After Getting the Redemption Script, I Had Sex with the Short-Lived Male Protagonist.

When I traveled to each world to do tasks as a business owner and emotional assistant, it looked very good. Starting from the part where I deceived the male protagonist to be his great-aunt, it didn't look that good. [Personal experience] I obviously felt that I was accelerating the advancement of the emotional line. The task felt like there could be a faster way to solve the Queen Mother. The heroine's soul and body can prepare medicines and serve bowls, so she can also do other things, but um. . . There are more scenes of getting along with the male protagonist. Anyway, I personally feel that the task is quite delayed. The main theme is to get along with the male protagonist. Later, when I watched PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds, I have already begun to reveal my identity and fight with the aborigines against more than a dozen villains. Going forward, the chapter title should also focus on the emotional line. I personally think it is best when the female protagonist's career line is the main one and the emotional line is secondary. After the priority changes, it is not so interesting. I am currently in a situation where I don't really want to pursue it and I don't really want to take it off the bookshelf. The book I mentioned above is very beautiful, the writing is good, interesting and not artificial, and it doesn't feel aggrieved. It doesn't feel like there is anything wrong with it. . . .

I gave this a pretty good four stars because I felt that the character of the heroine was not as good as originally planned. I really, really loved the first world! ! ! If anyone finds this book, I really recommend reading the first world. Whether it's the female protagonist or the male protagonist, I really like the character creation. However, the more you read later, I feel... Well, I'm a little disappointed. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on, I look forward to the wonderful stories in the future. It was really great at the beginning, but it didn't feel so good later on... Author, please keep going [crying][crying][crying]

I read it in one go and the author's writing is really good, especially the first world. Parts of it are very similar to my experience with my ex-boyfriend (I won't say more about this, it's a bit off topic. I'll talk about it if anyone wants to hear it). I feel that the writing is very real. The feelings gained through deception, no matter how long it lasts, will always be fake. The beautiful young man with white hair and no confidence in his appearance in the second world really hit me hard. Especially the kind of movie where you are no longer as beautiful as you used to be (the male protagonist thinks) but your lover still has the same inferiority complex as before. Everyone, go watch it. You will be confused at first glance.

This book is much better than most. At least there is no female rivalry, and it is not a cover-up to abuse the heroine. It is a good one that I finally found, and the heroine has an interesting character and can be written well.

Okay, great, super nice article! I clicked on the author's homepage of Dada. It turns out that I have already read and finished Dada's book. Dada's writing style is still as smooth as ever, and he portrays Sui Fan well. I really like the little diary of the first assistant in the world. It suddenly made the flat image of a gadget man three-dimensional [Adoration]

Although the beginning of the story is bad, even though the author made typos and omissions and even mistyped the name of the male protagonist numerous times, although some male protagonists in the small world are too self-centered and paranoid, although the emotional line between men and women in the small world at the end is so heart-breaking💥 (the missing star is here [smile]). But everyone has to admit that in terms of the completion of a work, the author is much better than many Tomato novels. Perhaps the timing text of the male and female protagonists is not very smooth at the beginning, but as you go to the end, the progress becomes more obvious. The most fascinating thing about this book is the male protagonist's forbearance and love that is as white as the snow. The female protagonist puts her own interests first in everything and does not sway her goals and decisions because of her feelings when she faces emotional misunderstandings. In a sense, the be between the first small world and the last small world elevates this novel to a level that is different from other romances. With a huge and insurmountable emotional gap between the two, how the male and female protagonists deal with their emotions, how to exercise discretion, and how to separate because of love, entanglement for a lifetime. This proposition is called back in the last small world. "It's cold, go home early."

The plot is well written, especially the heroine is very interesting. She is a talented worker who is also very good at making jokes. There are all kinds of quotations from the sidekicks at your fingertips. The interaction with the system is also very funny. Overall, it is very enjoyable to watch. The only problem is that the emotional line is very confusing. The male and female protagonists have always been attracted to each other and met each other, but they still maintain the feeling of undercurrents and testing each other. The most common interaction between the two of them is bickering. I really didn't expect that the male protagonist would suddenly be so deeply in love that he would die. It felt like this. . . I watched two hundred episodes of SpongeBob SquarePants and Mr. Krabs, and then the last episode told me that what I was watching was actually Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, and that Liang Shanbo was almost dead. . . . . . . ? Um? ? ? ? ? ? ? I'm still in Makabaka, why are you so in love all of a sudden? [Pouts] It's not that the writing is not good, it's just that the style of painting has changed, but it may also be my personal problem. I have never liked watching funny characters suddenly talk about serious relationships. But I will continue to read it. The heroine probably has some reason why she doesn't accept feelings easily, but I still hope that the tone of the story can stay a little more cheerful~

