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It's so good-looking, so full of laughs [Like] No official supporting role? I just kowtow to the sky and the ground, and I kowtow to life and death. Xiao Mingming, you can just take all the men and women, and you can just take it all. Of course, the real wife is our little leaf [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I really like her, who knows. . . Author, would you be better if you were ten a day [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's super good-looking, and the male protagonist's character is as graceful as jade in front of others, gentle and calm. People are lazy and do not play their cards according to common sense. Friends who like this type of game, hurry up and check it out! ! [Laughing] I have been a long-time fan since I moved in now [Chigua]. Also, the author is getting better, he is very obedient, and he is also very humorous. Finally, please don't give up on updating! ! I like this book very much. [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

Woohoo, I like it very much. There may be some bugs, but they don't affect the viewing at all. The original protagonist is not an annoying character, everyone is very nice. [Praise]

Yes, the main character, Lao Yin, is well-received. Unlike other villain stories, the son of luck he befriends is like an experience baby, and is exiled when he appears. There are just too few updates and the author is too short [cool]

Generally speaking, it's pretty good. It borrowed from a book in the early stage, so it seemed a bit discouraging, but it got much better starting from Chapter 16, with a completely original plot. The look and feel is okay, and so is the author's description. To be honest, when I saw the description that looked like Journey to the West, it really shocked me, Doudou! Author, you are so good at writing, are you going to die? Duan Zhang's cross talk is also very interesting. I didn't expect that the author's identity is really a watermelon (does your melon stay ripe?) Ahem, I'm going too far. I originally came across this novel to kill some time, but when I saw the beginning, I felt strangely familiar, so I chose to read the comment section, and found out that I actually learned from it (I knew there was an introduction and I didn't read it to the end). I thought to myself, the author's attitude is not bad, so just keep reading, and then I became more and more fascinated by it. The author's descriptive ability is acceptable, the protagonist's character is also likeable, and I like the plot. There is no such thing as pornography or meaningless competition. I give this a thumbs up [Blow a kiss] I am a little disgusted with pornographic behavior, especially when reading a book. I feel a little psychologically resistant to it, but I still read it, so after reading the whole article, basically I was quite surprised when there was no pornographic accent (most of the online articles I read basically have a bit of pornographic accent), and the author's description level is also quite high. It is the kind of description ability that I have seen in online articles that are relatively good. It is not a meaningless and exciting article. It has a plot and depth, and you can use your brain appropriately (use your rusty little brain to prevent being eaten by zombies!) To sum up: the early stage contains a lot of references from a novel. If you don't like it, you can jump directly to Chapter 16. After Chapter 16, the plot is completely original. CP is huge, and there are millions of people who don't like it! Ten million! Don't read the comments section! There is a bit of plotting, but not much, and you can still watch it without thinking. The author's description ability is quite good. In the early stage, the character description is a bit weak, but it gradually improves in the later stage. It is a bit lagging in the early stage, but gradually gets better in the later stage. The overall tone of the novel is joyful, and it is a light-hearted and humorous novel suitable for all ages. [Laughs][laughs] Also, can the author give more information? It's not enough, it's not enough at all. Please, author, I beg you, dad, you are my dad! [Cry][cry]

The author writes so well. ⊙▽⊙I write much more fluently than other villain novels! He doesn't smell like a loser, he is a pure handsome man! ! ! This is the elegant and orthodox villain!

Among Tomato's novels about non-CP male protagonists, it is the one with the least degree of male protagonist that I have read so far. There are almost no surprises. The plot is brisk but has ups and downs, and the situation is clear but also strange. It is a refreshing novel worth reading. The protagonist is reasonably deceitful, has a bit of a male-mom personality, and overall the character is very cute. The supporting characters are all quite likable, and the CP of all the protagonists is worth mentioning (I'm a drug addict to be honest), which I really enjoyed.

Nice! ! ! Especially the cross talk part! ! ! () This book is not a purely lighthearted and funny systematic text, in the medium term, but a serious fairy tale interspersed with daily life... The author is not limited in word count, has a good grasp of the plot, and the writing is smooth/excellent. I personally really like how several brothers/sisters of destiny play together with the protagonist () The daily life interspersed with the main plot is really fun, and the transition is silky smooth. Overall, I didn't have any problems with the plot. At first I thought it was a non-serious comedy, but after reading so far, I thought it was the icing on the cake - the fighting scenes were already a bit shocking to me, and then the level of intellectual battles was added, letting me know that this book is not simple. It's a pity that it's too short at the moment... It's not interesting enough for me! But the star is arranged! Come on, watermelon!

It's a very good book. It's not like an author who has just written an article. Overall, the writing is very comfortable. Hope this book survives.

