are beautiful, it is suitable to be happy, it is appropriate to be angry, if the shoulders are cut into shape, the waist is as plain as expected, the neck is long and elegant, the beauty is exposed, the fragrance is not added, the lead is beautiful, the lips are bright, the teeth are white, the sweet girl of the Zuo family, the willow of Zhangtai, the golden house of Gillian, spring is as deep as the sea, the colorful clouds are easy to disperse. Brilliant purples and reds, beauty and magnificence, extremely beautiful, beauty and brilliance, bright eyebrows and white teeth, bright eyes and white teeth, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the moon, the beautiful woman, the natural beauty, the wisdom and the orchid heart, the appearance and the wisdom, the dark fragrance and full sleeves, the hibiscus out of the water, the fish and the wild goose, the country and the city, the gentle and graceful, the charming, the manners, the beauty. The beauty of the country, the beauty of the moon, the beauty of the moon, the bright eyes and white teeth, the light sweep of Emei, the beauty and beauty, the fragrant skin, the exquisite and exquisite manners, the graceful wind, the beauty of the world, the graceful grace, the beauty of the moon, the beauty of the moon, the outstanding grace, the look and the flow, the pure silk entangled and swaying, the beauty is like a fairy, the beauty is healing, delicate and elegant, the most beautiful and beautiful. She has water-cut eyes, she is stunningly beautiful, she has immortal jade bones, she is charming and beautiful, so please update another episode! ! [Shy][shy][shy] It's so beautiful, wow wow, it makes me so happy to see it! ! It kills me! !

I like it very much, I feel every plot is very vivid and real When I read this book, I felt depressed all the time. Although it was very happy until now, I still felt very heavy when I saw Merlin's experience described by the author (maybe because I am an out-and-out heroine?) When I saw this, I felt that this book had abandoned all the shell of joy, and inside it was the tragedy of Merlin. She was just a high school student, but she was forced to suffer such torture. I like to pay attention to the inner emotions of the female protagonist. I don't care about male protagonists other than the female protagonist. I rarely read books written by my parents, but this book is indeed very charming. This is also the first time I write such a medium-length review I don't like tragedies myself, but this book made me become more and more courageous. It's very addictive. The HP articles I have seen before are basically cool articles, focusing on describing the heroine killing everyone. I am not saying that this type of article is bad, but it is just that the heroine's inner monologue rarely appears, or even if it does, it is not realistic. I feel like this book is quite good in this regard. It makes me feel that Merlin is a living person. The daily descriptions of long flowing water make me very comfortable. All in all, this is a very good book₍˄·͈༝·˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It doesn't add too many gimmicks that distract from the main attraction, and it breaks away from the competition for eye-catching and focuses on polishing the content. It is a type that people who like it will like very much. You can see the conception process of many plots in the comments and remarks. Almost every paragraph of creative ideas in the back of the book is very clear and logical, and there is a lot of writing. It has been a long time since I have seen an author who treats his work with such care. The author's style is very down-to-earth. It is a simple and powerful hexagon with no shortcomings. It feels like he scored very high in liberal arts when he was in school.) He is also very good at describing content with a strong sense of picture. Although I am not literate and can't boast any nutritious words, I write an evaluation and write it like reading comprehension, but in short it is very powerful and I have the highest respect. . After quietly running back and reading it again, after reading the whole story, I felt that the characters were very multi-faceted and the development of the emotional lines was also very reasonable. I could feel that their irrational part as human beings was really too strong. . And I feel that the author is very good at discovering cute points and each plot is very palatable. . I eat eat eat

