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The author actually wrote this book very well. Really, I read it carefully and have been following it now. I feel that it is very good for the family. There should be no problem with any ginseng that comes with a 200 annual fee. It should be more difficult to get the Foundation Establishment Pill later, because practicing Qi to Foundation Establishment is a big threshold. You should know all the materials for refining the Foundation Establishment Pill. Being controlled by the sect and the aristocratic family, and then feeling silent in the later stage until the foundation building stage, then they have to transform. The third and fourth generations have to enter the sect to experience and look for opportunities to advance to the golden elixir. The third and fourth generations should also learn about weapon refining, and which formations and other side jobs, etc. My lord, the author's writing is quite good now. I still think highly of the author. Come on.

The protagonist is well portrayed, very ordinary, very ordinary, gets along well with his wife, and has a good farming style.

I haven't seen too much of it yet, so I won't say too much about the plot. It's pretty good except for being a bit bland. I also want to highlight the heroine you wrote. Although she doesn't have many scenes, you really captured the feeling between the husband and wife and the feeling of a good wife and loving mother. I can't figure out why the protagonist doesn't pretend to build a foundation? You are the flag of the family and the protagonist, but you are acting as a secret guard. The feeling of pleasure is directly negative. It seems aggrieved. You are still struggling, but at least you can balance the pleasure and the pain. Although the story is a group portrait, the reader is brought in from the beginning to the end. It is the protagonist. It is better for you. The protagonist fakes his death and evaporates and moves in the dark. In the family story, the pleasure of the protagonist leading the clan to develop and grow is completely gone. It is very simple to pretend to build the foundation. Is it difficult? If you still write like this in the Golden Core stage, you are not a dog but a rat. Now you can still tolerate this kind of rat plot in the Foundation Stage. It would be really disgusting if you still hide the protagonist in the Golden Core stage so that the protagonist, the head of the family, does not come out to shield the family from the wind and rain and lead the family. After all, he is the ancestor. When the family rises, he is treated like a clown and is forgotten by the world and his descendants. Future generations do not know the contribution he has made, nor do the descendants he educates. Is it interesting? A living clown, disgusting himself

I have questions. Since I want to join the cultivating immortality, follow this method. Monks do not exist in Jufang City, nor do they exist on the spiritual line. Then Shen Lingyu may develop more children. Raise up the mortal family among mortals. Following. The descendants of other monks merged with mortals. If this continues, the offspring will explode, and as many spiritual roots as possible will be born.

An underrated family fairy tale novel. I'm pretty good at the settings. Although there are systems in place, I don't rely heavily on them. Instead, it develops slowly and gradually. I would give it a nine-point rating for this very interesting book on family cultivation.

Looking at the author's message after the chapter, I feel that the writing is very humble. In fact, the balance has been grasped very well. If the first and second generations do not have a little luck, it is difficult to rise. But there is a disadvantage. The upper limit of the protagonist is determined by the upper limit of the descendants. This is very difficult to please in Tomato. You can consider upgrading the system later. Also, since it is a group portrait novel, the characters in this book are not distinct enough. This book consciously balances the protagonist's abilities, not just for fun, and it's not abusive, which seems very comfortable. Very optimistic about the author

There are no problems in the general direction. The key point is that the protagonist's behavior makes me feel like a silly son of a landlord. I wonder what will happen next? Give it 5 points to make up for my shrill voice.

A good family story, with a moderate pace and strict logic. There will be no sudden surge in strength. Every increase in strength is the result of hard work. The setting is also good, Goldfinger is not too outrageous, and the combat power is not too low. It is refreshing among the many fast-paced novels nowadays and relieves mental fatigue. Of course, there is basically no big joy, and there is basically no big poison. The characterization is okay, some characters can still remember some deeds, and you can feel that the family is gradually prospering.

The male protagonist's system of having many children and grandchildren is contradictory to only marrying two wives. In addition, he does not encourage more children and grandchildren, so this point is deducted. However, the family is very warmly written, but the male protagonist's family feels that it is not ruthless enough, and it feels that it will suffer a big loss in cultivating immortals. Being able to survive is more about the halo of the protagonist. This is a family novel.

I can also give five stars for the author's attitude. The writing is innovative and the family has developed well. At the beginning, he said that he could not practice Buddhism, but later he still had his own insights. In fact, it would be more reasonable to write that he could sort out the skills and techniques learned by the family and then pass them on to the children of the family.

It must be praised with five stars. This book is very good, but it is not a cool novel, so it is not recommended to read if you want to read a cool novel. Old bookworms can read it with confidence. The author's world of cultivating immortals is very real and exciting. The author did not write according to the previous ideas, leaving the protagonist alone in the end. This change is very big Great, because life has abused you thousands of times, and the book will continue to abuse you. Are you willing? According to the previous thinking, there will be a lot of readers after passing by. Now it is great. You can have a little regret, but more of it should be complete. Everyone in the book is very full and full, giving people a sense of reality [top post]

Four points I saw this book and rated it 8.3. I have to say that this score is still very fair! The biggest problem with this book is that in the face of hostile forces, the author's description is still too simple and lacks a sense of hierarchy. It's just that the hatred towards the hostile forces is immediately filled up, but the counterattack cannot be hearty (in another dimension, the section on the tribe of physical cultivation is very good, the author can study this in depth) So when I read this book, I had to mentally prepare myself, "It's all fake, don't take it seriously, don't take it seriously." Reading these passages made my blood pressure rise... There is no way to skip as much as possible and look at the results directly. The author may consider making the conflicting forces in the battlefield a little more complicated next time he writes, with more chapters. Such contradictions are intertwined and accidents continue. The plot is even more exciting! I found that the author managed this complex situation better. Remember to write the paragraph about tribal physical training, the combat description will be very good. The description of the "Sword Realm" is also very good (there are so many flying swords covering the sky and covering the sun). If only. It's amazing that as the number of goals increases, the author can write well!

