After Rebirth, I Hooked up with Bai Yueguang's Bai Yueguang

I seem to prefer watching a love story between two real men. It's not a story about a boss and a guy who is obviously a boy but feels like a girl in every way. Except for the gender change, nothing else has changed. But the overall story is still very good, the pace is tight and not wordy. It looks exciting.

It's worth appreciating, it's good-looking, it's okay, but it's a bit sparse, and the writing is solid, the description is detailed and vivid, it's lovely, emm is right, I'm at a loss for words [awkward laugh][awkward laugh], I think it's not a loss to invest in the stock [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates][top post][top post][top post]

I like this article very much. Each character has a very distinct personality. Some of the things written in the article are really realistic... Such as the different attitudes of the protagonist's grandmother towards her daughter-in-law and grandson. The protagonist is not the one who dominates the world in ordinary cool novels, but has trade-offs and concerns, which is closer to the real situation. I believe there is no one who has never compromised or made concessions. As for the supporting roles, Tang's innocence hides scheming. It is mentioned in the article that he has a brother and a sister, and the brother and sister should be very capable people. And he knows very well that it is because of the second elder of the Tang family that he is so favored. If Tang's aunt's child is found, he will definitely fall out of favor. Presumably this is also the reason why he concealed the test results. And there is Mr. Huo, who understands the law [face covering] This is what I like the most! The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

It's good to read. I got it from Qing Qing's book [laughing][laughing]

It's a magical book. I feel like the author is getting better as he writes. Some of the words and sentences in the first few chapters feel very immature. I want to abandon the article, but the plot is very coherent. It makes people want to know what will happen next, so I read it in confusion... In addition, I feel that the foreshadowing of the time-travel system is useless, just to provide a reasonable link for the multiple skills that the protagonist has received... After reading it, the foreshadowing of the system was of no use in the end, and then I didn't mention anything about depositing things in the bank at the beginning. There is a big difference in the writing styles of the previous and later chapters. In the later period, I feel that the writing is much smoother, but overall it is not satisfactory.

I finished reading it in one go, it's so beautiful! ! ! There are so few. I will give X billion to the author for reminder cards.

I admit that I spoke too loudly when I first read it. The characters in this book are quite good, and the villain is also a typical example in reality. Tang Qinghe is a love brain who loves to make big pie. He takes advantage of others and also says to treat him twice as much, but he can't do it at all. Let alone know three people and act as three. There are many such people in reality. The hero's nephew is a heavyweight and selfish man named Pu Xin. I can only say that his mind is super explosive, but art comes from life. . . Then there is logic in the whole text, and it is quite consistent with the logic of reality. It is not the kind of revenge script that is very enjoyable and ignores logic, but he returned it accurately. In the early stage, there are mainly emotional lines, and in the later stages, there is a revenge line. How should I put it, for a relatively "normal" novel on Tomato, the pace is just right, the first part is a little slow, but it's still enjoyable.

The plot of the whole book is coherent. The author's prompt at the beginning explains the unreasonable parts in the following. The words in parentheses are used to explain what happened a long time ago or the characters who appeared. The author is a careful person. Huo Lingchuan in the article has a very upright outlook on life, is very careful and sensible, and feels very likeable. The article is not the kind that is completely unsupported by the law. It is not the kind of world where the law is the rule, which feels good. The character creation is also very successful. For example, Shen Huaijing, he will not hesitate because of a little warmth, he is very decisive, he is very smart and has strong logical thinking ability. Both protagonists are remarkable, and the other characters have distinctive characteristics. For example, Shen Anyu and the Ji family are examples of profit-seekers. Personally, I am very satisfied with this book. If you are interested, you can give it a try.

Very pretty The plot line is relatively complete, but the progress is a bit slow, which cannot satisfy some sisters who like to watch fast progress. However, this work is still very good-looking. The protagonist is very cute and is still very strong in the face of adversity. The plot line of the protagonist does not progress very quickly, but the content is also very rich. In the early stage, the authors were still more career-oriented, but later on they moved to the emotional line. Recommended

Except for the protagonist and a few supporting characters, there are no good people in the book (that Tang Qinghe is not the Bai Yueguang I imagined, his brain circuit is quite strange, and he is a perfect match for that Ting Zhen). Some people are completely mentally ill [laughter] What happened to Xiao Jing in his previous life was so miserable [I almost cried] I thought his Tang family would protect him, and thought he finally had a family, but the Tang family was just like that [awkward laugh] Only Nuan Nuan really loves and protects him, Nuan Nuan is really great The ending is a bit too fast, there are no extras, and there are a few mistakes. It feels like something is missing, and some characters are not well written. In fact, I really want to know what happened to them, for example: about Shen Mingcheng, I am very curious about the Miss Bai family who was rescued by Xiao Jing [eating melon] Evil will be punished, evil people will be punished, and Xiao Jing's revenge will be avenged [you taste it carefully] Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The protagonist's IQ is online. I like Xiao Jing and Nuan Nuan's stable character [Sending my heart] Protagonist: Shen Huaijing & Huo Lingchuan

It's very good-looking, but there's no cool text. The story is step-by-step and layered, and the logic is clear and non-brainy. I hope the author will update it soon. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Like post][Please update]

It's pretty good. The relationship and companionship between the protagonists are endlessly memorable. Although Shou approached Gong for some reason at first, but later he also fell in love with Gong. Gong treated Shou very well from the beginning to the end, gave Shou care and trust, and stood by Shou's side all the time. This is the best Gong I have ever seen in a novel. The other supporting characters really have their own evils (some exceptions, such as Gong's sister and special assistant). What makes me laugh is that some of the things in it were written by the author after listening to gossip. I really want to know who the prototype is. Although I don't know him, it doesn't affect my eating.

