Huan Yao Lu's Torrent of Worldly Youthful Dust

Hello readers, I am the author of this book, thank you for paying attention to this book! I hope you can give me more opinions, so as to prevent me from losing confidence in single-player, and also allow me to continue to optimize the rhythm and plot later. You can read this book before reading it, but I just hope you can leave a message and pay attention. It is really difficult to play alone [cry] [cry] [cry], Chen said thank you [please pay attention] [please pay attention] [please pay attention] [please pay attention] [please pay attention] What follows is an expression of personal indifference. 1. About this book This book is the processing of some random thoughts from my youth. From the beginning to the end of writing a book, it was actually quite difficult for me. I once wrote martial arts short stories, but that was many years ago. Therefore, I may retain the obsession of ancient writers. I strive to give them a full and logical story line for many characters. This is why many writers say that I start slowly. 2. Promotion of the book Thank you very much for your patience in reading this. I will give some spoilers here. In fact, my concept of this book is a bit big and the elements will be too complicated. As the plot progresses later, you may find that I can also write about fast travel. If I say too much, it will be a spoiler, so I won't go into details here.

The writing has a sense of fantasy and immortality, and the author constructed one. Fascinating world of cultivating immortals, the storyline is very clever, support the author

The author's writing is very good. I would like to encourage you by giving it a five-star rating. Beautiful! The author should update soon! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

Although there are not many words now, looking at this trend, the plot will not be a hindrance. While I was waiting, I took a closer look. It was very good.

Recommended by a classmate, it looks good, has good writing style, and is well written.

I like Ouyang Qianqian very much. She is beautiful but not coquettish and has a good personality.

It exploded. It's so beautiful. Support the author!

It's very interesting, the plot is novel, and the writing is exquisite! The more I look at it, the better it looks. I can't stop. It's just too little. Come on and update!

Western fantasy blossoms in the east. It's interesting to watch. I'm looking forward to it slowly. The progress of the story is gradually accelerating. The author's writing is very good.

Dong Bishu felt very funny when he complained about his name. He complained that his author father's name was not good [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author's names for the characters should be meaningful. For example: Morshabi of the Mor family.

Very unique, combining Eastern and Western elements, keep paying attention.

It's more interesting to read directly from the chapters about Jinwen Tianzong [Note]

The most regrettable thing in history is that the general did not die in battle, but was framed to death. In order to keep his child alive, the hero's father completely gave up resistance and committed suicide.

The plot is quite good, the first ten or so chapters are slow, but it gets much better after the male protagonist goes to Tianzongmen.

Has the author not updated for several days? [Shocked][shocked][shocked]

The beginning is a little slow, but the plot gradually picks up later on. I look forward to more to watch, so keep going.

It's remarkable and very good to watch. It's really not easy for a person to grow up.

The reading experience is still good, but it is recommended not to lay out too much in the early stages. Come on, I believe it will get better and better.

The article has clear ideas and will leave readers in suspense after reading it.

It's pretty good, and the pace picks up after ten chapters. Being fattened.

Not enough, not enough at all. The story is very readable. Come on.

I've been reading it for a few days, and it's pretty good. It fits my reading habits. I'll add it to my collection.

The plot of the story is quite good. It combines Western magic with Eastern cultivation methods, which has unique characteristics.

There are tears and laughter. I really like the characters written by the author. Please give me a five-star support.

I think it's okay. This is probably the first time the author has written this book. In fact, there are a lot of pitfalls in the design. They are just filled in after more than ten chapters. It may not fit in with the rhythm of Tomato. I suddenly realized that you had revised the article, and I read it again. Author, you actually changed it. Although you didn't delete a lot of text, you did delete a lot of redundant dialogue. You deleted the dialogue in the blacksmith shop and the introduction of the injury on Hutch's face. I want to strongly support it, listen to readers' opinions, and make changes if you want! Really great