Traveling to the Night City in 2074, Pan Xiao found that he had become a beautiful girl with four arms and two stars;
The worst time-travel protagonist in history was born. He was caught by a night wandering ghost, forced to transform into a prosthetic body and sold to Genting;
He was rescued by a kind mercenary, and then his benefactor died suddenly, leaving him alone;
See how Sebrani survives in this cannibalistic night city, and becomes a legend step by step!
Reader comments
I hope everyone can put forward your valuable opinions and help me improve this book better. Thank you Wukaniu [blowing kiss]
After the intermediate exam is over next month, I will have more time to update more chapters. Dear readers, please stay tuned!
This is a subjective evaluation.
Subjectively, the writing was okay, but the plot lacked ups and downs. The length of the plot at the beginning is okay, but most of the subsequent paragraphs are detailed introductions to the props, which results in so many words that there is no sense of the plot.
The characterization is not obvious. Although readers have a natural sense of familiarity with the original characters, what Second Creation wants to see more is the collision between the protagonist and the original characters. In this process, the protagonist is not naturally accepted by the decent characters, nor is he naturally opposed to the villains.
What I hope to see is not that a group of good people become the appendages of the protagonist, but that they each show their truest personalities and then be conquered by the protagonist's personality charm one by one.
This review is purely subjective and can only serve as a reference for those who share my interests. The author writes very well, the above is just an opinion and not an order.
The plot of Heywood in the early stage of the story is great, and it is strong all the way in the later stage. The protagonist is a hacker, the military science poem used to access the warehouse, and the names of black technologies are mostly from Elden. It's been a while since I picked it up and read it again, and the direction behind it is pretty good.
Elden French Tour plus cyberpunk, it's better to add Lily in the later stage, the author's book is good, but he doesn't push traffic
My friend~ I need a director's cut~ You know [smile][smile]
I hope everyone can put forward your valuable opinions and help me improve this book better. Thank you Wukaniu [blowing kiss] After the intermediate exam is over next month, I will have more time to update more chapters. Dear readers, please stay tuned!
This is a subjective evaluation. Subjectively, the writing was okay, but the plot lacked ups and downs. The length of the plot at the beginning is okay, but most of the subsequent paragraphs are detailed introductions to the props, which results in so many words that there is no sense of the plot. The characterization is not obvious. Although readers have a natural sense of familiarity with the original characters, what Second Creation wants to see more is the collision between the protagonist and the original characters. In this process, the protagonist is not naturally accepted by the decent characters, nor is he naturally opposed to the villains. What I hope to see is not that a group of good people become the appendages of the protagonist, but that they each show their truest personalities and then be conquered by the protagonist's personality charm one by one. This review is purely subjective and can only serve as a reference for those who share my interests. The author writes very well, the above is just an opinion and not an order.
The plot of Heywood in the early stage of the story is great, and it is strong all the way in the later stage. The protagonist is a hacker, the military science poem used to access the warehouse, and the names of black technologies are mostly from Elden. It's been a while since I picked it up and read it again, and the direction behind it is pretty good.
Elden French Tour plus cyberpunk, it's better to add Lily in the later stage, the author's book is good, but he doesn't push traffic
My friend~ I need a director's cut~ You know [smile][smile]