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This novel really exceeded my expectations. I originally thought it was an ordinary story about time travel and transformation, but I didn't expect it to be very well written. Since I have only read Chapter 100, I will give a brief review here. Out of ten, I would give the author a 7.5 For his writing. The writing is still a bit green, but for the plot, I would give it a 9.5. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the text, which is very good. And this kind of plot is not like the popular one we see where people travel through time and become a villain and then change their fate against the will of heaven. There is a twist in the middle. The protagonist is originally from this world. He was brought to the earth by the power of the world to experience life, and the world view here is also very good. In short, I hope the author can continue to write like this. Come on, author! ! !

Now, as an entertainment-oriented book, it is indeed very attractive. The book is always entertaining, and the plot is somewhat attractive. Although it is not a masterpiece, from the perspective of its entertainment, it is indeed a good book to read and relax after a tiring day.

Very good, the subject matter is very novel, and the protagonist is not particularly dragon. Aotian is more in line with my taste. It hasn't happened until now, that is to say, the character has become suddenly violent, or particularly selfish, and not very holy. Moreover, the upgrade is done step by step. Although it is not particularly hard, the upgrade is acceptable to me, and he does not actively want to build a harem. Well, I am not very disgusted with this kind of thing. On the other hand, in some traditional cultivators, the protagonist is attracted to which one, and then, I won't mention it. Anyway, this is very worth watching.

Personally, I think this book is similar to yours. Although it is not as good as that one, I can only say that it is relatively good. If the writing is better, the minimum score is 8.5. The plot is not bad. Well, the shortcomings are relatively big, that is, the character of the character is not outstanding.

Out of ten, I give it 11 points. The plot line is rigorous. The author usually develops 2 to 3 lines. There are currently no disconnections. Friends who like this type of questions should not be misled by the scores. It is very outstanding among online articles. There is nothing else to comment on, you will know after reading it!

An interesting novel about another world, it feels as if you are reading a light novel. There are many elements including necromancers, ordinary mages, warriors, dragon-blooded warriors, adventurers' associations, and dungeons.

It's a very classic Western fantasy, with a complete world background, good character creation, and a sense of security. I watched it for a long time and felt very good. But I will read it for a while and then stop reading it. This book has no lasting freshness, which is fatal. It fills in holes and foreshadows the plot very well. But because of this, the entire plot is bland. Maybe the author needs to write a comparison that can arouse the reader's interest. No matter what, there is no denying that this is a masterpiece. It is quite suitable for readers who like Western fantasy, demons, lolita, and more everyday readers. But if you feel impetuous, you can also try reading it. Maybe I'll like it.

Western fantasy, harem, genre, light novel, the overall plot is smooth, the pace is slow, the world view is complete, the author's setting is very good, the story all revolves around the protagonist [laughing] I bought foreshadowing in the early stage, and also solved it in the later stage [eating melon] The fighting part is quite satisfactory. What an impressive scene [Making faces] The author's emotional part is probably the most outstanding, the emotions are delicate, nothing is too embarrassing, very natural, and the interaction with the heroines, it feels like watching anime [Full] It is very consistent with the theme of light novels

This is a time-travel combat-oriented casual novel. The protagonist Leon is meticulous in his work, vigorous and resolute in his work, and has a kind-hearted personality. However, when the bottom line is touched, he becomes sharper and behaves more like a normal person. The portrayal of the characters is also very vivid, and each character has its own characteristics. There is a lot of fighting content in the book, but most of it is more casual and slowly upgrading, and the pace is neither too fast nor too slow.

It's almost a book, at least I haven't found any major flaws. If this book wants to be really popular, maybe the cover can be changed to a formal title, and the title can also be changed to something like "Online Games: Accept the Demon King as a Step-Sister at the Beginning", which might get more traffic [Chigua]

This, except for the part where the male protagonist proactively reveals his identity is a little bit toxic at the beginning, the plot develops in multiple lines later, and the written plot line is reasonable and not confusing. The handling of the characters avoids stereotypes to a large extent, and the emotions are relatively full, especially the part where the male protagonist's father is looking to see if the male protagonist has been taken away. I feel that his father is alive, and I don't know the reason for the low rating... Maybe many people can't see the back, and see the male protagonist directly tell the maid that the original male protagonist is dead and then run away.

