Huang Liang Yi Meng, Crazy Criticism of the Heroine Actually Hates Me to the Bone

Hello, I am the father of the child with this account. The child was diagnosed with severe depression the day before yesterday. I just learned that after reading here for a long time and repeated it many times, his symptoms improved a lot at first. I was really happy. I knew that one day he suddenly picked up a knife and wanted to commit suicide. After I asked many times, my child finally confessed to me, saying that in fact, I have always known that I have depression. I read here every day to relieve it, especially this one. I feel that I want to continue reading. I feel that I have a pursuit in my heart. I asked him again. Isn't that great? Then why did you take the knife today? The child told me that the author only updated a few pictures every day. I couldn't accept it. I couldn't bear it. I couldn't see the sunshine, but he disappeared in a few minutes and returned to the darkness. After listening to the child's words, I fell into deep thought. So I beg the author to save my child. I'm afraid that one day I don't see him, and he will commit suicide again. Don't bother me. Updating hundreds of chapters a day is not too much.

The book is good-looking, but it's not what I expected. I thought it was the type of article about pursuing a husband, but it turns out it's about Jianghu. The author's writing is very steady. The advantage is that it has an outline and won't break the writing. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. The writing style is slightly inferior, and the control of the rhythm needs to be strengthened, which sometimes makes people feel uncomfortable. I thought it was boring or superficial, but I quite like the characters in the book, especially the male protagonist and the several main female characters who appear. The author does not follow conventional routines, so people are looking forward to the follow-up development of the plot. But personally, I still like to watch comedies, so I hope they all have a good ending. I'm really disappointed. I've been building this book for so long, and it's strength is crumbling so fast. There are so many poisonous points and minefields. There are so many women who can write about it. The author must cling to Feng Huojun and not let go. After laying the groundwork for so long, he just comes to a confessional. There is no emotional line. It's just two stubborn people who have been trying to kill themselves. One protects the other, it's really thunderous. The emotional line is inexplicably abrupt and embarrassing, and it also plays with amnesia jokes. At the same time, I want to write that the heroine is extraordinary and at the same time, she is stubborn and like a few bitches. The author is a tremolo, right? I have to scold him before he changes who likes to read it. Idiot, he is a messy person. In the middle of the night, I was so angry that I took out the book from the trash can and scolded the author for writing such a bitch. Why didn't you write about your green-haired turtle style? Why didn't you continue to write about your Linxian wooden hook lady? You turned into a mud horse, aren't you very good at it? Isn't your wife also throwing herself into the arms of other men all day long to write such disgusting things? Your full price is really 40,000 cnm.

Are there any books similar to this one? [Working on draft] I read this kind of book for the first time and I liked it, but the reading was too slow. [I almost cried] [I almost cried]

It's a pretty good book. It has a system but does not rely on the system. It has already surpassed many novels. The writing style is also quite comfortable. It belongs to the type of protagonist who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. It is not bad in this aspect. The calculation is simpler and more direct, and it will be better if it is more complicated. In addition, except for the first few chapters, the heroine has not appeared at all so far. Even if the plot hasn't reached that level yet, it's okay to write a few scenes. I've watched less than half of it, and I haven't watched it anymore. Mainly because it doesn't attract me anymore. I glanced at the table of contents and it's not the plot development direction I like. I read the comments again, and the longer I read, the more I scolded them. I also saw that some people liked my comments. Here's a reminder, it may not be so good after the middle.

I'm a layman, and I just like to watch the yandere Shura field. When Feng appears, the good brothers will kick me. 🐮+🐢, I'm such a big thunder

I thought she was a yandere, but Feng Huojun appeared in the scene once later and still had no sense of presence.

I was attracted by the title at first, and I gave it four stars because when I finished reading it, I found that although the protagonist has a system, there are relatively few roles in the system, and I prefer protagonists who can control the overall situation, have reasonable logic, and have ups and downs in the plot. What I am dissatisfied with is that this book seems to be about a single female protagonist, and there will be a plot to chase her husband, but there are too few scenes for the female protagonist in this book.

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The progress of the plot is a bit slow. I feel that slow-burning stories are difficult to become popular, and the data will not be very good. There are currently 61 chapters in this book, and I feel that Feng or Junli will have to wait at least forty or fifty chapters before they appear [face covering] I sincerely hope that the author will speed up the pace of writing [heartfelt] Feng or Jun loves the third prince deeply, but the male protagonist in this book only wears the body of the third prince (similar to seizing the body, what would Feng think if he knew about it, the male protagonist has the memory of the third prince, so Feng will transfer this love to the male protagonist? Imagine: if the third prince is the protagonist, and the male protagonist is the villain...), And Feng is very regretful after knowing that the wine is not poisonous, the depth of Feng's regret can only be because the person she killed is the third prince, I feel here... Sigh. But according to the introduction of the book, Feng should be a very important female protagonist... So later when the male protagonist meets Feng or the Queen, the male protagonist will say that he is the reincarnation of the third prince, or...

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After reading more than 40 chapters, I can see that it is quite interesting and is a little better than the one of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. It is a behind-the-scenes type. Except for some old routines that deliberately advance the plot, it's not too embarrassing. I haven't left Novice Village yet and am still in Tianmen. It's worth seeing if I can get an 8.5 Now. There's nothing wrong with it.