Why is no one watching? It's really beautiful! It's a nice quick-wear piece that I finally found after my book shortage! Real! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people, the writing is really good! The interaction between the host and the system is super fun and especially cute! The author is definitely a lovely and interesting person [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I hope this book can be completed smoothly. I will come back after I pass the exam. Author, you must not let me down [shy] Ahhhhhhhhh I said it! It turns out that he is the same author as the Blackened Sword Master! ! ! I like it very much, I like it very much [love] [love] [love]

It's been a long time since I wrote a book review. I finally read another well-written novel, and the relationship between the host and the system is also very humorous. It was really fun to read the whole book. The plot is very compact throughout and the heroine has always been bking. I love it! It's rare for a book with such good writing to be popular, I don't understand. But when it becomes popular in the future, I will be an old fan [laughing evilly]

The full text has a very clear logic and outline. After experiencing several worlds, it is natural to cut to the past of the heroine, the first encounter between the heroine and the hero, and their future. In the early stage, I always thought that the heroine was a cold-hearted person, but after reading it, I felt that I should not define her so casually. She is a living person, and she just made her choice. The final ending feels a bit... Hasty [Crying] Maybe everyone will discuss that the heroine loves the hero not as much as the hero loves the heroine, but after reading the heroine's experience, you will feel that she can still learn to love people, and she can be so optimistic. She really deserves to be a heroine. The ex-wife kept laughing, but she couldn't stop crying in the later period. Although my tears were low, I think this novel can really be called the top of the tomato, it is very interesting!

It looks so good. I think the author really portrayed the characters very delicately and with flesh and blood. Not only the male and female protagonists, but also the minor characters are all vividly and three-dimensionally described. Like [admiration] [blowing kiss]

The writing style of this book is really great. It is humorous at the beginning and has three views. Especially when describing Sui Fan's life at the end, the writing style is simple. The straightforward and simple language describes the turmoil and cruelty of that period, and the expression of emotions directly touches the heart. Moreover, each world is well written, there is nothing super, they are all normal descriptions of the development of various characters. After I almost finished reading this book, I discovered that the author has written four books in total. Counting this one, I have read three in total, but this book is undoubtedly the best. I like the system of this book and the happy atmosphere of Sui Fan. The exchanges between the two of them are enough to make up a book of quotations. It's so funny! I really like how the system curses from time to time, hahahaha, it's so cute! Moreover, the system really loves Sui Fan. From the very beginning, "Sui Fan, you have defiled my male protagonist!" To "Damn male protagonist, you actually led Sui Fan astray!", He is indeed my mother's leaky little cotton-padded jacket! I like Sui Fan's line the most: "She had to kneel on the ground and beg him not to die as soon as he was punched." Hahahahaha! ! ! I also really want to read the story of Uncle Ji and Aunt Ji, it's really exciting! And what the second aunt said was so insightful and to the point, I loved it!

Very good. Is this considered a low start and a high move? It doesn't count, drive higher and go higher, that's right. When I first started the first small world, I found that many people were confused about the ending. It seems that everyone is thinking about the life and love they will live, but as a pure love, I can't accept the sand in my eyes. I think it is normal. Two perfectionists can't and will not give up their original personalities and original inappropriateness just because they like it. If anyone is dissatisfied with the ending, I suggest you watch the extras first, but I feel it will be a lot less fun. The finale tells about Sui Fan's original life. The system is also full of contrast. I like it. The male protagonist is also as cold as ever, an indifferent husband vs. The money-loving and arrogant female protagonist () I also like the extras, Sui Fan is as good as ever, the male protagonist is as cold as ever + briquettes, I like it, Sui Fan and the others are evenly matched, but Sui Fan is still better. This is the real female channel. If you love a girl, you will fall in love with Sui Fan from any angle, and the male protagonist has long forgotten where he is (I don't even remember the male protagonist's name [laughs]

Why did I just read such a beautiful book? ! ! ! ! ! I cried several times because of my true feelings, and it was so well written! ! ! Both the male and female protagonists are intelligent and capable, and they are neither stupid nor sweet. The writing style is light-hearted and funny with a little bit of sadism. I, who don't like mindless sadism at all, actually really like the author's occasional tragic moments, because they fit the plot so well, and the transitions are very smooth! ! ! Top 3 favorites! ! ! A must-see! ! ! No regrets! ! ! Real feelings tap water, this is my first time reading a big book, I'm going to look for new books!

Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. It's really very good-looking. I can't figure out why this book's rating is a bit low. The writing style is super, super, super good. The stories in each world are also very interesting. I didn't find it boring. It's boring, but this one is different). What surprised me the most was the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. In fact, in the first small world, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists faded very quickly (which is acceptable, but I just reluctantly accepted it), but after seeing the following Extra (Small World is over, it should be considered an extra), I can really feel that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is very real and reasonable (I have actually read a lot of novels, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists came very quickly, which made me feel overwhelmed), and finally , thank you very much for writing such a beautiful story. In my heart, they are all real people with flesh and blood, but they live a good life in a place where we can't see. I am honored to see their stories [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's really good to read, I highly recommend it. I just watched the first world, but the author's writing really touched me. I like both the male and female protagonists. They are strong, rationalist, and philosophical. It's really great, and the writing is also very good.

It's really very good-looking. What's good about it is that it's not just a text to pass the time without thinking. Its advantage is that it won't make you feel aggrieved on purpose, deliberately make some twists and turns, and then tell you what this is called realistic depth. It's fun but not mindless. The logic is clear and the writing is simple and clear, not a bunch of stuff. The overlapping vocabulary and the foreshadowing of each story, I really like the three stories in the final complete structure, which makes this article more complete. The closed loop is very enjoyable, and I still have more to say after reading it. I have accidentally read the author's other articles before, and I randomly saw it again this time. As expected, it is well written and I will fall in love with it again and again. Looking forward to my wife writing a new book!

It's great to watch. The plots in each world are so funny. The system is useless, so I just complain about it. The characters are very three-dimensional and down-to-earth. The female protagonist is the male protagonist who saves every world, not to gain favor, so she doesn't feel like a licking dog, which is very humble. Although there are also workers who are forced to work, but what kind of worker is a good worker if he doesn't scold the boss~? Only the first world is not together, the rest are together. The last one is a story about the growth of the system. The world was not very good, it was a bit like falling in love and killing each other, but the heroine obviously didn't love each other that much. Maybe it was because it was relatively short, and there wasn't much description of the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists. It was a very frustrating world. It kind of echoes the beginning and the end. The first world also has unexplainable secrets, so we can't be together. This world has a malicious beginning, so there can't be an ending. It's uncomfortable~ but overall it's good to watch.

I just finished reading The Third World and checked in... There were laughter and tears, he and be, even when the tears fell, I still felt sweet... The author's writing is good, and the plot in the small world is also very full... It's not the sweetness of a simple love story. Especially when the first world ended, I was completely confused... But I briefly read the last chapter first. I think this should give me a kind of love that can let people lick their wounds and be brave again. Pfft... I finished reading... As expected, reading the last part first and then the front part will lead to reading comprehension errors [laughing and crying] Originally, I thought that the male protagonist almost hurt the female protagonist, and then chased her in different worlds... It turned out to be completely different... [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Each small world story is quite good, and some people will like the world behind it, which is quite sweet. , But I prefer the first few worlds, with a real sweetness or sourness... You can choose according to your taste. Anyway, except for the first world, I was a he, the others were a he... Warning, I almost thought the third world was a be, but I didn't expect it to be a he [laughing and crying] Tiandao's mother can never resist her own son becoming a demon...

I marveled at the author's description. The characters are full-bodied and emotional. The past makes people feel powerless and sad. However, becoming a small person and a law enforcer are two turning points. The former is the restart of her life, and the latter is Xuan Yan's hope of getting close to her. This story is beautiful and desirable. I just always wonder if I can see them again and look forward to their future life.

Wonderful, the storyline is very attractive, you can read it from beginning to end. In the first world, the male and female protagonists were not together, so I thought that the rest of them would be like this. When I looked at the rest of it with a sadistic thought, I found that it was very sweet. In the end, I found that this was a foreshadowing, and it also solved the doubts about why the first world was not together but the later ones were together. [What] But only from the perspective of the male protagonist, I still don't understand it from the perspective of the female protagonist. I hope it can be clarified. Usually the male and female protagonists will be happy together if they return to the fast-travel bureau together, but this book tells the story of the two meeting each other, which is really exciting and interesting. In the end, the male protagonist still fell in love with the female protagonist even though he was a vicious mountain bandit, and the male protagonist's image became more plump and three-dimensional. In the end, the male protagonist did not ask the female protagonist to love him. He understood the female protagonist's experience, so [Like]

It's super, super good-looking, but there are a lot of typos, but the writing is very good, and the characters are well developed. The male and female protagonists have distinct personalities, which is very good-looking. Both are hard-working, and the system is differentiated by the female protagonist herself, so she understands each other very well, and bickering and other things are hilarious. I recommend this author's books. They are really good. I have read several of them and they are all very good. In the first small world, the male and female protagonists are not together, but they are both single until old age. The male protagonist knows the true identity of the female protagonist, so the two are destined to never be together. I think this ending is very normal. The male protagonist insists on breaking through the window paper, and the two people know each other very well. Once there is a gap between the two, it is impossible to get back together. The other small worlds seem to be all about he. The ending of this book is that the two of them are together, which is quite interesting.