After watching the ending again, I really want to say long live James Potter 10,000 times. He is always sincere but also has a bit of a yandere-like white-cut black feel. It's cute and cute. Who knew that when I finally saw the ending, I thought when I opened the window, it would be Potter riding a broomstick outside the window! ! ! This book is really the most comfortable one I have read in Tomato. There is no OOC in the whole text, and it can be seen that the author is very serious. The character of Merlin is very rich, and he often mentions some historical jokes. The most outstanding part of this book is James and Sirius. , I really ah ah ah ah ah, the main concept of love in the whole book really poked me... This abnormal love is so cool, and the overall view is also very, very good to be honest. Mary's branch ending is too powerful, and so is Lily. I can't stand Lily at all. . . But this book is completely like, I wish you well. There were many moments when I thought that Merlin had fallen in love with Lily. Lily was in a completely different position from the beginning to anyone else, but neither of them realized that they had fallen in love. The stage between friendship and love was so strong that Lily was so strong. When she first learned about the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix, she said, "Didn't I do it too?" Haven't I spoken for you either? And Merlin said to Lily, I just hope you can be happy, I hope you will always be Lily Evans. Also, when I gained Dumbledore's trust, I was really stunned. How could it be so ordinary? Maybe this achievement will appear when Merlin is born and die, maybe it will be similar to the scene of the Patronus Curse of always in Snape's original work that is powerfully proved with magic, but in the end Merlin only used one sentence, the flower language of lily of the valley is happy return. But it's very, very reasonable, that's right, because Dumbledore believed in the power of love the most. I really remembered that there were so many details. In a word, this book was a joy to read. As I read and followed it, I thought it had written a lot, but in fact it was only over 700 chapters. It can be seen that the content is really brilliant, and it is really not enough to read. The pace of the subsequent plots is obviously faster, but the author probably only intended to write about the family generation at the beginning, so it is understandable that the later chapters are not so complete, and when I saw the ancestor generations, I couldn't stand it at all. . . . I always think about James. . . . . Last but not least, in this book, Snape is really a dank guy. It is rare to see Snape who is not OOC. I really want the author to write more about him, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. He is still 90% awkward. I beg the author to write more about him. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh The author's update time has changed. It used to be fixed at around 11 to 12 o'clock [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I still want to read it, but one chapter will be updated every day. It's great. I want to ask when the ending is planned.

I really like this book [][]. It is really the most interesting book among all the HP new generations I have read, especially the interaction between James and Merlin [adoration][adoration][adoration] (I hold the banner for James and Merlin [shy]) James is a very It's really touching that an arrogant person can make a change for Merlin🥹 (James is a passionate big dog), not only the interaction between James and Merlin, but also the interactions with other characters are very, very sweet [adoration][adoration][adoration], the author really can't get enough of it! So pretty! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] If you don't watch it, you will really regret it [eating melon] Look how long I've been watching [shy]

I would like to call it the ceiling of HP novels! ! My wife's writing style is very good, very interesting, the characters are well created, and the emotions are delicate. Some of the HP novels are too Mary Sue, which makes me dig my toes to the ground. This one is just right! To be honest, I was a bit shy at first, but Sirius had just started to meet Da, so he really should have been allowed to learn how to speak, but things got much better later on, and everyone was growing up. I have to say that the chapters of Elixir of Fortune really almost made me laugh to death, supporting the great Merlin's election as Minister of Magic! ! It's been a long time since I finished it, and I still feel like I'm withdrawing [crying]

I just started reading some comments, I will probably change them in the future. I feel that the setting is very comprehensive and detailed. The heroine is very righteous and has her own ideas, and is also very firm and clear-headed. And I really like this emotional line, especially Remus and Lily! I just watched a little bit about this Sirius who is so awkward. He is an invincible and awkward young man. He is just waiting to chase his wife [smirking] James is also a bit frivolous and fearless. He is a typical Gryffindor. However, I just like Remus's character and I like the werewolf setting so I am partial to Remus. I will wait and see what happens with Sirius's popularity [smirking] The stubborn black dog.

I watched it for a long time, it's so awesome! ! ! The women in the author's works are very charismatic, and the whole book is full of perfect Mary Sues who are not OOC. I think the author must have a very deep understanding of the characters, very objective and real. I really hated it at first (I was attracted by it at the time, but in the early days, Sirius was like a psycho. After reading more than ten chapters, I felt very boring and couldn't stand it anymore. I took the opportunity to continue reading, and the slow-burning becomes more exciting as it goes on!!!

How long has it been since I read a novel that has fluent language and complete logic, where the author and readers communicate closely about character settings and plot settings, and even commissions manuscripts to feed the readers? Well, and it really restores the 1971 atmosphere of college discrimination and fighting with each other. Anyway, the heroine Merlin's fists are as powerful as her magic. The setting of Game B is presented in the form of end-of-chapter achievement prompts and game tips. It's so novel but so cute that it makes you roll. More importantly, there are more than 500 chapters written from the first grade to after graduation. The content of the text is comparable to Hogwarts Mystery, and many game literature internet memes are also interspersed in it, which is very suitable. Fall in love with