If the spring breeze feels pity for the flowers, can it allow me to be young again?

It is one of the few good books on Tomato. It is quite refreshing, but it is not like Dragon King Liu who relies on slaps in the face to show his strength. He strategizes step by step and calculates the world. Almost all the characters in the book are chess pieces on the chessboard.

I'm optimistic about you, the author. Just keep writing according to this tone. Although there are a few flaws in the front, as long as you don't collapse later, you will definitely become Tomato's first magical book.

I can't imagine that such a great god has risen in Tomato. I have been reading novels for 8 years. To be honest, I have become a bit discerning. I feel that I have lost sight of many books. But after reading this book, I fell in love with it again. Maybe it is because it is a new way of writing, but to be honest, I like this book very much. I wish the readers and the author to read every day and stay up all night [smile]

Good looking

I quite like it. Although there is a system in it, I don't mention it every day. I forget about the system as I read it. I used to be a little annoyed by this when I read system novels. I always fall into the system.

It feels pretty good, the writing is very fluent, but there are some places where I feel like it was written too fast and I need to react. And although I am pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, there is nothing aggrieved about it. But I just don't like this. When will I stop pretending to be a pig? One more star.

Although like other articles, the male protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, the plot and character settings are perfect. Compared with those cool articles, the author's way of writing is very attractive to readers. The plot is interlocking and not one chapter is superficial. Although there is a system, the number of system factory releases so far is very few. It is completely a long martial arts article with the name of a system cool article. There is so much foreshadowing in the previous article that people are looking forward to how it will be explained in the future. It perfectly captures the readers' hearts. Just like others said, this article really shouldn't appear in software like Tomato. Compared with other articles, this book is not just a little bit good.

It's pretty good [laughs evilly], but it's too slow to pick up the girl (maybe I've read too much Dumas)

After seeing the latest 247 chapters, except for the first three chapters, which are a little bit speechless after dying and dying again more than ten years later, the overall situation is still great, five-star praise.

Good, good, good, good, look good

Good, good, very charming and very witty, and the writing is sharp, delicate, smooth and vivid, and the interesting and expressive characters are attractive👀 and leave a trace of vivid appeal to the readers. Highly recommended [please update]

Good-looking, smooth plot, reasonable and attractive characters

I read novels more casually. The main plot and outline can actually be seen. He also writes in this direction. The female protagonist is the female protagonist in the book before the male protagonist travels through time, and the male protagonist is the protagonist of the book written by the author. The people around him are all foreshadowing (to help the male protagonist control the world). Those women are just the male protagonist's nominal harem (although I don't know how the ending will be written), pretending to be pigs and eating them. The tiger only portrays the image of the male protagonist, and it is really weak at the end of the writing, but there are some books that the little guys don't know and just think that there is no need to worry about increasing the number of words. As for the rapid increase in combat power, it is normal. Born in Tianmen, there is no shortage of resources, and the memory of the previous life is equivalent to living for 18 years. Plus the system, and I think the author seems to be writing the first book. It is actually very good to write it like this.

It looks good. I hope Fengjun and Lingtian have a happy ending.

From what I saw in the afternoon to now, I will definitely be pursuing books later or not. The writing is great. There is still a sense of cool writing with an invincible protagonist and an invincible background, but with a little bit of strategizing. Overall, it is still a good cool writing with brains and many classics. It doesn't matter who the heroine is. The direction is 99% of the world. It has given 5000 ghost soldiers, shipbuilding industry, and immortal cultivation. There are many directions that can be written. I don't know what year it is when it is finished. I would like to pay tribute to the author for letting me see such a refreshing article that suits my appetite.

Very well written and well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The score is low. The setting of the protagonist is very good. There are various saucy actions and occasionally some saucy words. The story is also good. The background is gradually improved to attract people to read.

What can I say about this book? It's not a particularly immersive book. I feel like reading a Jin Yong novel. It's good to read. The writing is very good, and there are foreshadowings. The plot is also good. As for the shortcomings, I think the combat power is a bit weak. Also, there are not too many plots in the previous life, which leads to a lot of characters coming out later (but this is indispensable for every novel, and it is not considered poisonous). It is a bit tired. Overall, it is very good. If you like Long Aotian, don't read it. Don't read it if you like Stallion. The protagonist is not a virgin and has a scheming mind. The main plot should be to find the Jade of Immortality and to unify the world. After all, the protagonist has done so much to regain power and increase his strength. He must fight against the heroine in the future. Just like the male protagonist said that the person in front of him is no longer the same person as before. The male protagonist is Ye Lingtian before, and it is himself. Maybe he may kill Xiaojun in the future (after all, I can't think of any way to make them reconcile), or Xiaojun will let go for the protagonist. She abandoned something important to her. Hey, I hope the heroine will have more scenes (I'm not saying there are really few, I even doubt whether she is the heroine). Come on, keep updating. I should finish it, and arrange some knives appropriately. A good book is indispensable with a good knife (it can be a passerby's knife). Don't worry, I can bear it.