Concave-Convex World: the World Is so Cruel

Sisters! ! ! You must come and take a look at Xiaoxing written by our author Tuanzi, it is simply the white moonlight in my heart! ! ! "The concave and convex world uses "vector" as the conductor, "Great Luo Shen Tong Stick" and "Fierce Slash" as supports. The sparks created by "Thor's Hammer" and "Hot and Cold Flow" add color to him. The smile of the witch, the foreknowledge of the saint, the weakness of ordinary people, the fake smile of the liar, the fanaticism of the "rabid dog", absolute loyalty, the emotion of transforming people, the pursuit of the power of gods, and the symbiosis of the idiot siblings. The concave-convex competition is a cruel competition. Everything is a scam, cruel fighting, ruthless killing, a journey of youth growth, a gathering of different teenagers, letting go of their bodies and looking for light in the darkness. " The world is so cruel, and you are my salvation! The world is so cruel... But I still love you

Author, I believe you. What you describe is the truest side of human nature. There is no so-called halo of the protagonist. It is a normal experience. You don't need to care about the score. I will always give you full marks. Most people prefer mindless writing, (I don't mean to curse, I'm talking about those who wantonly play with other people's lives regardless of life or death, and the so-called light redemption of others. Those so-called redemptions are just knowing the fate of others in advance, and using their tragic past to become the so-called light in their lives.) Of course, I don't mean to scold other authors. , I just feel that if the characters in the article are too romantic or the protagonist's halo is too strong, then such human beings are not real. It's too fake. If you really want to save them, then accompany them well, not interfering but giving them a hand at the critical moment. Come on, author, support you [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] @

Nice! Nice! Very nice! Xiaoxing is so cheerful (squatting on the spot and drawing circles). If I were to travel there, I wouldn't have a sweet mouth or a good kung fu, and I would have a complete doomsday survival plan. I usually smile, stay silent, and, yes, draw. . . The descriptions of the characters are so detailed, vividly showing their personal charm and characteristics, as well as their personality and work style. Anyway, it's the writing style that I can't afford. Ah, it looks good, but it seems a little lacking. Hey, come on (the little star feels like a sun, shining brightly, shining on the people next to you) So... There shouldn't be... A knife... Right? Isn't it Xiaoxing's fantasy after his own death? I wish her a happy, happy, beautiful and healthy life!

A very good book... It is also updated very quickly! It is no exaggeration to say that this may be the best concave and convex fan novel I have ever written ~ Xiaoxing stood in front of me as if she were a real person of flesh and blood. She is every ordinary person in reality. She will be scared, nervous and sad. She will miss her mother when she feels desperate. There is no particularly bad or particularly good person in life, just a very ordinary and ordinary girl. It is precisely because of this character that I seemed to be immersed in the book when I read it. I felt sad when Xiaoxing was sad, and I could also feel her fear and nervousness. Even when Palos betrayed, Lei Shi When talking about her fw, I actually felt sad without knowing it. This is a rare experience. It is the first time I have such a profound experience in a time-travel novel. As for some people who think Xiaoxing is "cheating", I think so. Without Xiaoxing, she cannot travel to the concave and convex world for no reason. Come on, meeting the God of Creation is inevitable, and giving her power is also inevitable. Wouldn't it be too strange if Xiaoxing is so weak in the later stage that she needs the protection of the members of the pirate group? In that case, each contestant may not even be able to protect themselves. How could they protect Xiaoxing? ? If Xiaoxing is so weak that he can't protect himself, how can he protect Palos and others... The above is my understanding. The author should have a good rest~ I hope to see Da Da write better works! ! I'm really looking forward to how Xiaoxing will regain her memory step by step after becoming an angel. Or will she start from scratch? I feel this possibility is relatively small.

It's super good-looking, their interactions are really interesting, mainly the character of the heroine, I really love it, the heroines in some articles feel too lucky, the characters I want to meet are always very easy to meet, they have always been very lucky, the main thing is all, this is especially easy for me to get excited about CP, I like Pa Xing CP, but I found that there are only so few, the author should work hard and update! ! [Send heart][Send heart] This book is finished and Xiaoxing's story is not over yet. I hope Xiaoxing will always be happy (￣▽￣)／

The writing is really good, the writing style is very good. After reading some of what the author said and talking to her in reply, I felt that the author is a very warm, kind and gentle person. The little star she created is really good. She said it depends on real people. I think this is really good. Very few people can do this! We are all ordinary beings, and so is Xiaoxing, and everything about her is passive. This is really amazing, I really like it! I'm really not very good at talking, and I didn't say so much what I wanted to say, but, generally speaking, I think the author is great! ! ! Also, I urge you to update it faster, thank you [I almost cried] The child is not satisfied with it, the author should give it to him quickly.

