Hogwarts: I Command Thunder and Souls

As long as you hate Ron, we're good friends

I have only seen Chapter 43 so far. I will give it four stars. The plot can be said to be very good. It is different from the plot of the original Harry Potter. It has its own innovations and is not mindless. It is considered a good book in the Harry Potter series. I haven't seen any poisonous spots so far. If there are poisonous spots, it may be because I looked too quickly and didn't notice. Don't spray. In short, I still look forward to the author's subsequent works, so don't be disappointed. If the writing is good later, I will change it to five stars.

So far, it's pretty good, but you have to know that to write this kind of fan fiction well, you must have an original plot. For the protagonist who is currently a Hogwarts student, it is best to insert the original plot during the holidays, and I saw that the protagonist grew up in France. I personally estimate that the original plot during the holidays is usually in France, and by the way, the love story of the childhood friend Describe it, otherwise it would be too sudden for a friend to suddenly have feelings for the Goblet of Fire. Come on, author. If the author has an outline and is ready to write it, then I will just mention it casually. If the author has no outline and no idea of an original plot, I sincerely hope that the author can think about how to write a good original plot according to my ideas. Thank you very much, author [laughs]

It's good to read [Send Hearts] I was misled by the Internet. I thought it was a middle school type book after reading the title, but after reading it, I realized that the protagonist's personality, plot direction and character creation are very suitable for me [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]

It's not bad. I wrote my own stuff. In fact, this kind of fan fiction is not easy to write, because the plot of Harry Potter is just that. Some people will find it boring and can't stand it. If you write your own stuff, some people will find it hard to stand it. This is true for fan fiction, but it feels like pig's feet are shaped. It's not bad. At least I've seen a lot of Virgins and I can't accept it. I can only say that people like me don't mind a little more kindness in pig's feet, but there's no need to waste my time on a fool I'm not interested in. This is my own idea, so I can be considered a picky book reader. I hope the author can give us a complete story, and I hope more and more similar people will read this book. Come on! Please read and leave your thoughts on January 20th

It's very good. It's not too different from the original version. It's not a brainless novel.

Overall, it is a good Invincible novel, with a smooth plot and reasonable logic. The protagonist is a standard genius. He is already better than the old Dumbledore before he graduates. He has friends and lovers he cares about and treats his friends well. He always helps, encourages and guides Draco to stay away from black magic. Lucius and Lucius's wife also have a good ending in the end. Dumbledore and Grindelwald forgive each other in the later stage, and fighting side by side makes me feel regretful when I read the original work. All in all, I recommend taking a look.

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It's very interesting. Arthur looked too comprehensive and ended up directly becoming the God of Death. I thought he would be the God of Thunder. At first, Dumbledore always believed that Harry was the savior and was afraid of Arthur, but Arthur did not learn any black magic and was purer than the white devil himself. After Arthur revealed his talent, he began to waver and have so many inner dramas that he laughed to death [smirk][snicker][smirk][smirk][cry with laughter]. Finally, knowing that Regulus had resisted Lao Fu, he was immediately convinced that Arthur was the savior. Forcibly placing Harry, the male protagonist, in the role of a passerby [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

After reading the entire book, I actually have no special feelings. I haven't read Rowling's novels, but I can feel that the author still worked hard to conceive them. Let's talk about it in terms of the first, middle and last stages. In the early stage, you will enroll in Hogwarts and study daily. In the mid-term participation activities, the ht plot will begin. Later, he replaced Harry as the savior. That's probably the plot. It's obvious that the protagonist's presence is deliberately weakened. Become the background board for various events. He was forcibly molded into a savior, which was similar to Harry's in that he was pushed forward. The full text is actually pretty good, with some of the author's thoughts and plot, although I don't know if it's included in the final villain novel. But creating a world public enemy to break the existing environment can be said to open up the situation. It can be said that it is making some original works within the existing framework of ht. Overall, it is almost the same as watching ht. I think it's okay. If you're interested, you can check it out when you have time.