Uma Musume: Rampaging Through the Mortal Realm Like a Lunar Eclipse!

I set the height of some horse girls based on the oldest 16-year-old pv. After all, it is normal for a second creation to make some changes. There are some changes in the character design, mainly referring to the ones in [Lu Mao Cinderella] and Jockey Girl - Road to the Peak. Our main focus is cruel and passionate competition! There are a few strange writings, but nothing stinky. Otherwise, I would not have a clear idea when writing a book myself. So thank you to everyone who can read this book.

The writing style is quite excellent, which can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in Tomato. The writing style is wild and full of secondary sense and the characterization is just right. The problem lies in the author's control of the plot. A previous comment said that a small theater takes up a lot of space to promote the main plot. The animation is not very meaningful. It can be seen that the author is trying to portray the world in his novels fully, but it feels a bit fragmented to the readers. It's like I was ready to see you killing everyone, but then I turned around and you wrote 3 whole chapters of cooking. I hope the author can pay more attention to it. I am very surprised to see such quality fanfics on Tomato. Although there are flaws, there is still time to correct them. Maybe the author can go to the cw cat next door to check out Ling Yi? (Laughs) Learning from each other is also a way to make progress, so I will retain the 5-star rating for the time being and hope that the author will continue to work hard. If you really can't, go to Hedgehog next door. They are very tolerant of this kind of fandom there, and Ma Niang's writing style is also a clear stream there.

I know you want to get mad more. I understand (). How about giving more close-ups of the protagonist? Otherwise, you can read the content yourself. The protagonist is only exposed at the end, and the whole article is foreshadowing (big boo) 🧐. Personally, I still give it a five. Give the protagonist more roles😄

This horse racing girl has, uh, a sense of absurdity like Lin Daiyu uprooting a weeping willow, and a sense of explosion like Zhang Fei burying flowers.

Guys, I like the horse girl. Guys, I like the horse girl very much! Guys, I like the horse racing girl the most! I like deer-haired horses, chestnut-haired horses, reed-haired horses, white-haired horses, green-haired horses, black-haired horses, mud horses, turf horses, chasing horses, runaway horses, poor horses, short-distance horses, mile horses, long-distance horses... Of all the horses in the world with their colors, adaptability, and foot quality, I like them best... It's a pity, I didn't go crazy and read some weird stuff

Ox! Come on! Speaking of which, I would like to add more funny elements, such as adding some other famous scenes, memes, etc. That are original to me. By the way, I can also rework the dialogue part. Sometimes it is confusing to watch. I want to add more interactions with others. How should the trainer do it here?

It's so beautiful that it's ten or even nine out of ten (appreciation) and the author, you are so loyal and ruthless (happiness)

The ingredients are complex, the writing style is unique, and the seemingly complicated expression techniques give you a unique flavor when you read it carefully. Compared with Tomato's novice articles, it can be said to be the best or even the best! ❤️❤️❤️

Hey hey hey hey... Nice looking... Hey hey hey hey... So many and so good... Hey hey hey hey... Like being poked... Hey hey hey hey...

Identified as pure power generation, but it is very tasty, a giant in the second, but a handsome guy