After My Confession Was Rejected, I Turned Around and Had Sex with the Cool School Beauty

It's good-looking, the emotions are well described, not abrupt, not brainless, and the transitions are very good. The only shortcoming is that the plot progress is a little slow, 200,000 words long, and it is still in the school plot. In terms of career, apart from making tens of thousands of dollars from stocks, the rest has not been revealed, but it is not too boring. I hope the author will finish writing the college entrance examination plot soon.

Why do I feel like an old father raising his daughter when I look at it [face covering]

Why do I feel like I've been reborn for nothing? How come this straight guy has been chasing the school beauty for seven years and doesn't know how to pick up girls?

It's hard to find an urban article that I like to read, but I didn't expect that it hasn't been updated much yet. It's noisy. The author should update it quickly.

From the time when Su Qingyan brought the male protagonist home to meet her parents when she was a junior, it was the male protagonist who failed the family test, including Su Qingyan teasing the male protagonist at the banquet. In the end, the male protagonist had to separate from Su Qingyan because his father was ill. So Su Qingyan didn't raise fish, but the male protagonist failed the test and had to be separated. In this aspect, Su Qingyan has to be cleared if she wants to open a harem. Su Qingyan has been cleared in this aspect. Of course, it is certain that she has princess disease.

It's pretty good, at least the writing is above the passing mark. Many people would probably say that this kind of fish-raising heroine can get away with it? First of all, in the first chapter, it was explained that he was hanging all the time, not that he was riding a donkey to find a horse. This should imply whitewashing. I think this is the best way to deal with it because many authors can't write about the viciousness of their ex-girlfriends, which makes readers feel uncomfortable.

Not bad, not bad

Not bad. Why is the rating so low?

It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it

Daily life that is plain and gentle yet still warm and undistorted

I just want to ask what timeline this is and what year it is?

Happy New Year to everyone

I don't understand the necessity of Bai Yueguang's appearance so far.

A book with a reasonable plot

The structure is quite clear and the rhythm is well controlled and it is close to reality!

The writing is great, thank you for the vivid descriptions of the characters.