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It's okay so far, but my strong physique is not reflected. It's so grinding, your scalp feels numb when you look at it, isn't it heaven for you to suck blood and become stronger at level 6 or even the entire prison? Can you run away after eating everything? The moji explanation is a lot of nonsense. Now that you have the strength, do you still need a younger brother? You yourself said that you can control the vampire's first love. It really makes your scalp numb and you can't stand it anymore.

The writing is okay. It doesn't matter if you start a harem, but don't accept one after another. Just write a pornographic novel.

What the author has written so far is interesting. I hope it won't be written as a bulldozer novel, and that the female protagonists won't be written as tools just for the sake of a rosy plot. When asking the author to accept a harem, he must ensure that the plots of the female protagonists are online. Successful harem novels will control the number of female protagonists. I just hope the author can keep writing so much. It's hard to find better books. I've already charged for updates.

Come on, this is a rare good book about One Piece. It has its own style and charm. It should be in the harem tourism category.

I finished reading it in one go. Although the understanding of Haki in this book is a little different from what the public thinks, it is acceptable to me who gave up on pirates after the Wano Country chapter. Theoretically, it is generally self-consistent. The most important thing is that the previous chapters can be read in one go. Come on, author, take good care of you

Since the time of the Valley of Gods was revealed, Garp has become a clown and the navy has become a completely evil force. Although it cannot be denied that some marines are good people, in the world of One Piece, being a pirate is better than being a navy. I just saw the latest commentary on Douyin, Poni's mother. Kinney's Sapphire Disease is a side effect of Sartan's experiment on extracting fruit power.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it's actually pretty good, with a score of 8.0-8.5. After all, it's a fanfic. It's normal to supplement and add settings. Although the results are a bit outrageous, it's not easy to expand without going too far. As long as the details are not overly detailed, this book can still be read.

I liked the first half, but I didn't like it very much after that. It would be great if you could make all the characters except the protagonist female. As for the subordinates, you could use the devil fruit to make a golden finger and become stronger in two days, or improve his physique and make his women stronger, or make him a vampire king or something. A ship full of people are all emperors, which is no better than a bunch of subordinates. I like to see a ship full of women, but the protagonist is a man, and then each woman has her own role, not a vase, come on.

Good! Come on! I hope I won't be a eunuch

It's written, I quite like it anyway.

Five-star reviews are not negotiable. Finally, there is a decent careerist, not the kind of Long Aotian who blames the sky, the earth, and the air.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, come on, come on, come on The Empress and the Golden Emperor can definitely become allies

Bats rely on sound waves, so the sense of sight, hearing and color can be strengthened.

At first I thought it was just an ordinary Liu Bei Stallion novel, but the writing got better and better as it went on. It was very exciting. The Moon Theory section shocked me. If you like pirates, I highly recommend reading it.

Apart from anything else, the setting of Seven Moons in Chapter 57 is quite genius. If Oda uses your setting, remember to sue him for infringement [face covering] [face covering]

Not invincible in the traditional sense Instead of following the boat, the protagonist's journey takes a different path It's not a single female lead but she doesn't have many roles, so it's a huge hit The fighting scene is very good, it feels like a big scene Especially the plan to advance the city after fighting with Zefa in the early stage can be said to be very interesting. It feels like the foreshadowing comes one after another but filling in the holes is slow. And the most important thing is the author's excellent writing skills, I Gan, excellent

Bats should have ultrasound!

The protagonist has a good character, and the plot design is smart and reasonable. However, I was restless and kept jumping all the way through the movie. You can understand this, this is a romance of the Three Kingdoms in the context of pirates, that is, the protagonist is involved but the intensity is moderate, but the pace is fast when viewed as the Three Kingdoms, and the pace is slow when viewed as a pirate, so the enjoyment depends on the individual. Finally. . It was well written, but suddenly it disappeared. But why I gave it 4 stars is because I knew he had stopped watching before I started watching, so the score is only for the writing, plot and imagination.

Urgent update! ! ! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! So pretty! ! ! I like this crisp style! ! !

The most outstanding vampire fruit development, the plot I wrote is quite good [Eating Melon] However, I still have doubts about Zefa's Overlord color. I have watched some anime, and in the information card, only Sengoku and Garp of the Navy faction have Overlord colors. It is also said that Garp is the embodiment of the ultimate will. I have also read many fans. This is the first time I have seen Zefa with Overlord color.

It's the most enjoyable thing I've seen so far. The only problem is that there are some timelines that seem to be a little different from what I understand, and there are some private settings, but they don't hinder the viewing experience [Like]

Very good, keep it up first

Yes, the author's book is of good quality.

The book is great! Most of the pirate movies I have watched are very good. This one has brains, ambition, and a plan. It is not limited to the original work, but it is darker. It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this. I saw Chapter 80 and came to comment. This is my first book and I reviewed it before I finished reading it. Come on, the author, don't stop updating after it's finished!

After watching the first few pictures, I really like this style of protagonist and hope that the protagonist can maintain a strong character.

Borrowing from the author's comment section, I'm a bit of a book reader. Is there any older brother who has read the novel about One Piece where the protagonist ate the artificial blue dragon fruit, killed the Kirin King on the Precious Beast Island, and then snatched the Seven Star Sword?

Come on, the writing is great

Very good, please have more!

After Impel Down, it seems that the hang-up is too big. The male protagonist can have all the Devil Fruit abilities in Impel Down. Normally, this is a configuration that can defeat the Five Old Stars. Before Impel Down, the male protagonist was still a Shichibukai who was not domineering. After coming out, he is almost invincible.

When will it be updated? Also, you have dug too many holes, fill them in slowly, and don't think about opening a new book.