One Shot Hits Your Heart

It's a very interesting article, with only one small request. Never let the protagonist forgive his mother for abandoning him. No matter what the reason is, this is not the reason for him to abandon his child!

Looking forward to this book. It's good. But it's best to read it with a calm mind, otherwise you may quit halfway through. Then the characters are also well described, and the article also covers things you don't know. It can be said that the author has worked very hard. Anyway, after reading it, I felt that I didn't read this book properly when I saw the recommendation. Now I'm going to school tomorrow. I don't want to do my homework, so I read a novel to vent, and then I saw this. Later I saw that the author updates on time every day, so I'm posting a book review here. I hope this book will get better and better in the end, and many people will read it.

It's really beautiful, but why no one sees it (yelling) (turn into a monkey) (fly into the virgin forest) (swing) (chuangfei passes by a monkey eating a banana) (roar) (turn into a monkey) (fly into the virgin forest) (swing the vines) (grab the banana and eat it in one bite) (exterminate the monkey group) (Dominate the forest) (Evolution) (Evolution) (Super evolution of the monkey beast) (Break out of the primeval forest and conquer human society) (Invent quantum weapons to recreate the cosmic cannon) (Drive a spaceship out of the solar system) (The ape star rises) (Dominate the universe) (Create banana-eating monkeys flying across the universe)

It is a novel that is more realistic. If you are used to having the aura of the protagonist, it may be a little hard to accept it for a while. The world is still very malicious towards mentally ill patients. Even a small amount of depression will be twisted into depression by the maliciousness of society. Overall, it's a very good novel [sending my heart]

I tied it all this afternoon, so let me write a comment. Overall it's a cookie, very nice. The protagonist is an autistic e-sports genius (savant syndrome). Join is not a weak little girl who can't take care of herself and suffers from burping and burping. I feel like the author has written down the powerful aspects of Join. (People with autism do not have intellectual problems. If someone writes that people with autism are so weak and unable to take care of themselves, then I will really go crazy [laughing and crying]). Gong's family is very rich, and he really treats the protagonist like a child. Author, please be kinder to Join. I really can't bear to see Join being bullied. The two posts I just updated gave me heartache. [Almost crying] Ps: There are some supporting characters in the article that I hate, such as the manager Fang Fan, but this character is still quite typical. Although I don't like him, I feel like this character makes this novel more realistic. There are some plots in the book that are not very exciting, but these plots made me feel like this is life. (A little emotion)

I love you so much. I love you so much. I'll update it soon. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. When will they get together? I really want to see them together. They must be so sweet. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's so beautiful. I had the feeling that I watched it for a while and then finished it very quickly, but it just wasn't enough. I didn't miss a chapter, and overall I didn't find it boring or boring. On the contrary, you will feel that the more you watch, the more you want to watch, and the more you watch, the more exciting it becomes.

The antidote and trigger for autism's join are both rock The writing style of this article is exquisite, and the explanation of professional game terms and character portrayal are very good, especially the very realist manager Fang Fan. But the ending is a bit rushed, some humble comments The situation of autism can be described more clearly to guide readers to experience the symptoms of children with this symptom, such as hysterical shouting and crying, emotional breakdown, etc. It can be described strongly In this way, you can better understand Rock's distress and anger when he was bullied by others. Let's mobilize your emotions. You can create a little surprise at the end, the proposal is a bit unsatisfactory, and you can also add the origin of autism, his mother did not explain why she left him, etc. Overall, it's okay, but the emotional refinement and the reader's emotional stimulation are a little less interesting (of course, this is compared with masterpieces). The author can ignore my suggestions. Your writing is great [Sending my heart]

Don't look at the short time I spent reading it. I read it in two numbers and on two mobile phones. I saw the end directly. It was pretty good. In my opinion, at least there were no flaws. The businessman Fang was a philistine, and there were good and bad, with more bad ones, but within the acceptable range. J's portrayal was very good. He was pure but not stupid, white but not saintly. R's highlights for me were not that There are so many (well, it's not that he is not good or has no contribution, but he has no bright spots. He semi-retired in the early stage but left a legend and later confirmed this legend. It is completely expected. Then in the middle, it feels like he is completely revolving around J. His personality is perfect and his work is reliable, but it is difficult to attract attention. 5A (should be this) can be remembered. There are quite a lot of places to stay. He is very skilled but reckless but listens to anyone who cares about him. He loves to swear and is quite narcissistic. He is familiar with old friendships but is nostalgic. He is also a good person and has good eyesight. The newcomer with J can also be soft-tempered but strong. What do you say about Bar? He is a nice person but he only becomes famous later in life. Wang Renzhao is a good person. There are some things about it, but I can only say that it's very eye-catching! !

