I set the height of some horse girls based on the oldest 16-year-old pv. After all, it is normal for a second creation to make some changes.
There are some changes in the character design, mainly referring to the ones in [Lu Mao Cinderella] and Jockey Girl - Road to the Peak.
Our main focus is cruel and passionate competition! There are a few strange writings, but nothing stinky.
Otherwise, I would not have a clear idea when writing a book myself.
So thank you to everyone who can read this book.
This horse racing girl has, uh, a sense of absurdity like Lin Daiyu uprooting a weeping willow, and a sense of explosion like Zhang Fei burying flowers.
The writing style is quite excellent, which can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in Tomato. The writing style is wild and full of secondary sense and the characterization is just right. The problem lies in the author's control of the plot. A previous comment said that a small theater takes up a lot of space to promote the main plot. The animation is not very meaningful. It can be seen that the author is trying to portray the world in his novels fully, but it feels a bit fragmented to the readers. It's like I was ready to see you killing everyone, but then I turned around and you wrote a whole 3 chapters of cooking. I hope the author can pay more attention to it.
I am very surprised to see such quality fanfics on Tomato. Although there are flaws, there is still time to correct them. Maybe the author can go to the cw cat next door to check out Ling Yi? (Laughs) Learning from each other is also a way to make progress, so I will retain the 5-star rating for the time being and hope that the author will continue to work hard.
If you really can't, go to Hedgehog next door. They are very tolerant of this kind of fandom there, and Ma Niang's writing style is also a clear stream there.
I know you want to get mad more. I understand (). How about giving more close-ups of the protagonist? Otherwise, you can read the content yourself. The protagonist is only exposed at the end, and the whole article is foreshadowing (big boo) [exploration]. Personally, I still give it a five. Give the protagonist more roles😄
Hey guys, I like Jockey Girl
Guys, I really like the horse girl!
Guys, I like the horse racing girl the most!
I like deer-haired horses, chestnut-haired horses, reed-haired horses, white-haired horses, green-haired horses, black-haired horses, mud horses, turf horses, chasing horses, runaway horses, poor horses, short-distance horses, mile horses, long-distance horses... Of all the horses in the world with their colors, adaptability, and foot quality, I like them best...
It's a pity, I didn't go crazy and read some weird stuff
Ox! Come on! Speaking of which, I would like to add more funny elements, such as adding some other famous scenes, memes, etc. That are original to me. By the way, I can also rework the dialogue part. Sometimes it is confusing to watch. I want to add more interactions with others. How should the trainer do it here?
It's pretty good, ten or even nine (appreciation)
And the author, you are so loyal (happy)
Yay! Flaws do not hide the virtues! I love this book
Hey hey hey hey... Nice looking... Hey hey hey hey... So many and so good... Hey hey hey hey... Like being poked... Hey hey hey hey...
Identified as pure power generation, but it is very tasty, a giant in the second, but a handsome guy
The ingredients are complex, the writing style is unique, and the seemingly complicated expression techniques give you a unique flavor when you read it carefully. Compared with Tomato's novice articles, it can be said to be the best or even the best! [Love][love][love]
I really can't understand the picture. Please give the author more introduction. But five stars.
Good good good good good book
It suits my mental state very well [smile][smile]
Fried Chicken If you like this article, don't give up! Big!
I don't know what to say, so I can only say one word for watching, two words for good-looking, three words for very good-looking, four words for very good-looking, N words, what should I watch? Show it to me
Okay, it's quite good-looking, but I feel like there are a little few people there. I guess I'm not used to the slightly longer foreshadowing at the front, but overall, this book should still be very popular among interested readers.
It's okay. It feels like a hot-blooded comic.
It's a pity. I hope the author's next book will be released soon.
I like this weird book so much
Great, explosive book
Very very beautiful
Author, you are great, you update around 11pm every day, come on
Don't burn yourself to death [laughing evilly]
Feeling very explosive
but i like it very much
However, I feel that if I describe the protagonist a little more and refine the main line, it will be clearer.
It is recommended to use a good measure. I am really afraid that one day this book will suddenly disappear.
Super beautiful, believe me, beautiful
It's really booming
Okay, ours
Come on, watch it on time every day, it's still very enjoyable
Can we not mess up the hit or miss? This is a bit too hit or miss! ! !
It's okay, but why haven't I finished my debut race yet?
