Clearing World Dungeons

I have read so many Tomato novels, and this is my first time to comment in the comment area! This book is very, very beautiful, and the protagonist is super cute. As a protagonist, I really enjoyed reading it, and this is the group favorite!!! And I feel that every character is particularly vivid. I really like everyone's atmosphere and look forward to seeing the protagonist and his brothers! Moreover, the protagonist is really suitable to be the center of a team, he can adjust the atmosphere, and he is also very capable of decision-making and judgment. He is also very strong. He is especially suitable to be a leader. I really like the character of the protagonist. Why is he so cute? Baby, I want to kiss you to death! Like a kitten! It's a pity that such a beautiful novel seems a bit cold, but I still discovered it! The whole process is quite relaxing and lively, it's very good. I like this kind of non-violent woo-woo, and I like everyone's warmth, but I kind of want to see the main character fight and get hurt (◍•ᴗ•◍). The author must keep going. I really, really like this novel of yours. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, I just like it very much. I hope to see the protagonist Baobao working with his teammates to protect and save the world!

It's really super good-looking. Taoist priest and Suibao are also very friendly. I like Suibao very much. I want to see my brother and Suibao meet ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Ahhhh!!! This book is so beautiful! I don't allow anyone to see it!!! Here is my summary: 1. No procrastination, the viewing was very smooth, it can be said that I feel comfortable 😳 2. The author's writing style is also very good. Each character has his own characteristics and personality. People with different personalities form a team, but the team is still very "loving". 3. This article is non-CP, feel free to comment, and our little leaf is not a brainless pet. Everyone likes him for a reason, and little leaf has a very good character, has a mouth and a brain, I love him so much 4. The most important thing is that the author is a very nice person~ There are easter eggs at the end of most of each chapter, and the author is very considerate [sending heartfelt wishes] 5. (This is what I want to see. I don't know if the author can satisfy it, or the entire extra chapter is fine. Children are not picky.) I would rather see the battle-scarred Xiao Zizi 😳 especially to protect others' battle-scarred ones. I love the battle-slain ones so much. Coupled with the setting of being a group pet, it is really poignant 😘 Finally, teacher, your writing is very beautiful. The child's Chinese score is unknown, so I won't say more, but it is really very beautiful! I would like to make a suggestion. Teacher, maybe you can consider changing the cover. After all, external beauty is sometimes quite important. (If I made a mistake, don't scold me, don't scold me, I really didn't mean it 😢)

It's a very interesting book, but the second CP is not very well written and has a strong sense of presence (see the paragraph below for the reason why I feel it has a strong sense of presence👇🏻). Personally, I think the protagonist in the first volume has a lot of highlights, the writing is very smart, and the fighting ability is also very high. But after the official work of the second volume, the protagonist is not that strong. There is little description of the role of the captain. Can it be strengthened in the dungeon? Now that he is the captain of a special team, he can't just be the group favorite. In the first volume, at least the boss is centered on making friends with the protagonist. In the end, I got a dungeon reward from the boss. In the second volume, the three dungeons have no memory points for the protagonist. The group pets are also written in the daily life outside the dungeon.

The setting is great! The descriptions of small fragments are also particularly good! But the plot of the whole story is not very logical. For example, there are so many offensive and weird things in the real world, but I didn't see them at all in the copy. The training in the base focuses more on physical fitness, but the current dungeon seems to rarely require it (I need to go through the outline a bit) Moreover, the portrayal of the protagonists is not enough, and growth requires ups and downs. Without hardships, there is no sense of progress and growth. The writing is too flat and there is no climax. Although it is not a sad story, the author still has to arrange some difficulties. The difficulties during training are not life-threatening and cannot make them transform. Each character also needs to describe the shortcomings. For example, Ye Sui is too casual and Song Qihan is not. He loves to communicate with others and prefers to act alone. Xiang Nan is more soft-hearted. Xiang Bei is too worried about his younger brother and does not trust his younger brother to take care of himself... Maybe some of it is my imagination of the character. The character needs a process of confronting his own shortcomings before he can truly become a unique attacker. The key point is the shaping of the entire framework. The difference between reality and the copy is too big. The reality makes the copy too dangerous, but when you enter the copy, you feel very relaxed. Then the description of the copy is not detailed enough. It feels like entering the copy is more like passing by and listening to it. It is easy to get into trouble. But I like this kind of group portrait of teenagers. The characters are also very lovable. It is still very interesting to read. The author seems to be a novice. It is really amazing to write like this.

This book is really beautiful! I like the protagonist of Little Sunshine so much!! Long live the group portrait! The relationship between teammates is handled very well, the plot is not procrastinating, there is nothing superfluous, and the pace is very fast, but I think it is very good! The author actually said that he is a novice author, which is completely different! Author, you are really humbled.

Nice!!! I really like Sui Bao. I must continue writing and don't give up. I haven't liked this article for a long time. Sui Bao's free and easy character is great. He is very good with Taoist priests. I hope to see Sui Bao and his brothers getting along more in the future. Will the talent of Sui Bao be upgraded later? A+ is also very strong, but I really hope that Sui Bao will be stronger like my brother [Sending my heart]

I really like Sui Bao [Admiration], he is a handsome and capable team leader who is also cute and cute. He is loved not only by his teammates but also by his two older brothers. Come on! 😘

It's good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The protagonist is a very sunny type, and the other team members also have their own characteristics. I especially like the daily interactions between Ye Sui and his two brothers. In short, it is one of the few good books I have read among all the group-directed articles!

It's super nice~~ It's the second group portrait book that I look forward to the most. It suits my taste, I read it seriously, and I'm excited. The teacher writes it really well. The content is relaxing and interesting. The setting of skills is interesting. The title is also very suitable, such as Huangquan Road. The skills of Team La, Mo Fei Wang Tu of Guan Si, Xiaoyaoyou Team Captain Zhuang Daoyin are linked with Zhuangzi, Zhengtu Team's creation of a small world, and Jin Chen's "smashing the opponent to death with money" are also very interesting. I am very curious about the development and more uses of their natural abilities. In the first S-class dungeon "Hymn of Doomsday", the text is concise and fresh. At the final climax, the focus is not on the protagonist, but on the aboriginal people of the dungeon itself, the charging of the army in the apocalypse, and the guardians in front of thousands of lights. Although the cruelty of human nature is also described, most of them are the determination to defend to the death and reconciliation with oneself, which further proves that "courage is the hymn of mankind". The dawn that rises after the war is even more touching. After the dust has settled, a new future has begun. Personally, I think the teacher's visuals and scene transitions are very good and immersive, especially the visuals. Whether it's a dungeon, a border battle, or special training afterwards, there's just one word: "Absolutely awesome!" I hope the author and teacher will continue to work hard, support, support, support 💕💕💕💕