It's very interesting, but a bit annoying [smile] Well... The character "Fang Fan" is really quite real. I thought about abandoning the article many times, but I still read it. Overall, it's very interesting [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's really a cookie. I really like the blue eyes. I can imagine the feeling of a Rua cat. It's like a noble ragdoll that only sticks to one person. Don't love it too much.

It looks good, but it looks a bit too much like AWM, but it's really good-looking. There is a section in the middle that is quite disturbing to watch.

After reading 3/2, I specially made a comment, extreme control/extreme attack and control, don't enter, because it will be really annoying, and some book reviews are the same. Some barrages are really too extreme and I can't stand it, but I still continue to read because I turned off the barrages [face covering] [smile] Finally, there may be bugs and loopholes in the text, which is obvious. But don't worry about it, as long as you don't care about it personally, just keep watching [face covering]

Overall good, with some issues I feel like writing Rock is a bit shy. Isn't he the captain? [Salute] Moreover, there is no word on whether Join's disease 1⃣️ has been cured. [Turns lips] Hard to comment After thinking about it for a while, I still feel that the character has collapsed and I don't understand some of Rock's behaviors [vomit]

Join is cute, but I don't like Fang Fan very much. Although I know that his behavior is just too realistic, it just doesn't feel right. However, the book is still very exciting, not the kind with a fast pace. Come on, I will keep chasing [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I feel that the follow-up is a bit sparse, and many details are not explained clearly, but overall it is still okay.

The content is quite good. The only flaw is that I borrowed a lot from a certain e-sports article. I hope you can stick to your heart. In fact, the content is very good. If you get stuck, you can think about it slowly. There is no need to borrow from it, but it is generally okay. I gave my evaluation objectively, and I did not criticize or criticize it. After all, what I said is the truth.

I personally feel this book is great! The author's writing characteristics are also very good. I personally like it very much. It may be said that people will abandon the article because of Fang Fan while reading it, but think about it, isn't this the case in today's society? When you first start working, you will have your own original intention, and slowly start to get promoted and get higher salary. There are very few people who retain their original intention. The author has created the character of Fang Fan very well. When he is in trouble, he will think about abandoning it and see that the other person has the value of using him. Then he will care about it in turn. Yi Xin's mother is also very good. She didn't say she was disappointed with him or anything. She supported her child and protected him very well without suppressing him. The author was also very attentive in the writing process [love] In short, this article is very good, please read it patiently [OK]

This book is very well written, but unfortunately I didn't finish it. I kept hesitating whether to abandon the article because it was too real and it made me feel a little sad [face covering]. I also have some symptoms such as separation anxiety. Gong is really good and can do his best. Because it is the main point of view of Shou, some of the feelings in the process are very uncomfortable. Attack can't save him, but it also gives him hope. Shou's heart goes up and down. To be honest, understand him and give up on him. Of course, Gong is really good. It can even be said that he is extremely benevolent. He really does his best and loves me very much. Shou is also very aggressive, and he puts himself in a relatively low position, which can be said to be to please. In fact, I think they are not a good match. It is a fact that they love each other, and it is easy to hurt each other. In the end, I think what the author wrote is too real [I almost cried] and it was uncomfortable to read.

The writing of this book is quite delicate, but there are mostly emotional lines. E-sports was mentioned later, but it was not that professional. But what impressed me the most was that Shou has autism, but he has watched Gong's games since he was a child and fell in love with him. Gong and Shou's mothers are also very good, and Shou's mother is really considerate of Shou. In the end, Shou gets sick, and then redeems each other. I think it is well written, and it is also the reason why I give this book a good review (because I am a bit lazy, and I usually only comment on well-written articles, so everyone can read it with confidence) [Send heartfelt] [Laughs]

I really like this super cute join. I really like Spongebob! Join bravely stepped out of his own world because he liked rock. Although he was scared, he was also very brave. I feel like Rock likes Join more than Join likes him. I don't particularly attach importance to liking rock (although I don't know how to play games, it doesn't affect my reading of e-sports articles)

