A newcomer writes a book, but the writing is not good, and the main focus is companionship. The introduction is too weak, please move to the main text.
The positioning of this article: semi-invincible. In the early stage, it mainly writes about the development process of the protagonist. It only borrows the background of the character and is original by the author. The main plot will be connected later, and there may be plots related to the game characters, etc. The ingredients are complex, so I can write whatever comes to my mind. (We are also authors, and our main theme is willfulness. Huh~)
Liver Emperor Xu Li, who loved liver travel, died suddenly and traveled to the world of "Indefinitely Lost"! Unfortunately, Xu Li "accidentally" encountered the outbreak of the Black Ring BR-000 and was infected with madness. Under his strong will to survive, he managed to maintain his sanity and became an incarcerated person similar to a "blood clan". Let's watch Xu Li embark on an endless journey, trying to save one tragedy after another. As a vampire, he joins hands with the director of the Minos Administration to become a candle in the endless darkness, bringing an end to the endless journey. (Private setting, the director will also have a name in the future, female bureau)
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"Infinite Lost" is an action-adventure mobile game developed by Eagle Point Network. The game uses card development as the core gameplay. Players need to collect and cultivate various character cards to fight. The background of the game is set in the end of the world. Players will meet many dangerous characters, learn the stories behind them, and try to subdue them for their own use. The game has a rich plot, and players will face various challenges and puzzles in the game. The characters in the game have different attributes and characteristics, which can help players deal with powerful enemies. In addition, the game also has a variety of different gameplay modes and modes, such as main plot, character missions, arena, etc., Providing players with a rich gaming experience. Overall, "Infinite Lost" is an action-adventure mobile game with beautiful graphics and rich gameplay, suitable for players who like card games and adventure puzzles.
All this is just for the last sentence: It's so beautiful
I briefly read it and talked about my feelings. First of all, the pace of this article is quite slow, and the timeline is so long. I personally think that whether the author can grasp it is a problem. I suggest that the plot of each unit should be slightly faster, and then slow down after the director wakes up. (Personally, I think if this period of time is pushed back, all the events that occur will be more complete, whether it is the event plot or the main plot). And since it is still so early in the time period, the author might as well dig some holes and bury some foreshadowings. The plot of the protagonist will definitely be better written later. Next, I personally think that the most attractive thing about Lost in Time, apart from the plot, is the characters. I hope it doesn't have large-scale OOC character designs. (Because I personally think that most of 57's characters are already perfect, and changing them would be superfluous.) Finally, these are my personal suggestions. I hope the author will focus on the outline. Finally, I wish this book can be written better, and I wish all the fans who play 57 that the pool will never be crooked and that everything goes well in life.
It's still pretty good. I was looking for a book with no issue before, but not many people wrote it. I searched again today and found one or two. This one has more than 70,000 words, and the other one has 100,000 words. Come on, the author will read more [Chigua]
The great elder has made up for you, hehe.
Looks good. How do you plan to organize this time? After all, you said that it is still more than thirty years before the main line starts (I don't pay much attention to the time, so I can't remember when the main line started)
That's great. I admire you very much.
From the current point of view, this fanfic of "Indefinitely Lost" is very suitable for my taste. Although the pace is a bit slow because the author is a bit clumsy, it actually makes the characterization of the characters more delicate. Of course, the number of words at the end of each chapter is another matter. Although this part shows the number of words, it can allow readers to understand the author's writing mentality, purpose and direction. It is very beneficial to the subject of fanfiction, and it also gives readers a platform to exchange opinions with the author. Of course, the author's frequent posts also provide readers with a good experience.
So cheers for the author!
Get excited!
I've got the Suxiao Jiuxin Pills ready for you, don't worry!
Come on, among all the novels about Lost in Time, I like yours the most, but the updates are a bit slow and the wait is a bit uncomfortable [laughing and crying]
Recommended on the homepage, it's good, but I wish there were less emotional scenes. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but I personally feel it's a bit awkward. Also, I don't think the FAC's chief commander would say so many words. After all, the FAC's requirement is to remain absolutely rational. There are also a lot of emotional modifiers in the verbal description of going to court. But despite the flaws, the author's writing is still good. I hope the author can continue his efforts, here is five stars
The details are in place and the emotional scenes are perfect [I learned it]
There are not many authors who write about being lost forever, come on, Fox!
Good, very good, very good
There is still something
After playing the game, I came to Tomato to look for a book. I didn't expect it to be available.
Very good book, makes me foxy.
There is a lot of original content, showing a side that is not in the game. It should be the longest indefinite novel that can be written [note]
Come on, the author, keep writing hard. Although I have just read it for a while, but in one sentence, if you continue to update, I will keep reading.
It looks good. I love watching it. I watch it often.
Maybe this is a singularity
No reason
Only 5 stars
Personally I think it is the best written.
There aren't many indefinite novels to begin with, so Ollie did it.
Come on, I'm not good at communication so I won't say anything else.
It's not easy to write a fan, so I give you five stars.
Uh-huh, come on Fox, of course, it would be better if you can explode your liver while ensuring your health.
Yes, but there are too few updates, so when will we see Draya again, or when will Celine appear [laughter]
The logic is relatively strict, and it is an above-average work.