I set the height of some horse girls based on the oldest 16-year-old pv. After all, it is normal for a second creation to make some changes. There are some changes in the character design, mainly referring to the ones in [Lu Mao Cinderella] and Jockey Girl - Road to the Peak. Our main focus is cruel and passionate competition! There are a few strange writings, but nothing stinky. Otherwise, I would not have a clear idea when writing a book myself. So thank you to everyone who can read this book.
This horse racing girl has, uh, a sense of absurdity like Lin Daiyu uprooting a weeping willow, and a sense of explosion like Zhang Fei burying flowers.
The writing style is quite excellent, which can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in Tomato. The writing style is wild and full of secondary sense and the characterization is just right. The problem lies in the author's control of the plot. A previous comment said that a small theater takes up a lot of space to promote the main plot. The animation is not very meaningful. It can be seen that the author is trying to portray the world in his novels fully, but it feels a bit fragmented to the readers. It's like I was ready to see you killing everyone, but then I turned around and you wrote a whole 3 chapters of cooking. I hope the author can pay more attention to it. I am very surprised to see such quality fanfics on Tomato. Although there are flaws, there is still time to correct them. Maybe the author can go to the cw cat next door to check out Ling Yi? (Laughs) Learning from each other is also a way to make progress, so I will retain the 5-star rating for the time being and hope that the author will continue to work hard. If you really can't, go to Hedgehog next door. They are very tolerant of this kind of fandom there, and Ma Niang's writing style is also a clear stream there.
I know you want to get mad more. I understand (). How about giving more close-ups of the protagonist? Otherwise, you can read the content yourself. The protagonist is only exposed at the end, and the whole article is foreshadowing (big boo) [exploration]. Personally, I still give it a five. Give the protagonist more roles😄
Hey guys, I like Jockey Girl Guys, I really like the horse girl! Guys, I like the horse racing girl the most! I like deer-haired horses, chestnut-haired horses, reed-haired horses, white-haired horses, green-haired horses, black-haired horses, mud horses, turf horses, chasing horses, runaway horses, poor horses, short-distance horses, mile horses, long-distance horses... Of all the horses in the world with their colors, adaptability, and foot quality, I like them best... It's a pity, I didn't go crazy and read some weird stuff
Ox! Come on! Speaking of which, I would like to add more funny elements, such as adding some other famous scenes, memes, etc. That are original to me. By the way, I can also rework the dialogue part. Sometimes it is confusing to watch. I want to add more interactions with others. How should the trainer do it here?
It's pretty good, ten or even nine (appreciation) And the author, you are so loyal (happy)
Yay! Flaws do not hide the virtues! I love this book
Hey hey hey hey... Nice looking... Hey hey hey hey... So many and so good... Hey hey hey hey... Like being poked... Hey hey hey hey...
Identified as pure power generation, but it is very tasty, a giant in the second, but a handsome guy
The ingredients are complex, the writing style is unique, and the seemingly complicated expression techniques give you a unique flavor when you read it carefully. Compared with Tomato's novice articles, it can be said to be the best or even the best! [Love][love][love]
I really can't understand the picture. Please give the author more introduction. But five stars.
Good good good good good book It suits my mental state very well [smile][smile]
Fried Chicken If you like this article, don't give up! Big!
I don't know what to say, so I can only say one word for watching, two words for good-looking, three words for very good-looking, four words for very good-looking, N words, what should I watch? Show it to me
Okay, it's quite good-looking, but I feel like there are a little few people there. I guess I'm not used to the slightly longer foreshadowing at the front, but overall, this book should still be very popular among interested readers.
It's okay. It feels like a hot-blooded comic.
It's a pity. I hope the author's next book will be released soon.
I like this weird book so much
Great, explosive book
Very very beautiful
Author, you are great, you update around 11pm every day, come on Don't burn yourself to death [laughing evilly]
Feeling very explosive but i like it very much However, I feel that if I describe the protagonist a little more and refine the main line, it will be clearer.
It is recommended to use a good measure. I am really afraid that one day this book will suddenly disappear.
Super beautiful, believe me, beautiful
It's really booming
Okay, ours
Come on, watch it on time every day, it's still very enjoyable
Can we not mess up the hit or miss? This is a bit too hit or miss! ! !
It's okay, but why haven't I finished my debut race yet?