The writing is very good, and I hope the author will not stop updating it. I personally feel that most dramas are routine, but they also make people interested in watching them. I hope the author can force the progress of the main plot, but I just don't know if it is a harem story, and will it be orthopedic in the end? [Sinister smile]

Good review. The author's comments at the end express his understanding and views of the online article, describe the author's efforts to write a book, attract readers at the same time, pave the way for the next book, and express the author's love for readers and love for driving [smile]

Western Fantasy is considered to be an above-average level. At least there are no logical gaps in the whole story, which shows that the author still has an outline. It is the kind of book that can be read. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

It's quite good-looking, with fighting, astringent, funny, almost all styles. It's one of the best time-travel western fantasy novels I've ever read. The protagonist is relatively close to ordinary people, and it's very engaging. All in all, it is worth hearing once and seeing it once. It is worth recommending.

After nearly a year of updating, with a new account halfway through, this book has finally come to an end, and I have once again witnessed the end of a work. A very good Japanese-Western fantasy daily novel. When I first read it, I thought it was just an ordinary time-travel novel. In fact, it is indeed a time-travel novel, but it is not ordinary, and the identity of the protagonist Leon also has a lot of background. As a daily novel that turned into a harem novel in the middle, the heroines also have their own merits. The white-haired lolita demon king Sheena, the blue-haired big sister Enixi, the maid lady Shiluer and the little fairy Serafall. Not only that, the protagonist also has many female friends who are relatively close to each other, but the only ones who actually enter the protagonist's harem are the above four. There is also a sister named Lucy, and she is her biological child. It is a pity. After all, this is a serious work. The two are just ambiguous. How could they engage in orthopedics? However, in the final wedding extra chapter, she participated in the wedding as Giri's bride. For details, please read the main text. But my favorite is the main palace, that is, Demon King Xina, and she got pregnant at the end of the extra chapter, so the status of the main palace is undoubtedly confirmed! In the early stage, the author's writing style was a little green, but it got much better in the middle stage. Moreover, he was very good at foreshadowing. He laid an inconspicuous foreshadowing in Chapter 200. Oh my god, he rounded it up in Chapter 800. The author also announced information about the new book, which is very interesting. I will definitely follow it to the finale when it comes out. In short, that's it, I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on!

Rampage: Tomato's greatest articles It may be due to my personal reasons, but his plot is one of the few articles in Tomato that can control the world view of the world. Many of the foreshadowings are very complete, and the overall plot arrangement also gives me a sense of peace of mind. Unlike other daily writings, which are either intrigues under the banner of daily life, or just nonsense. It gives me a slow and methodical feeling, and it really captures the tranquility and tranquility of fairy tales that I imagine Chinese and Western fantasy should have. It's like looking at ideal history again Strong recommendation. Come and take a look, whoever sees it will know

This book is at five-star level, but the introduction deducts 1 star. As a Western fantasy, the author strives to outline a complete worldview without too much conflict. The characters appear in many and not complicated ways, and the character structure is vivid and vivid. Needless to say, the writing style seems to be a translation product, and it is written like a Westerner✍🏻Western fantasy. The plot is also passable, a standard RPG unfolding plot. The only shortcoming is the introduction. This book is not light-hearted and has no sugar content, and there are many supporting characters.

It's very good. I haven't seen this kind of protagonist in a long time who is not a virgin but doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately (most of the characters in Tomatoes are decisive in killing = killing innocent people indiscriminately. I often see half of the scenes where the protagonist kills innocent people indiscriminately, which makes me furious). In addition, almost all the supporting characters and some non-key characters in this book are also very three-dimensional. They are not black and white or black when cut into white. Each character is like a living person, which really made me reach the bottom [crying] Moreover, the narration of the world view is very smooth. Hongda's world view is explained in small events. It's really amazing.

How to say it? The foreplay is great. The beginning of the novel is very passionate, but the follow-up is weak. It becomes more and more sluggish towards the end. It lacks the passion between battles. Basically, all you can read is porn. The imagination is good. It is a good book if it is finished before 200 chapters.

