Hogwarts, I Control the Thunder and the Soul

As long as you hate Ron, we're good friends

I have only seen Chapter 43 so far. I will give it four stars. The plot can be said to be very good. It is different from the plot of the original Harry Potter. It has its own innovations and is not mindless. It is considered a good book in the Harry Potter series. I haven't seen any poisonous spots so far. If there are poisonous spots, it may be because I looked too quickly and didn't notice. Don't spray. In short, I still look forward to the author's subsequent works, so don't be disappointed. If the writing is good later, I will change it to five stars.

So far, it's pretty good, but you have to know that to write this kind of fan fiction well, you must have an original plot. For the protagonist who is currently a Hogwarts student, it is best to insert the original plot during the holidays, and I saw that the protagonist grew up in France. I personally estimate that the original plot during the holidays is usually in France, and by the way, the love story of the childhood friend Describe it, otherwise it would be too sudden for a friend to suddenly have feelings for the Goblet of Fire. Come on, author. If the author has an outline and is ready to write it, then I will just mention it casually. If the author has no outline and no idea of an original plot, I sincerely hope that the author can think about how to write a good original plot according to my ideas. Thank you very much, author [laughs]

It's good to read [Send Hearts] I was misled by the Internet. I thought it was a middle school type book after reading the title, but after reading it, I realized that the protagonist's personality, plot direction and character creation are very suitable for me [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]

It's not bad. I wrote my own stuff. In fact, this kind of fan fiction is not easy to write, because the plot of Harry Potter is just that. Some people will find it boring and can't stand it. If you write your own stuff, some people will find it hard to stand it. This is true for fan fiction, but it feels like pig's feet are shaped. It's not bad. At least I've seen a lot of Virgins and I can't accept it. I can only say that people like me don't mind a little more kindness in pig's feet, but there's no need to waste my time on a fool I'm not interested in. This is my own idea, so I can be considered a picky book reader. I hope the author can give us a complete story, and I hope more and more similar people will read this book. Come on! Please read and leave your thoughts on January 20th

It's very good. It's not too different from the original version. It's not a brainless novel.

Overall, it is a good Invincible novel, with a smooth plot and reasonable logic. The protagonist is a standard genius. He is already better than the old Dumbledore before he graduates. He has friends and lovers he cares about and treats his friends well. He always helps, encourages and guides Draco to stay away from black magic. Lucius and Lucius's wife also have a good ending in the end. Dumbledore and Grindelwald forgive each other in the later stage, and fighting side by side makes me feel regretful when I read the original work. All in all, I recommend taking a look.

This is a gentle vending machine, open 24 hours a day

It's very interesting. Arthur looked too comprehensive and ended up directly becoming the God of Death. I thought he would be the God of Thunder. At first, Dumbledore always believed that Harry was the savior and was afraid of Arthur, but Arthur did not learn any black magic and was purer than the white devil himself. After Arthur revealed his talent, he began to waver and have so many inner dramas that he laughed to death [smirk][snicker][smirk][smirk][cry with laughter]. Finally, knowing that Regulus had resisted Lao Fu, he was immediately convinced that Arthur was the savior. Forcibly placing Harry, the male protagonist, in the role of a passerby [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

After reading the entire book, I actually have no special feelings. I haven't read Rowling's novels, but I can feel that the author still worked hard to conceive them. Let's talk about it in terms of the first, middle and last stages. In the early stage, you will enroll in Hogwarts and study daily. In the mid-term participation activities, the ht plot will begin. Later, he replaced Harry as the savior. That's probably the plot. It's obvious that the protagonist's presence is deliberately weakened. Become the background board for various events. He was forcibly molded into a savior, which was similar to Harry's in that he was pushed forward. The full text is actually pretty good, with some of the author's thoughts and plot, although I don't know if it's included in the final villain novel. But creating a world public enemy to break the existing environment can be said to open up the situation. It can be said that it is making some original works within the existing framework of ht. Overall, it is almost the same as watching ht. I think it's okay. If you're interested, you can check it out when you have time.

Not bad, but I was a little unhappy about being plotted by Voldemort later.

It's good-looking, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very good.

I've read a lot of fanfics, but this one doesn't lick the protagonist too much, nor does it step on it. But many CPs were dismantled. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I don't know the story behind it. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Just watch it, it looks good

The contrast in power between wizards and ordinary society is not as great as described by many authors. Ordinary people have nuclear bombs and various thermal weapons, but wizards also have spells such as fire spells, curses, and disembodiment that ordinary people cannot solve. Ordinary society cannot afford the huge losses after war. If a wizard sets a fire in a big city and is not stopped by a wizard, a city will be burned down. This can also be regarded as a nuclear deterrent, but it cannot be prevented...