Not OOC at all, and really pretty! The real damage and darkness are very real. Although there are some knives, the knives are delicious! Although Xiaoxing is indeed a little weak and aggrieved, it is more real. Just like the author said, there are so many protagonists and so many good things. The emotional line only appears around the end, so it won't delay the plot, which is good. Here are the spoilers: In the end, Xiaoxing also went home. He can go back to Aobu at night. Xiaoxing's life is very real, like a real person. He has good friends but will leave, and will take the college entrance examination but his grades are not very good. Anyway, it is a relatively perfect ending.

I feel that the writing is very real. I imagine if I traveled through time and it seems to be like this. I feel that the sense of immersion is quite strong. However, I feel that the emotional portrayal is a bit weird, maybe a bit single (?) Anyway, I highly recommend it, and I hope the author can continue to bring wonderful stories.

Book review after three brushes @ Like a poem about growth that is not gorgeous, Xiaoxing is not the flawless and charming heroine in otome novels, she is just an ordinary but hard-working girl. For ordinary people, this is a cruel competition, and they have no time to think about the championship or the fateful love. They only have the only belief to survive. Xiaoxing, who was weak in combat effectiveness, was not recognized or accepted at first. Even gentleness and kindness are just ridiculous pity. Strength trumps everything. Xiaoxing will not be grateful and remembered for his kind actions, let alone impress everyone and successfully complete the competition. He cannot save everyone by himself. Just like the ending of every chapter of the hot-blooded comic, the protagonist breaks through himself and easily defeats the evil forces. Xiaoxing, who will not be discouraged, still firmly believes that she can do it, but she shrinks back again and again in the wandering of death. She is just an ordinary person, an ordinary girl. But in the end, Xiaoxing chose them and chose to stay again. She did not have strong backing. Even if she was given a body that would not die, the pain would still be unforgettable. Even the ice will be melted. Farewells over and over again but efforts to reunite will never touch the young man's heart. The heartbeat is not a momentary flutter, but the tacit understanding of smiling when we get along day and night for a long time, the insignificant distance, and the emotions called like and love caused by all kinds of things. The behavior, actions, and emotions of each character are not obtrusive and consistent with the original setting. Kamikin Yao and Xiaoxing Paros and Xiaoxing, their emotions are obvious, but there is no result. But this doesn't mean regret, it's just a good memory that didn't come to an end when I was young. The ending is often sad or joyful. Xiaoxing will eventually return to her own world because she still has a mother who loves her and cannot abandon her life. But fortunately, they are always there. Looking back, there are familiar faces, just like they said, they have been waiting for you. The end is not a dream. The relationship between us is just an insurmountable magnetic field. We are not insurmountable. You are not virtual. Of course, the Thunder Lion Pirates, the number one in the universe, will also travel through every world. We are the collision of the three dimensions and the two dimensions. This is for everyone -----Mu Yi

The author's writing is really great [blowing kiss] I really cried to death [crying] It's so beautiful, I highly recommend you to read this book Xiao🌟, Lei Shi, Camille, Palos, Paley, I really cried to death! It's so beautiful! It really deserves to give the author a five-star rating❤️I will support the author more! I hope the author will open another different otome book📖🙏🏻💗🥰🎉👍☺️👋This book is super nice. I like it so much. This book is super nice! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The structure of this book is very clear and the content is very interesting. It's not boring at all, it's all sweet. It's so sweet. Hahaha, where is the author? Come out and eat my blade [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] This is a rare embossed text that looks like a normal story, and it really suits the taste of our public ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ I really want to read this book again (//∇//). It's very sweet. I suggest you read Sweetness to Die, hahaha (●°u°●) "The author sent me your address and I'll send you some razors (｀Δ´)! That's enough

It's really good-looking. The characters are created very well and then a little bit. But at least the ending is perfect. Of all the novels I've read, I've cried in only two of them. One is by the author, and this one is half about Identity V. But the author is so good that even us readers have been deceived. There is a short section at the end that is a bit sadistic. Prepare tissues and remember to take off your glasses if you have them. The glasses really made me cry to death, but at least the ending is perfect. I really like the ending. Hey, I really like this book. I didn't expect to finish it so quickly. I really recommend this book. If you don't like the knife, don't worry. Although there is a bit of a knife at the end, the ending is really perfect. Hey, don't worry. Everyone is doing well. There will be no less of the Thunder Lion Pirates.