It's a smooth ending. After seeing the spirit of the world making friends with the male protagonist and getting together with Sheena, I can basically judge that it is a Japanese-style Western fantasy love story. The male protagonist basically has no difficulties or challenges. The passionate male protagonist should be the demon king Ren, and the layout of the two timelines finally gave Leon a relatively easy way to solve the problem. In another world online, the World Spirit reunites with Ren, plus Leon's ending. A true happy ending. There are some foreshadowings that were not recycled, such as the birth and responsibility of the hero, but after Sheena was adopted by Leon, it is understandable why the hero is no longer useful. This may also be the inevitable result of not having an outline. At least it was contained, no character breakdown, no breakdown in combat power. There are no major problems in this book, the logic is basically smooth, the characters are fairly distinct, and the ending is smooth and happy. The whole reading process gives people a relaxing feeling like reading a light novel. I give 5 stars

It's a good book, with good subject matter and good writing, but is it a bit lacking in updates? Such a good novel, at least five chapters a day, right? Also, how come the pronunciation of the name Xina and the character setting make her look so much like a housewife [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's quite interesting, but the more you read, the more you start to skip chapters. Unless there is a special plot [face covering], it is best to catch up with the main plot and deal with the character relationships in advance (I thought it would be dealt with in those few academy chapters). From what I can see so far, I feel that the brave team does not play a big role in the plot, and the existence of the ninth level basically does not care about worldly affairs. The latest development shows that the protagonist has 4 harems (Devil King + World Chapter Goblin + Mage + Maid), 1 sister, 2 daughters, 1 book spirit, and 1 semi-apprentice. I hope to bring more exciting content in the future.

(Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it) From the background design alone, I really like this type of novel, such as the Necromancer, the warrior system, etc. Overall, it has a relatively large world view, and the protagonist's personality changes are well shaped, with a gradual change process. However, I felt that this novel was a bit dull from beginning to end. The whole novel was like a line. It felt awkward in some places, with few ups and downs. The plot did not have much twists and turns, and it was not easy to attract attention. I personally think this book is a very good book with a score of 9.0 To 9.3. I hope that the author can continue to work hard and work harder on his writing style. I look forward to the author's future performance.

A very good book, worth reading by everyone (Disclaimer, this book has multiple female protagonists and a harem, please be careful before entering)

It really feels good Not too bad in terms of combat power It's also good emotionally, and there's no need to give up on anyone. The foreshadowing is also very well recycled, and there are not many places that are inconsistent with the previous plot.

As a newbie who has just written a book, it is really great. The narrative rhythm is well grasped, and there are all the necessary foreshadowings. It can be seen that a lot of thought has been put into it. When reading, it feels like playing a jrpg, but the plot advancement in the emotional scene feels a bit abrupt. Overall, it's a good book. Come on, the author, I believe he can write better.

The first time I came into contact with a Western fantasy novel, I felt like I was watching a very long TV series. In the past, when I watched the TV series, whenever it was finished, I would still think about the second season, the second season, the end, and the third season. After reading this book, I felt much more comfortable. I have to say that although the novel is not as graphic as the TV series, the plot can really feel the original meaning. It is authentic and complete [Note] Hao Kankouya [learned] The characterization is very detailed, and Leon's life can't be seen enough [laughs] Although the two sisters Lilith and Aino Ailan, the ancestors of the blood clan, did not enter the harem, which makes me feel a little regretful, but perfection is only a concept, not an existence. Maybe there is such a trivial regret, which makes people feel more real. [Think]

The story line is very huge, and the author will fill in many clues and pitfalls in the text. Although it is a harem novel, the protagonist is not a stallion who accepts everyone he meets. It is a very interesting magic novel about another world. I support the author greatly, and cheers for the new book [sending heartfelt wishes]

The painting has a strong sense of picture, the writing style is delicate and exquisite without losing the pattern and ingenuity, and its unique world view is often eye-catching. The main line of the story is the meeting and communication between the protagonist and various characters, which is full of a casual and leisurely atmosphere. It depicts the story of a rather useless protagonist who builds his own invincible network of relationships due to his encounter and cultivation with CPs. It even affects the fate of the world step by step. The conflicts and relationships revolve around the Demon King and the False Demon King. The exchanges and progress between the two camps are often very representative, and the author is very discerning.