It is much better than ordinary family stories, especially those about reproduction. Those are purely tools that serve one person and only show the protagonist's improved data when he is born and upgraded. I don't know what will happen next to this book, but although each of the previous generations will not be fully written, they are still full of flesh and blood.

Very good book. It's a bit similar to "Many Children and Many Blessings", but it feels a step above "Many Children and Many Blessings". The content and story are not limited to having children, but more focused on family development. The core value is much higher than the ordinary "Many Children and Many Blessings". I hope the author will keep up the good work, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

9.8 Points. People who have been reading for many times can read this book when they want to slow down. Because this book is indeed relatively slow, but it has been short of books for too long. If it's not Shuhuang, I probably won't be able to read it. Because people who have read this book many times will find it very, very good. This is the only book on my current list of books that I'm following

Personally, I think this novel is quite good. The plot is complete and the writing is good. However, the world view is rather vague. Overall, it's pretty good. I personally think it should be rated 9. It's better than those in the 9.0S! I wonder why not many people rate and watch it?

There are not many good books in Tomato that can make people read it quietly. Good books should not be rated so low. I am a 16-year old bookworm passing by.

Really, for most of the family novels I have read, I bet those authors have never read Dream of Red Mansions, including this one. Anyone who has read it will know that generations should be distinguished by the word generation. Three generations and four generations are easy to say, but if there are more than one, there is a high chance that someone will not be able to pick up the novel if they haven't read it halfway through. I made a mistake and saw the author's writing chapter

Listen to Chapter 270. Travel through the system to cultivate immortality. There are many similar themes, and this novel is very well written. The common system of cultivating immortals, normal values, outlook on life, and family system cheating devices provide more possibilities and more surprises for the development of the story. The fly in the ointment is that the probability of one generation, two and three generations having spiritual roots is too high, and the price of the elixirs in the novel is somewhat unmatched. The novel is generally very good, please keep it up, author. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

A very good book, it is like a dimensionality reduction attack in Tomato. This book does not want to skip levels, nor do I want to increase the multiples, it is too high. This is a family book about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is a time traveler. The system is similar, a bit like a stallion system. The male protagonist will not lose his original intention and dignity in pursuit of power. Every woman is arranged. It is reasonable, worthy of being an earthling, and not irrational. Every female protagonist and male protagonist still pays attention to it. They are not dispensable chess pieces, and their combat power is not too low. They are a bit mortal. It is not clear whether the other co-conspirators have IQs, because the protagonist is training on the dog track. It will take longer to walk this way, and there are still too few people in contact.

It is not an ordinary system article, but more concerned about the human relationships of the Immortal Cultivating Family. There is also the development of the entire family. Some flaws are still explained by the brackets of the author in the previous chapters. Personally, I don't like to read explanations, just make up my mind. I feel very good about the separate chapters of each character and their separate events in the book. I like reading it, unlike many other system articles that only have all kinds of fun, but the rest is purely boring.

This kind of family-style immortality cultivation is particularly beautiful, with clear priorities and not particularly mindless heroes. I hope that in the future, I will write about a few important characters in each generation and describe the rest in passing. Only when the base of the mortal world is large will monks appear in large numbers. It would be better if important and outstanding talents as mortals are also ghostwritten.

A good novel. Beginning and ending, complete. The later plot is slightly faster but the ending is not abrupt. Maybe the author doesn't have much inspiration. Overall, it is better than the similar Nine Levels in Tomato novels, especially the first half which is quite attractive to read. Personally, I feel that it is a pity that it lacks some stamina. Overall, it should be between 85 and 90 points.

The development flow is relatively reasonable. I quite like it, why are the ratings so low?

Come on, work hard💪 I feel that the content I wrote is okay, the development may be a bit slow, and the space is not that useful yet, but I hope that in the later development, the space will be more useful. I hope that some spiritual springs, spiritual veins, etc. Can appear in the space. I hope that some heavenly wealth and earthly treasures can be planted in it.

A very good book, thoughtful and humane. Not all childbirth system articles have to be the same as those of stallions.

The novel is relatively realistic. The protagonist develops his family step by step, from a rough road to a prosperous family. It's not a cool novel, but watching the protagonist develop his family bit by bit from a small person and accumulate capital bit by bit was a bit of a thrill for me.

It's not good enough. The author's description of the characters and fighting scenes is average, and the character creation is almost not very good, which makes the story too bland. However, the combat power is quite stable, and the updates are also very stable. Still worth pursuing

The logic is very clear, but the ending is a bit rushed, and the story continues to happen, but sometimes ending here is also an end, and it does not change people's views on the book. It is a good book worth reading.

The flaws are not hidden, there are some small loopholes, but they are not that outrageous. How can there be so many books that don't have the loopholes you like to read? My suggestion in the comment area is to read a few less human-like speeches. If you are interested in the content, then read the content yourself. This book is the only novel I have finished listening to in the past two years.