Ye Luoli: When I Contract with Hei Xiangling

Finally, there is an article about Feng Yinsha CP, and it is the kind I love [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

I feel like this book is pretty good, but I just want the heroine to have a bigger golden finger! ! ! ! !

Core highlights: fan settings that break the rules 1. Heixiangling's "counterattack" and reinvention The most poignant thing about this fanfic is that it gives Hei Xiangling a more complete and cherished story. In the original work, she could not find her owner because of her scars and was repeatedly tortured by the plot. However, here the protagonist takes the initiative to contract with her, giving her the warmth of being "firmly chosen". The author's personal design was also very careful. He did not write her as a tool, but instead amplified her gentleness and tenacity, which satisfied many readers' uneasy feelings about this character. 2. Be clear-headed and complain, and refuse the filter of the protagonist group The copywriting directly states "unfriendly to the protagonist group, and will change later", which is very rare in fan fiction. Many Ye Luoli fans will mindlessly whitewash the controversial behavior of the protagonist group, but this article dares to directly complain about the double standards and problems of the protagonist group in the original work. The three views are very clear, such as not whitewashing Wen Qian's school violence, which has received praise from many readers. The protagonists are not static "bad guys". The later changes also make the characters more three-dimensional and avoid the stereotyped writing of black and white. 3. Relaxed and daily oriented, low reading threshold The main theme of the novel is "daily life without plot". It does not force a complicated fairyland war, but is more about the daily life of the protagonist and Hei Xiangling. It is very relaxing and healing to read. Coupled with the setting of "micro-group pet", Hei Xiangling can finally be treated well. This kind of "contrast healing" writing method is very suitable for readers who like to relax with fans and want to see the characters be well loved. 4. Super rich extra linkages, full of benefits The extra story is directly linked to "Balala Little Fairy", "Cute Academy" and "Harry Potter". This kind of cross-circle linkage is very new among fans. It is equivalent to opening an "Easter Egg Copy" for readers. Readers who like these IPs will be twice as happy, and it can also be seen that the author has a lot of imagination. Controversies and minor shortcomings 1. There is a threshold for the original party Because there are a large number of private designs + complaints about the protagonist group, die-hard fans of the original work may feel that it is "ooc" and "disrespectful of the original work". The author also said in advance in the copy "Go away the calf hair, extreme fans will make it thicker", which can be regarded as filtering the audience in advance. Readers who are concerned should be careful. 2. The double-edged sword of "no plot" It is written in a relaxed and everyday way. For readers who want to watch strong plots and intensive entertainment, they may feel that the pace is slow and lacks conflict and tension. It is more suitable for catching fish and relaxing reading before going to bed. 3. Obvious audience bias This article is more suitable for readers who are dissatisfied with the original protagonist group and feel sorry for Hei Xiangling. If you are a die-hard fan of the protagonist group, there is a high probability that you will be dissuaded by the complaints. Readers' reputation and summary Judging from the existing comments, this article has a good reputation among Ye Luoli's fans, and readers generally recognize its three views and its portrayal of Hei Xiangling: The praise focuses on: clear outlook, no whitewashing of controversial characters, Hei Xiangling's portrayal is very touching, and the extra linkage is surprising; The main point of controversy is that the adaptation of the original characters is extensive and not suitable for all original parties. Overall, it is a fanfic with a lot of attitude. It does not follow the trend and write routine and cool articles. Instead, it writes a warm and sober story with a preference for the characters and complaints about the original work. If you also feel sorry for Hei Xiangling in the original work and want to see her treated well and at the same time accept complaints about the protagonists, this article will suit your taste; but if you have a strong filter for the characters in the original work, it is recommended to enter the trap with caution.