This book is really good-looking, I won't lie. It's very interesting to read. The character of the protagonist is also very clear. The other supporting characters also have their own characteristics. But the author has 45 chapters. Is it missing a little bit? I remember they were kissing when I was reading Chapter 45! I can't see it now? [What][What][What]

Ga! ! ! The author writes well, writes well, writes well! The characters of the two male protagonists are very well written, and the logic of their actions is reasonable. The supporting characters are not purely mindless and illogical and malicious. Although the plot is also refreshing, it is written very naturally! The two male protagonists are both eloquent and intelligent. Although they are a bit of a pony-like novel, they are also written very naturally! ! They fall in love naturally and like each other very well, the sweetness is just right! ! ! (Aunt laughs) (Crazy twisting of maggots) (Crazy stomping of feet) Just the right amount of sweetness! ! Amway, Amway, Amway! !

I think I saw one point when reading this novel, which is very clear, that is, approaching a person is utilitarian. It is the same. People who make friends only approach the other person because they can get something and it will be of great benefit to themselves.

It's so good-looking [Love] I don't know how to say it, but it's very good-looking anyway. I stayed up all night reading this book. I didn't stay up very much. It's really amazing. This book is really good. Come on, author, write more high-quality works [Love] [Love] [Love]

The plot logic is very tight, the characters are perfectly formed, and the author is really cute. The whole book is really beautiful, please read it for me! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The content is super good, I like it very much, I just like this kind of sweet novel, I love the cute Shen Huaijing so much, I like it so much, [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's super good. It's a rare book that I haven't skipped. The more I read, the better it gets. I stayed up late to finish it. It's worth recommending. I really like the atmosphere between Xiao Jing and his husband. Xiao Jing has gone through so much suffering and finally met Huo Lingchuan to love him, pamper him, and fill his world with warmth and sunshine. It's so good.

I've only read a few chapters, and I'll share my current thoughts. It's pretty good so far, and the plot is pretty good. The protagonist and supporting characters are also described in more detail, and indeed, the early stages are pretty good. But how do I say this sentence fragment... It gives me a very uncomfortable feeling, and I feel a little uncomfortable when reading it. But it's okay, it's within my tolerance and I'll see what happens next. Also, the writing style is pretty good, and the author's knowledge storage is great! (Currently referring specifically to "original wife" and "first wife"!)

Not bad🎁🎁🎁 In the article, Huo Lingchuan is really a person who understands and tolerates his partner (Shen Huaijing). He is very gentle and pays attention to the other half's feelings when encountering things related to his partner. (I really like him✨!!!) In addition, the characters created by the author are pretty good (hate or love), but there are also shortcomings ① There are few plot lines (I feel that there is roughly one revenge line, and there is basically no career line or anything else. This is just my personal opinion * may or may not be referenced * ) (the author can try to write more other lines in the future [blowing kiss]) ②The revenge is written in a very awkward way😳(but it's okay, mainly because it's my first time watching this kind of thing)

I've read the new article. I like it. Come on.

I have always thought that the setting of bosses in many novels is too unrealistic. Bosses are also human beings. The author has made the "boss" more humane. I really like the way the two protagonists communicate, which is a real love, and I also like their characters. In short - it is not a loss to invest in

I read this book just after I finished it. Every time I read the finished book, I feel at ease. In addition, this is the only book I have read in one sitting in the past few months. It is really, really good and I almost cried. Who knows the feeling of screaming in bed when I saw the chapter where Xiao Jing proposes to Mr. Huo! I was really shocked, I really didn't propose to Xiaojing [shy] In short, the word "absolute"!

It's so sweet [Admiration], the writing is exquisite, and the protagonist has really upright views (os: This is the first time I have seen such a law-abiding CEO in a novel) [face covering]

It's hard to comment on the plot, it's bloody and attractive, but after reading the whole thing, I really didn't feel like there was much candy. In fact, it is a bit like the revenge story of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is a powerful backstage needed by the plot. It is simply a background board + tool man, used to stimulate the villain's character. It may also be that there are too many sad things in the whole article, and there are obviously more scenes with the villain, resulting in the emotional scenes being less sweet. It can only be said that it has a lot of mass plots. Those who like to watch slaps in the face + omnipotent protagonists will probably like it. However, Dumei, the protagonist of this type of revenge, is the best. After all, a strong person who has survived so many small world tasks will be more enjoyable to watch if he directly launches revenge methods.

Finally, there is a book that is not too outrageous and exaggerated, but is of a relatively normal and normal type. He wrote that paragraph very well. After all, how could a big company let him finish what he said? I think he really wrote this very well. The author is very awesome. Come on.

I've finished reading it, and it's probably a no-brainer. Hahaha, it's a fun read without having to use your brain. The protagonist has a lot of cheats and a lot of skills, and all the villains' IQs are off the mark, so revenge is just like a game. But it is quite relaxing and enjoyable to pass the time.

The writing and plot are both good, but... The author likes to insert his own words into the text... I was immersed in the story, but suddenly the plot was revealed from the author's perspective in parentheses. It was really a bit frustrating at that moment... And there are many such situations in the whole book... I think these words can be placed at the end of each chapter...

It looks good, it looks good, thank you to the author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