After Getting the Redemption Script, I Had Sex with the Short-Lived Male Protagonist.

When I traveled to each world to do tasks as a business owner and emotional assistant, it looked very good. Starting from the part where I deceived the male protagonist to be his great-aunt, it didn't look that good. [Personal experience] I obviously felt that I was accelerating the advancement of the emotional line. The task felt like there could be a faster way to solve the Queen Mother. The heroine's soul and body can prepare medicines and serve bowls, so she can also do other things, but um. . . There are more scenes of getting along with the male protagonist. Anyway, I personally feel that the task is quite delayed. The main theme is to get along with the male protagonist. Later, when I watched PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds, I have already begun to reveal my identity and fight with the aborigines against more than a dozen villains. Going forward, the chapter title should also focus on the emotional line. I personally think it is best when the female protagonist's career line is the main one and the emotional line is secondary. After the priority changes, it is not so interesting. I am currently in a situation where I don't really want to pursue it and I don't really want to take it off the bookshelf. The book I mentioned above is very beautiful, the writing is good, interesting and not artificial, and it doesn't feel aggrieved. It doesn't feel like there is anything wrong with it. . . .

I gave this a pretty good four stars because I felt that the character of the heroine was not as good as originally planned. I really, really loved the first world!!! If anyone finds this book, I really recommend reading the first world. Whether it's the female protagonist or the male protagonist, I really like the character creation. However, the more you read later, I feel... Well, I'm a little disappointed. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on, I look forward to the wonderful stories in the future. It was really great at the beginning, but it didn't feel so good later on... Author, please keep going 😢😢😢

I read it in one go and the author's writing is really good, especially the first world. Parts of it are very similar to my experience with my ex-boyfriend (I won't say more about this, it's a bit off topic. I'll talk about it if anyone wants to hear it). I feel that the writing is very real. The feelings gained through deception, no matter how long it lasts, will always be fake. The beautiful young man with white hair and no confidence in his appearance in the second world really hit me hard. Especially the kind of movie where you are no longer as beautiful as you used to be (the male protagonist thinks) but your lover still has the same inferiority complex as before. Everyone, go watch it. You will be confused at first glance.

This book is much better than most. At least there is no female rivalry, and it is not a cover-up to abuse the heroine. It is a good one that I finally found, and the heroine has an interesting character and can be written well.

Okay, great, super nice article! I clicked on the author's homepage of Dada. It turns out that I have already read and finished Dada's book. Dada's writing style is still as smooth as ever, and he portrays Sui Fan well. I really like the little diary of the first assistant in the world. It suddenly made the flat image of a gadget man three-dimensional 🥰

Although the beginning of the story is bad, even though the author made typos and omissions and even mistyped the name of the male protagonist numerous times, although some male protagonists in the small world are too self-centered and paranoid, although the emotional line between men and women in the small world at the end is so heart-breaking💥 (the missing star is here 🙂). But everyone has to admit that in terms of the completion of a work, the author is much better than many Tomato novels. Perhaps the timing text of the male and female protagonists is not very smooth at the beginning, but as you go to the end, the progress becomes more obvious. The most fascinating thing about this book is the male protagonist's forbearance and love that is as white as the snow. The female protagonist puts her own interests first in everything and does not sway her goals and decisions because of her feelings when she faces emotional misunderstandings. In a sense, the be between the first small world and the last small world elevates this novel to a level that is different from other romances. With a huge and insurmountable emotional gap between the two, how the male and female protagonists deal with their emotions, how to exercise discretion, and how to separate because of love, entanglement for a lifetime. This proposition is called back in the last small world. "It's cold, go home early."

The plot is well written, especially the heroine is very interesting. She is a talented worker who is also very good at making jokes. There are all kinds of quotations from the sidekicks at your fingertips. The interaction with the system is also very funny. Overall, it is very enjoyable to watch. The only problem is that the emotional line is very confusing. The male and female protagonists have always been attracted to each other and met each other, but they still maintain the feeling of undercurrents and testing each other. The most common interaction between the two of them is bickering. I really didn't expect that the male protagonist would suddenly be so deeply in love that he would die. It felt like this. . . I watched two hundred episodes of SpongeBob SquarePants and Mr. Krabs, and then the last episode told me that what I was watching was actually Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, and that Liang Shanbo was almost dead. . . . . . . ? Um??????? I'm still in Makabaka, why are you so in love all of a sudden? [Pouts] It's not that the writing is not good, it's just that the style of painting has changed, but it may also be my personal problem. I have never liked watching funny characters suddenly talk about serious relationships. But I will continue to read it. The heroine probably has some reason why she doesn't accept feelings easily, but I still hope that the tone of the story can stay a little more cheerful~

Why is no one watching? It's really beautiful! It's a nice quick-wear piece that I finally found after my book shortage! Real! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people, the writing is really good! The interaction between the host and the system is super fun and especially cute! The author is definitely a lovely and interesting person [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I hope this book can be completed smoothly. I will come back after I pass the exam. Author, you must not let me down 😳 Ahhhhhhhhh I said it! It turns out that he is the same author as the Blackened Sword Master!!! I like it very much, I like it very much ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The full text has a very clear logic and outline. After experiencing several worlds, it is natural to cut to the past of the heroine, the first encounter between the heroine and the hero, and their future. In the early stage, I always thought that the heroine was a cold-hearted person, but after reading it, I felt that I should not define her so casually. She is a living person, and she just made her choice. The final ending feels a bit... Hasty 😢 Maybe everyone will discuss that the heroine loves the hero not as much as the hero loves the heroine, but after reading the heroine's experience, you will feel that she can still learn to love people, and she can be so optimistic. She really deserves to be a heroine. The ex-wife kept laughing, but she couldn't stop crying in the later period. Although my tears were low, I think this novel can really be called the top of the tomato, it is very interesting!

It's been a long time since I wrote a book review. I finally read another well-written novel, and the relationship between the host and the system is also very humorous. It was really fun to read the whole book. The plot is very compact throughout and the heroine has always been bking. I love it! It's rare for a book with such good writing to be popular, I don't understand. But when it becomes popular in the future, I will be an old fan 😏