The characters in this book are definitely the most consistent with the original work I have ever read! ! The characters of the pro-age era all have flaws in their personalities. In this aspect, the author describes them very appropriately, but they were all successfully tamed by Merlin later on. In addition, the heroine Merlin's character traits are also very distinct! Hot on the outside and cold on the inside (I really like this one), subconsciously protecting the weak, and achieving a perfect ending has become an obsession. The character design of the original character Martin is also very touching! In the real world, his mind was not normal. After many reincarnations, he went completely crazy. The only light left to maintain his sanity was Merlin. Really hope they both get back to the real world. The overall writing is very good! The writing style is humorous, so you won't lose money if you invest in it! It's finished. It's so well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Check the reading time

It's so beautiful. The author's control over the characters' personalities is really amazing. It feels like they are not just characters in the novel, but real people. Everyone has their own unique personality and will not be stereotyped. The characters will not become brainless just because they love the heroine (not counting James, who is a love brain). , Giving up one's true character, not becoming a tool to compete for favors, not OOC at all, and retaining one's own characteristics. At first, I thought two million words was a bit much, but later I realized that it was not enough. I really couldn't bear to read such a beautiful article. The disadvantage is that after reading it, I can't stand other fanfics. It's really amazing. Who knows, I, a person who has never read first-person novels, accepted and fell in love with first-person novels because of this book

Damn, it looks good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] After reading it, I felt like there was an empty space in my heart. Every day when I come home from school, I look forward to Merlin's next story. More than 900 chapters were read in the blink of an eye. Merlin! Like it very much The music paired by the author is also a great match, making me feel like I really connected with them. Ahhhh Sirius In Chapter 21 of Slytherin if line, what Sirius said I will inherit the Black family, but on one condition Crouch must die ! ! ! Damn it, [blowing kiss][sending heart] Who understands my 51 hours

Oh my God! This book is very good-looking. Merlin's character is humorous and interesting, but also a little bit shabby. She is also very thoughtful. She is not a good person in the traditional sense. She has her own likes and dislikes, and the other characters are not OOC. It's great. Maybe the front part (I only know the few sides of this setting) is a little bit not interesting (but it is still interesting). It is really very good-looking\(//∇//)\[][][][] I'm really glad that I read this book early and gave it a full score and posted a review, otherwise I would have unconscionably given a low score to suppress it. This book can be called a masterpiece. The emotional lines are really natural and come naturally, and the text has a sense of humor (a sense of humor that is full of connotation and originality, ps: I am really fed up with some bad jokes), and every plot point is also very logical. Every detail has a corresponding reason. The end of the if line is actually the beginning of the text. It feels like the reincarnation of fate. Everyone's conversation and actions are in line with everyone's personality (regardless of men and women, even Merlin from different colleges). The heroine has attributes. It is based on his own growth path and he is not aggrieved. The characters stand up. It can really be seen that the author has a profound writing skills and has his own unique aesthetic (whether it is plot development, character design or environmental description, how can he integrate the three elements of the novel? Bushi , this is really different, ps: I got good songs from the author 😁) and he has and can stick to his own opinions and thinking. I look forward to the next book. I also hope that the author can maintain this state. I also wish the author happiness in this life. Demining: The only thing to pay attention to is to check if the book is not in line with your preferences. If you don't like it, quit as soon as possible and don't make some inexplicable comments (don't worry, there are only a few that will not affect the viewing, but my eyes are smaller than sand). I am really fed up with people who judge the heroine regardless of whether they love women or men.

I think she's very good-looking. At first, I didn't believe that a HP fanfic could have a high score of 9.4, So I clicked on it to see what charm she had. Then I saw her, and she was really good-looking. Let me introduce him (I personally think he wrote a few points very well) 1. The character image is very successful. There is no cosplay at all. At least I don't think there is any cosplay. Compared with some fan fiction, this cosplay is really very restored. 2. The progression of the plot is really appropriate, and there is nothing that makes people feel that it is inconsistent with their cognition. 3. Emotionally, I think the best aspect of the writing is that there is nothing unreasonable about him, and every bit of like has a source. Moreover, when the author wrote the plot point of the first grade, he wrote the behavior (such as pulling a girl's hair) that does not understand his liking for others and only wants to attract other people's attention (such as pulling a girl's hair) very appropriately, without making people feel disconnected. 4. There is no crotch-stretching part in the writing. The above are a few points that I think are well written. If you have anything else, you can add it. Then come and take a look. Really, you won't regret it. It's really good-looking. It will surprise you and make your eyes light up. Come and take a look! ! ! Suddenly it occurred to me that there was still something I hadn't written down. 5. Each character has his or her own image and characteristics. It is not like a matryoshka doll where everyone is the same. Instead, everyone has their own image and characteristics, and they are very distinct and will not be confused at all. It is really well written.