How can I put it? It's very beautiful. Although it has some flaws, it's the first time I've seen an author who writes Ye Luoli with such a positive outlook. It's amazing. Keep up the good work! Don't give up, it won't be fun anymore [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

So far, I seem to like them. I have only one request. I like Bai Guangying and Pang Zun very much. Don't tear them apart [crying] [crying]

After high school, the main plot is interspersed with some characters from Ye Luoli. Campus life and fairyland play are interspersed. The most important thing is that it is high school and it is time to fall in love! ! !

It's very interesting. I like it. It would be great if the author could add more updates.

The writing is good, the ending is unexpected and expected, the three views are rare and normal, the problems of fairyland and human beings are solved from a human perspective, and the school violence of Wen Qian and Yeats is not whitewashed, and the extras are not bad!

It looks good. Author, you haven't updated it for 24 hours.

It looks good [like] [like] It's best to tell the water prince to go away and don't disturb my family Lanlan [poke]

I like this book very much. I feel it is different from the others. I will continue to update it. Thank you so much for the author＾0＾

Come on, come on, come on

I like it because it looks so good. Unlike other Ye Luoli, she only knows how to fight.

🌙Protagonist: Wei Lan & Feng Yinsha 🌙Weilan, attributes: wind, ice power 🌙Feng Yinsha, attribute: wood 🌙Xin Ling, represents: space 🌙Hei Xiangling, represents: Fantasy 🌙Golden lotus, represents: wood, gold 🌙Clear water, represents: water 🌙Barren stone, represents: stone 🌙Du Xifei, represents: toxin 🌙Feiling, attributes: none 🌙Zina, attribute: tarot card divination 🌙Luo Li, represents: love 🌙Wang Mo, attribute: flame 🌙Jasmine, represents: dessert 🌙Shu Yan, attribute: time 🌙Blue Peacock, represents: Mirror 🌙Chen Sisi, attribute: ice and snow 🌙Bright color, represents: fluorescence 🌙Jianpeng, attribute: wood 🌙Wen Qian, attribute: gold 🌙Yeats, attribute: confusion 🌙Hua Ling, represents: life 🌙Xiao Yeye, represents: wood 🌙ye, represents: flame 🌙Jin Litong, represents: Jin 🌙Pang Zun, represents: Thunder and Lightning 🌙Shixi, represents: time 🌙Han Bingjing, representative: Bingxue 🌙Yan Jue, represents: Art 🌙Ai Zhen, represents: emotion 🌙Bai Guangying, represents: light and shadow

It's pretty good so far, but it's just a bit lacking [blowing kisses][please update]

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. Wenqian did not wash it all away and also wrote the most annoying ink for me. Basically, she corrected all the shortcomings. The contrast in the writing of flowers and snacks is also eye-catching. All in all highly recommended.

Beautiful and worth recommending.

Come on, it looks great

Like, the three views are correct, to solve the problem of Ye Luoli's Wonderland, we should seek cooperation from the state, and humans should solve the problems of nature by themselves.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit lacking and I didn't see enough.

Super nice fanfic of Ye Luoli

Real,! This is one of the more than 500 books I have read, and it is really great! I also like Heixiangling and Xiaosha very much! After reading it for so long, I actually found that there was no rating [laughing evilly]. I originally planned to write a book by myself, but it turns out that this book is my aesthetic book! [Blowing kiss]

I like it very much, please come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

Ahhhh, it's really beautiful. Everyone has their own path and they are all good. Although we are ordinary and small, we can still shine like stars. I wish you all smooth sailing in your future! We are all walking a different path, and I wish you a bright future!

There are few emotional lines, and the whole text is biased toward daily life. It really makes me laugh at Feng Wei [shy] and then it is a good read. There is not much description of the protagonist group, and the heroine is favored by the world consciousness. The writing style is also relatively good. Don't worry. Recommended viewing.

Nice! Nice! Super pretty! ! ! The love between Wei Lan and Feng Yinsha is so sweet! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Beautiful, five-star praise

Looks good, come on

Very beautiful, worth recommending

I like it 🥰, please give me a boost, the author Very much to my liking. Hee hee😁 It's over, I'm a little reluctant to leave it