The writing is really good, and it is indeed different from ordinary novels. At best, they will become the strongest wizards in the world. Or write some characters. But the protagonist himself is very powerful, but this is different. If you can still write some mythical stories, the thunder and lightning magic like the protagonist will eventually become the thunder god. Even better.

I feel like the author has a deep understanding of the original work. It's so interesting and I love reading it.

The previous ones are all good, but I felt aggrieved after being fucked by Voldemort. But actually, if you think about it, it's quite normal. After all, if there is a system for another person to travel through time, it will definitely feel like a game of the human world. To put it simply, it means that you are arrogant and don't treat others as human beings. But it will be much better later. If you want to enjoy it, just skip the 53 or five or six pictures.

The plot is pretty good, but in the chapter I'm reading now, you know that the professor is an enemy in disguise. Moreover, my good friend was being played by this pretended professor, but I did nothing, which felt like that. My senses have always been good, but after seeing this one, my senses dropped a lot.

This is the first time I have completely read a novel with a single female protagonist, which is quite good. Sure enough, the single heroine also has good books.

It's good to read. The story developed by the author is related to the original story. It's not like other people's writing that has too many bugs or the world expansion is too weird and too layered. Come on, come on, I look forward to seeing you in the next book.

In my mind, it should be a score of 9.5 Or above. Although this book does not have a grand world view or a storyline that is too ups and downs, it is very comfortable to read. The whole storyline is very smooth and smooth. I like this kind of writing.

Among the HP novels, the writing is quite good! Appropriate changes to the storyline and preservation of the character traits of the original characters are all worthy of praise! Many HP novels have been changed beyond recognition. They are completely using HP's name, and other novels written are not exciting enough. This novel relives HP without repeating the old plot too much and adds a lot of new ideas. It is a very satisfying HP fanfic.

This book is not bad! Time travel, system, golden finger, male protagonist, with CP, mostly revolve around original characters, and have less contact with the main plot of the protagonist, especially in the later stage, they are basically completely separated. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The male protagonist is elegant and polite, protective of his shortcomings, smart, calm and decisive, humble and studious, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

The writing was okay, but Kreacher was a bit incapable of accepting that the protagonist was more important and greater than Regulus. The plot was good.

Overall it's okay, I can't say it's amazing, but there's nothing bad about it. It has a single heroine, Furong, and the protagonist plays more with herself. She doesn't lick or deliberately show hostility to the trio. There are some original plots, so far it's okay, but it's a bit too bland and lacks passion.

It's really beautiful! ! ! It seems that I also like the unpopular cp Dejin hahahahahahaha even more. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I love you so much! ! ! ! Very few authors write about Durkin! ! ! Thanks to the chef for cooking, please be HE[shy][admired]

I took a look at the comment area and found a lot of bad reviews, but I personally think this book is better than most of the high-scoring fans on the platform. The development of the plot and the selection of the protagonist and supporting characters make people feel comfortable. Coupled with the special setting, it is really possible to read it in one sitting and still feel unfinished [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This is a very good Harry Potter fan novel. The heroine is the relatively rare Fleur. It is a pity that the author ended the novel in a hurry due to its low popularity, but this does not affect its brilliance. ——Comments from a critical reader who has spent thousands of hours reading

Very good-looking, with a single female protagonist, a genius pureblood who is invincible. What I am a little dissatisfied with is that the details are too large and the daily writing is not detailed enough. In particular, the heroine has too few scenes, and she is completely inferior to Malfoy. I still like to see more sweet love stories.

This book has more than 500,000 words. It took me a little more than two days to read it. Although the number of words is not many, the content is very exciting. Because of its relatively short length, the plot of the story is very compact and does not drag out in the middle. At the beginning of the story, the protagonist gained some advantages through the prophet in the first few chapters, but after entering Hogwarts, he suffered a loss, and then realized that what he had traveled to was not a novel or a movie, but a real life, which was full of variables. After that, the protagonist has undergone some changes, and the later plot is relatively pleasant to watch, without any pitfalls. I have also read other Harry Potter fanfics. One of them impressed me deeply. The author wrote the characters in it with 800 thoughts. Although this made the novel look full and the characters very real, I felt a little tired from reading it. For these novels with about a million words, I mainly want to make an easy transition. I don't want to consume too many brain cells. Just keep it simple and direct. The plot is a little twisty and refreshing. Reading it makes me feel very happy and relaxed. If there is no book to read when you are bored, this book is a good choice as a transitional book that can be read for three to two days or a week. It is easy to read and does not use brain cells, and it can be read in four or five days at most.