The language of the article is very fluent and it also expresses real feelings. It's great! The author's ability to control "Xing San Shen Ju" is very strong. The whole article is written in one go, and the writing is like flowing water, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling! The smooth and vivid sentences are like the Lushan waterfall, flowing down in one go. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual. It seems to lead the readers to walk in the wilderness of the soul. The language is simple and unpretentious. The author's love and hate are included in the narrative, allowing readers to experience and think deeply. Your articles are as simple and open-minded as you are, and your articles are fresh, elegant, friendly, simple but not vulgar, and are worth learning from. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and real feelings, making it enjoyable to read. The writing is beautiful, fresh and full of philosophy. After reading this article, your article is like a slow flowing stream, elegant and smooth. The writing is beautiful, the emotions are sincere and delicate, and the descriptions in vivid and vivid language make readers feel as if they are in a dream. The language is lively, lively and full of interest. A large number of spoken words from daily life are used to make the article more natural and friendly. The language of this article is vivid, and the use of some exquisite words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article. The delicate language of the article renders the atmosphere fully and appropriately. The language of the article is very fluent and it also expresses real feelings. It's great! The author's ability to control "Xing San Shen Ju" is very strong. The whole article is written in one go, and the writing is like flowing water, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!

Actually, I don't really like to read e-sports articles, because I can't understand them [laughs awkwardly], but I feel that the author's writing is very good. This is one of the few that I have finished reading, but there are so few. I want to read the extras, I want to see their daily lives, I want to see the aftermath of BarBar, I want to see woo woo woo, I can't sleep if I want to see it, why are there so few [crying]

Ah ah ah ah ah, I love it so much, it's so beautiful [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] So true!

I haven't been watching it for long, and the plot, writing, and characters are all still online so far. When I see it now, it feels like it's a traditional e-sports sweet article. It's worth writing! Then there are some book reviews. I think the author's setting of the character is okay. After all, a person is not a diode and is either good or bad. As a team manager, first of all, he is paid, and he performs his duties in his position. As soon as he is working, he first cares about his own future, but that does not mean that he cares about his future and does not necessarily care about his team members. After all, there is a male protagonist in this book. It is normal for him to have emotions and lose his temper. His character definitely has a good side and a bad side. This kind of character design should be more three-dimensional.

A pretty good book! This book successfully made me comment passionately several times, and my emotions were completely aroused. This shows that the author is really awesome! I hope the author can describe it more carefully and better in the next book! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

There are relatively few descriptions of game operations, and more about the interaction between two people. It is relatively sweet, and the overall rhythm is fast. It can be read in one sitting without affecting the senses. Except that the two endings are very abrupt and I don't know if the description of autism is right or not, everything else is pretty good.

I really like this kind of character who has a soft personality but is very wild when playing games... When I read the introduction, I thought it was another article that used mental illness as a gimmick, but when I read it, I can see that the author really put his heart into it. It is easier for this cannibalistic society to swallow him up than to care for patients. The characters are well portrayed, including Fang Fan who has lost his original intention and Barbar who is bound by reality. In fact, if a person like Join is written about falling in love, it can easily be written as being mentally immature and being abducted. However, I don't feel it at all in the article. His goal is very clear. He is simple but his behavioral psychology is different from that of a child, so you won't feel guilty when you watch him fall in love. Although it is not a cool article, it is not sad either, but it is enough to make me feel distressed... Many things are not described in detail, and the World Championship is also briefly described. After the ending, I always feel a little unfinished.

Overall, it's good to watch. Fang Fan was so mad at jumping around in so many chapters. When something happened with Join later, it was a bit sadistic for the sake of being sadistic. No matter how busy Rock was, he didn't even send a phone call or text message. Every time he was about to say something, he was interrupted. Barbar didn't go to the new team later just to highlight Rock's appearance [face covering]

It's very good to read, Qin is really good ~ I like it, and the join is also a cute little angel. I love it. The details of the novel really touched me, and the short article is more in line with me now🥰 [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

It's good to watch, the plot is smooth and the writing is OK. The low rating may be because the ending ended too quickly, and the character development always felt like something was missing (the most fleshed-out one was the big bad guy!). However, the overall plot and narration are very smooth, and it is not too young. Overall, it is an e-sports article that you can read.