The writing is really good, the author has a clever idea, the love between children is not only the love between children, but also the depth of time on individuals. The first world and the small world in the finale made me worried and regretful, until I saw that sentence, because the kitten has not learned more ways to act coquettishly because it has been too hard, and I feel relieved. I like the second world the most. In addition, after reading, the fog gradually dissipates, my mind fluctuates with the events, and the context of the article becomes clearer and clearer, until it suddenly becomes clear. It's so happy. It's a good book! You must read it. It's been a long time since I've read such a beautiful book. I'm going to wear it soon! !

Personally I think it's very interesting. The characters of the male and female protagonists are not ridiculous. The female protagonist's personality is more out-of-the-box, and the system is also fun to criticize others. This system is really different from the ones I have seen before. It feels very vivid and interesting. It was a little sad not to be together in the first world, but it also felt quite reasonable. It was not an overly heart-wrenching plot, but it made people feel regretful every time they thought about it. In the last world (system growth story), the two of them are not really together anymore. They each have their own thoughts and 800 different ideas. Even if the male protagonist later becomes interested in the female protagonist, the purpose is not pure at the beginning. There is always a gap between the two, which is reasonable and regrettable. All other worlds are happy endings. I think the writing style is okay. Those regretful and heart-wrenching parts don't make people feel blunt, and some details are also handled very well. For example, when the male protagonist in the first world died, he said "It's cold, go home early."

The writing is so good, the beginning and the end echo each other. I cried in the first article and cried in the last article. The author is cruel enough and earned me enough tears [crying][crying] The male protagonist is a love brain from the beginning to the end. Whether it is the small world or the main plot, it is basically love at first sight. He falls in love first and then secretly attacks the female protagonist. The female protagonist is very sensible (although I feel that in the small world, the female protagonist also favors the male protagonist. The male protagonist always pursues him briefly, or he just mentions it and agrees before he starts chasing). Although the last little story is very sad, I think the female protagonist's feelings are The description is very rich. I think that after experiencing so many sufferings, the heroine should be such a cold-hearted person. She should love money and herself, and should not give all her love to another person. Her other half should be active, enthusiastic, wholehearted, and full of her. Even I think it is not enough, because the cat has suffered so much before she has grown up. How can she love others? But she has saved many people, and she deserves the purest love, just like the pure and passionate love of the male protagonist in the small world, which is worthy of her staying for a moment. But if there is a flaw in this love (just like the last chapter of Little System), even just a little bit, she can quickly withdraw and treat her coldly. I think Sui Fan is more satisfying as the heroine in my mind. She suffered a lot, but still saved so many people in such a miserable world. With her merits, her character, and her inner strength, Xuan Yan must always love her, give her the most love, and make up for her childhood suffering with a future full of love. [Sending Hearts]

That's it. Delicious quick travel has whetted my appetite. It breaks out of the limitations of homogeneity and cookie-cutter plot settings. Each world has its own delicious food. The interaction between Tong and Fan Fan was just right funny (I was so happy that I couldn't compare to the talented players after being teased all night long), which relieved the tension in some places. The male protagonist's love brain is really suitable for complex physiques. The young couple should stay sweet in their own world. (Took out a cloth to wipe away the non-existent tears.) It's gold! Delicious, love to eat, eat more I must revisit it when the memory fades.

I only watched the world of my brother. I am not very interested in the characters before and after. As for the part I watched, it is the style that I like. The female protagonist has a more funny and free character. The description of the male protagonist when they are together in the back is a bit greasy. They get along very naturally and harmoniously. I prefer this kind of natural quick wear. It is quite good and not too noob.

The author writes really well, the storyline, characters, and writing are all very good. I especially love the heroine's character, it's vivid and interesting. The rating of this article is only about eight points, which is too low. It's a pity that it didn't become a big hit [crying] The only drawback is that there are too many typos, which somewhat affects the reading experience. I hope the author will change it when he has time [blowing kiss]

It's super good-looking, the plot is exciting, and the characters are vivid. The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops quickly and without any delay. You have to watch it to the end to know why the heroine and the system have such personalities. That is. . . I want to know that after the heroine arrives at the World Management Center, her ability is to devour, so what is her true form like?

Fixed cp There is sugar and there is a knife. The plot changes quickly. The last world comes unexpectedly, which is great. Recommendation index four stars! I left one star because my favorite thing recently is no cp or no fixed cp.