Beautiful, super beautiful! I am a person with a low tear point. I cried no less than ten times, and it cost me my life. Xiaoxing was really easy to take in. I realized my incompetence countless times, lost my strength countless times, and realized that I was ordinary countless times. Really, he is so much like every one of us in daily life, so fragile, yet so tough! The logic is very good, the plot is also very good, the characters are three-dimensional, except at the beginning, the timeline is a bit confusing, the center has always been clear and highlighted. Summary: A very good article!

It's so good that I had a withdrawal reaction after reading it. The world is so cruel but I still love you. After reading the whole book, I really couldn't stand it when I saw this sentence. Suddenly I felt very sad and had brought myself into "Xiao Xing". I have endless aftertaste. I am also a very transparent person in reality and I was very touched when I saw Xiao Xing. Although it is a fanfic, I still like Xiao Xing. This book is also the book that best fits the character image I have ever read. "Slow warming" is also the norm in reality. I really love this book.

Congratulations on wrapping up🎉 I watched it in September last year. I kept reading it for a long time and finished it in one sitting. I also watched it on the bus and even cried [crying]. Xiaoxing in the work is like thousands of "me" in reality. I am a sensitive person. Faced with multiple choices, I can only adapt to people. I also want to give up my studies, but I think about the future and continue to study hard. Studying is really tiring, but I am not the only one. The beauty of the final ending makes me regain hope for the future. The writing is really good [almost crying] @

It's very beautiful. When I watched the beginning, I actually didn't like the main character. I thought she was weak, crybaby, stupid, and useless. But when I watched the back, I thought she was brave, kind, hard-working, and an ordinary person. She has no system and is not strong, but for the character she likes, she endured great pain and did not give up. It is really amazing. I didn't expect her CP to be Thunder Lion. I thought it was Palos. This book is very interesting, and the protagonist has a very charming personality, which attracted me. I just feel that the ending is a bit disappointing, but I feel that whether I go back or stay in Aotu, it is not a good ending, so the author has written a beautiful night and it is already good to go there and meet again. Highly recommended! ! !

In fact, while reading the book, I had a lot to complain about. The unique writing style sometimes made me dizzy, but after reading it, I felt that it was no longer necessary. This book... This story belonging to "Little Star" is really good. Maybe I watched it with some personal emotions. For example, when Xiaoxing begged for Palos, when he blocked Thunder Lion from harm, or when I was happy when I discovered the existence of the necklace, I burst into tears. The author's portrayal of "Little Star" is very detailed. There is no sense of separation like other fan fictions. She is just a very ordinary girl who will drop little pearls when something unhappy happens and wants to protect the people she cares about. In addition, the plot line and the emotional line of "Thunder Lion Pirates" are also very delicate. I think slow and tortuous emotions can touch people's hearts the most and reflect their true side. Like when Palos wanted to push the little star out to die in the maze game, I felt that this was the real him, the insidious Palos who was afraid of death and would do anything to achieve his goals. And Lei Shi's ever-present boss demeanor fits the original work very well, like a real pirate leader. So things seemed to be developing in the established direction, but some things started to look different. . . . Maybe I was influenced by Xiaoxing, and I actually said so much. Maybe this is not an evaluation, but more like my feelings after reading it (? There seems to be no difference?). It feels a bit verbose, but I really, really like this story. I hope that one day I can also travel into the concave and convex world to stage my own story. (Hhh)

This story is still very good. Although the content is a bit harsh, it ends well in the end. By the end, the Thunder Lion Pirates have all matured and grown up. They are no longer as wanton as before, but the Thunder Lion Pirates are still the number one Thunder Lion Pirates in the universe, and they will never change...

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Good-looking, Xiaoxing has always been ordinary, but he has a strong heart and successfully protected the Thunder Lion Pirates. Maybe it was because of Palos's self-destruction in the beginning to protect Palos. Later, the feeling of becoming a Thunder Lion was a bit sudden, but overall it was okay.

