Comprehension************

I traveled through time and didn't even know the plot.

It's an ordinary fanfic about time travel. I don't know what the protagonist's realm is and I haven't said anything about it. There are only two of them in Maoshan. The system is also rubbish. I've learned so much that I feel like it's useless.

A very good text, but it was written in a messy and inconsistent way. At the beginning, I knew the time and what the world was, but then I didn't know who Lin Zhengying was. Well, I knew Coffee, but I didn't know who Ren Tingting was? Hello teacher from Renjiazhen, how can I help you? My color is different. I don't even know who Uncle Jiu's apprentice is. Well, I met Qiu Sheng on the road and I didn't even know who Qiu Sheng was? When Uncle Jiu arrived, why didn't the other overseas apprentice come? His uncle told him that there was another apprentice named Qiu Sheng at his aunt's place, and the protagonist had to secretly remember that his name was Qiu Sheng. One moment he was a modern person, and the next moment he was a native of the zombie world. He was an inexplicable fusion. He didn't even know that the author was a fusion of several novels and wrote it. Lin Zhengying, whose name is obviously Lin Fengjiao, is such a good author. I have never seen the movie of Uncle Nine. I just watched the short videos and then I wrote this novel. I also read the novels written by other people. If you want to write a novel on this subject, you must at least collect the information in the novel on this subject and read them all. I have never seen it at all, so I will write it here.

What are you writing about? I know Shi Jian knows about Maoshan, and I know that after I ran to Uncle Jiu, I don't know this or that. What I wrote is just out of my head.

This ordering is not very good.

Time travel and don't know the plot? You might as well kill the protagonist and rearrange someone else to be the protagonist.

Great writing, keep it up

Good guy, when I saw the content and the title of the book, it was different.

Isn't it time travel? I don't know the plot, I don't know anything about the plot, so what's the point of time travel?

Not feeling very good

I don't dare to write if I want to.

Very second,,, use your imagination and structure more! !