Dear author, come on, I hope you keep writing and keep updating. You write well, I hope you can write better.
A perfect interpretation for a newcomer but not a novice. The writing logic is clear, the narrative rhythm is very suitable, and the characters are not broken at all.
It's not bad. It's not easy to find endless fandom that I can watch. Good luck, author.
Okay, indeed good, but could this fox be a little less aggressive? [Punch out] [Send heart]
Although I have never played it, it looks interesting!
"Infinite Lost" is an action-adventure mobile game developed by Eagle Point Network. The game uses card development as the core gameplay. Players need to collect and cultivate various character cards to fight. The background of the game is set in the end of the world. Players will meet many dangerous characters, learn the stories behind them, and try to subdue them for their own use. The game has a rich plot, and players will face various challenges and puzzles in the game. The characters in the game have different attributes and characteristics, which can help players deal with powerful enemies. In addition, the game also has a variety of different gameplay modes and modes, such as main plot, character missions, arena, etc., Providing players with a rich gaming experience. Overall, "Infinite Lost" is an action-adventure mobile game with beautiful graphics and rich gameplay, suitable for players who like card games and adventure puzzles. All this is just for the last sentence: It's so beautiful
I briefly read it and talked about my feelings. First of all, the pace of this article is quite slow, and the timeline is so long. I personally think that whether the author can grasp it is a problem. I suggest that the plot of each unit should be slightly faster, and then slow down after the director wakes up. (Personally, I think if this period of time is pushed back, all the events that occur will be more complete, whether it is the event plot or the main plot). And since it is still so early in the time period, the author might as well dig some holes and bury some foreshadowings. The plot of the protagonist will definitely be better written later. Next, I personally think that the most attractive thing about Lost in Time, apart from the plot, is the characters. I hope it doesn't have large-scale OOC character designs. (Because I personally think that most of 57's characters are already perfect, and changing them would be superfluous.) Finally, these are my personal suggestions. I hope the author will focus on the outline. Finally, I wish this book can be written better, and I wish all the fans who play 57 that the pool will never be crooked and that everything goes well in life.
It's still pretty good. I was looking for a book with no issue before, but not many people wrote it. I searched again today and found one or two. This one has more than 70,000 words, and the other one has 100,000 words. Come on, the author will read more [Chigua] The great elder has made up for you, hehe.
Looks good. How do you plan to organize this time? After all, you said that it is still more than thirty years before the main line starts (I don't pay much attention to the time, so I can't remember when the main line started)
That's great. I admire you very much.
From the current point of view, this fanfic of "Indefinitely Lost" is very suitable for my taste. Although the pace is a bit slow because the author is a bit clumsy, it actually makes the characterization of the characters more delicate. Of course, the number of words at the end of each chapter is another matter. Although this part shows the number of words, it can allow readers to understand the author's writing mentality, purpose and direction. It is very beneficial to the subject of fanfiction, and it also gives readers a platform to exchange opinions with the author. Of course, the author's frequent posts also provide readers with a good experience. So cheers for the author! Get excited! I've got the Suxiao Jiuxin Pills ready for you, don't worry!
Come on, among all the novels about Lost in Time, I like yours the most, but the updates are a bit slow and the wait is a bit uncomfortable [laughing and crying]
Recommended on the homepage, it's good, but I wish there were less emotional scenes. It's not that the author's writing is not good, but I personally feel it's a bit awkward. Also, I don't think the FAC's chief commander would say so many words. After all, the FAC's requirement is to remain absolutely rational. There are also a lot of emotional modifiers in the verbal description of going to court. But despite the flaws, the author's writing is still good. I hope the author can continue his efforts, here is five stars
The details are in place and the emotional scenes are perfect [I learned it] There are not many authors who write about being lost forever, come on, Fox!
Good, very good, very good
There is still something
After playing the game, I came to Tomato to look for a book. I didn't expect it to be available.
Very good book, makes me foxy. There is a lot of original content, showing a side that is not in the game. It should be the longest indefinite novel that can be written [note]
Come on, the author, keep writing hard. Although I have just read it for a while, but in one sentence, if you continue to update, I will keep reading.
It looks good. I love watching it. I watch it often.
Maybe this is a singularity
No reason Only 5 stars
Personally I think it is the best written.
There aren't many indefinite novels to begin with, so Ollie did it.
Come on, I'm not good at communication so I won't say anything else.
It's not easy to write a fan, so I give you five stars.
Uh-huh, come on Fox, of course, it would be better if you can explode your liver while ensuring your health.
Yes, but there are too few updates, so when will we see Draya again, or when will Celine appear [laughter]
The logic is relatively strict, and it is an above-average work.
Dear author, come on, I hope you keep writing and keep updating. You write well, I hope you can write better.
A perfect interpretation for a newcomer but not a novice. The writing logic is clear, the narrative rhythm is very suitable, and the characters are not broken at all.
It's not bad. It's not easy to find endless fandom that I can watch. Good luck, author.
Okay, indeed good, but could this fox be a little less aggressive? [Punch out] [Send heart]
Although I have never played it, it looks interesting!
It's still pretty good