I stayed up late these past few days to watch it. Although it is a bit late, it is 4:30 on September 23, 2024. But! It's really nice, I have to say. The little star described by the author is really that kind of ordinary person. She is afraid of pain, feels useless, timid, scared, and will run away from some setbacks and want to go home. She does not have cool Force skills, strong strength and strong background. He is the kind of very ordinary and ordinary person, but he also gives me a very real feeling. Like the dazzling stars in the sky. As long as I look over it, she will always be on, always there. Xiaoxing is an ordinary person who travels to an extraordinary world, but she does extraordinary things. Xiaoxing, I really like you! ! ! I rarely see this kind of article, but I still like it. Little stars are just like the stars in the sky, ordinary and dazzling! ! I really really like it. But the author is also really cruel to his daughter. Every time I see Xiaoxing suffering various injuries and pains, I feel so sad and painful. Especially when I saw the last sentence "It's called three-dimensional", it was really an indiscriminate attack. After reading the novel, I felt empty inside. But just as the author said, "Although the novel is over, their story is still going on." But it is still a good knife. While writing this review, I cried again. To be honest, it's quite sad. Although the author said it was he, I still felt quite regretful after reading the novel. Woo woo woo 😭 Once again I would like to express my love for this novel, I really really really really really like it very much! ! ! I beg the author to make a sequel! Then I would like to express my love for the concave and convex world and Qichuang. From the day it aired, I have loved every character in it. I can say that I am totally blown away by it. I want to keep the promises I made before. No matter what happens in the end, I still like Bump! ! It's really worth recommending! It's really super good-looking. I've always kept this book in my favorites and haven't read it yet. I recently had time to read it. It's really super good-looking. I begged the author if he could make a sequel? Let me round my heart, okay? Please. 👉👈And the author, I love you so much!

Teacher Xiaoxing Tuanzi's writings are all very good, and the characters are well developed. I have read all three of the teacher's books. The emotional line of this book is mainly about Thunder Lion, and Palos also has it. (Protagonist) Xiaoxing said that he would protect the pirate group. The next time he saved Camille and his left arm was eaten by a spider, once he blocked an attack for Palos in the maze competition, and once he was pierced by a chain trying to push away Thunder Lion... Xiaoxing really protected them well, (actually I peed my eyes after seeing the latter) The teacher's writing style is very good. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the text. The tone of the whole story is more distinct based on the original work. Everyone has a good ending. I highly recommend it. The ending is very good. The ending is he. I finished reading it in about 3 or 4 days. I was still a little bit unsatisfied after reading it.

I personally like to read cool novels, but I really like to read this one. Xiaoxing is just like all living beings, but she is also dazzling. She is not like the heroine (male protagonist) in other novels who starts off strong or conquers the protagonist. She really keeps her promise to protect and redeem them. Although she has regretted and given up, she persevered. She is really a good girl, and she is still helping the protagonist after becoming a god. I really feel sorry for this girl and hope she can persevere.

I stayed up all night to read it, it was so good! ! ! I think Xiaoxing's image is very successfully created. It is completely a normal reaction of an ordinary person when faced with time travel, and it can easily be substituted. The author's writing style is also very detailed. When I read this book, I completely put myself into it. I would have emotional changes due to the ups and downs of the plot and the interaction between Xiaoxing and Lei Shi. To sum it up: this is a masterpiece with exquisite writing, rich plot, and exciting plot! ! ! This level is quite high in fan fiction, and it's very interesting! ! ! ♡＾▽＾♡

It's really super good-looking (even though the knife has more than 100 million points). Xiaoxing Tuanzi has grasped the personalities of everyone in the Thunder Lion Pirates very well. Especially as a Pachui and Leichui, I think they should have such a reaction. At the same time, I also like Xiaoxing, the protagonist of this book very much. She created a girl who has low self-esteem but will work hard to change her destiny for Lei Shi and others. I watched her grow step by step, and watched Lei Shi and others gradually treat her as an irreplaceable existence. I was really, really pleased, whether it was Palos, Lei Shi, Camille, Pelli, or Xiaoxing. I was very excited, especially when Lei Shi kissed me [laughing evilly]. I'm also looking forward to the author's next book

I really like it so much, that kind of indelible love. I watched the author's updates all the way until the end. When I just finished it, I didn't have the courage to comment at all, but now I have the courage. The author is really great! ! ! I have read this book no less than 10 times. . .

It's really the best fanfic I've ever read in the world of concave and convex. I found that the type of fanfic I like to read is the kind that is more mature, a bit funny, and has good foreshadowing. Among the only four fanfics I like to read, two of them are written by great authors. Hehehe, just sit here and wait for the update of Perry's article.

It's sweet and sad at the beginning, especially sad in the middle, but it gets sweeter in the later stages. Although the heroine has a clear stupidity at the beginning, you just have to endure it. It's really beautiful in the later stages. If you miss it, you will really regret it. I haven't finished watching it yet, so I don't know what will happen next. But I think it will definitely look good^ω^ Already finished reading...

When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was some kind of group pet novel, the kind with a lot of golden fingers. But seeing this, my feeling is different. The character's personality and characteristics are all very close to us humans, which can better bring you into the world. I especially like the author's sentence: I hope that girls will have the opportunity to become a shining star, so I named the heroine Xiaoxing.

This is a very unique book. The other female protagonists are basically very powerful, but this one is different [I almost cried] and it is also the most difficult book for me. I also hope that I can meet my own pirate group like Xiaoxing. The sense of immersion is really strong