My comment is worth reading carefully 1. The author's style of writing is worth talking about alone. It is really interesting. Whether it is a chapter similar to the four famous works or a small theater in the form of cross talk, it is very interesting. Even a person like me who can read ten lines at a time will stop [Don't laugh at me, I don't know much about reading] 2. In my opinion, the characters in this book are at least good. From my personal point of view, there are no stereotyped characters... [Maybe I didn't see that everyone is tolerant and tolerant] 3. Then the atmosphere of this book is really good, the comment section is harmonious, and the author is also very funny... I personally find it difficult to accept the poor comment section and readers, as well as the few inappropriate jokes [such as dirty jokes...] The baggage of shaking can basically make people laugh [this does not rule out that my personal laughter point is low] In my personal opinion, it is a book with good atmosphere, rapid updates, good character development and moderate pace. If you have anything to add or other opinions, we are happy to discuss it with you♡ [The above is only my personal opinion] Boss... Can you change the first 16 chapters and release the remaining chapters bit by bit according to the original plot? It's really a very good book. I also want to continue to read about Big Brother...

My first book review hehe. I gave up on the two popular non-CP novels I read before because the protagonist was very selfish and somewhat wretched, and Nan Ning was probably more serious. I didn't have any expectations for this book, but the protagonist is flesh-and-blood and not very selfish. I like it very much. I've also seen a novel without CP before that turned into two male protagonists as soon as it was written, and I thought it was okay. This book insists on no CP, which is also good. I hope there will be extra chapters about the protagonist and the children of destiny.

When I first read the novel, I thought it was like other villain novels, but it turned out to be more and more exciting later on. The author's language is very vivid, and the protagonist's IQ is online. The only drawback is that it's too short. [Thinking] Finally, I want to say that the protagonist and his junior brothers are really good at fighting each other. [Sinister smile]

Quick update, unlike other cruel villain stories, this style of writing is very comfortable to read.

Nice! I really like Uncle Xiao's character design, and the author's writing style is also very interesting. I really like this genre, but I hope that none of the protagonists have CPs. I was a little scared when I saw that Xiao Fu and Princess Yun'an seemed to be showing signs, mainly because I was talking about Uncle Xiao and the son of luck he raised! ! Ahhhhhh! My Ronaldinho, wow wow wow, I didn't even get to kiss you, why did someone else kiss me first [crying]

It's good to read, and the author handled some parts of the plot very much like a classic novel. The protagonist is gradually growing up now, and his mentality can be felt. His methods and thoughts are gradually maturing. I really like this kind of growth story. Come on, author, I'm looking forward to the next story! (Os: I hope I can communicate more with my fellow juniors [laughing])

In other words, the characterization is very good in all aspects, and there is no lack of humor and writing. To be honest, there was a fight scene that was written in ancient classical Chinese and it was really difficult to understand, but I will give a rough explanation later (›´ω`‹), which almost made me, a person with poor understanding ability, miserable. No CP is fine, feel free to knock on it! And although it has no cp, I think it can actually add a little more emotion. The main reason is that I suggest that the author can let Xiao Ming sell it once (the second son does not feel bad [shy]), even if he sells it secretly a few times, no one will mind! |･ω･｀) It's not for selling, after all, it was the senior brother who asked the four little ones to cling to him a little longer. What I hope most is that the author can stick to it because it is really good! Don't change authors and stop updating or anything like that (you have learned from the past) and write slowly as long as the quality is online, I believe you can afford it (ง ˙ω˙)ว It deserves five stars, and I like this article! Finally, let's talk about what comes to mind (continue to follow the article [eating melon]

The author wrote it for fun at first, but then he really took it seriously, hahahaha. I enjoyed watching several short clips later. It is really a good writing style, and there are small theaters from time to time, hahahahaha. In the main text, the male protagonist is well portrayed. In the next 100 chapters or so, He Mengzhao can be said to be very well written. There is very little pen and ink, but the characters are vivid. I hope the author can stick to it, although the protagonist's name is a bit difficult to pronounce, hahahahaha. Come on! ! ! !

I don't understand why the rating is so low. This is one of the few good novels I have read. The writing is good and I can see the shadow of reading classical Chinese. The plot is well arranged and the protagonist is not brainless. The only shortcoming is that it is not very exciting. The author is too short and the protagonist's strength improves too slowly. For now, it can be maintained.

It's good to watch. Xiao Ming's behavior is one of the protagonists that I feel most comfortable watching. In short, every supporting role and every protagonist is very enjoyable to me! Tomato, please come out, what's going on with this review? !

Fortunately, I have added a bookshelf. I come back and read it again when I am short of literature. I come back and read it again when I forget about it. I come back and read it again when I am bored... For me, it is Bai Yueguang. I would like to add a good review and hope to see the follow-up in the future. [Shy][shy]

It's pretty good. It's very cool to watch. It's so straight and ♂♂ that I feel happy. I like to see two people getting along, but I don't want to see the pink bubble atmosphere. The plots are quite good, but the plot of "Child of Destiny" is a bit lacking.

It's very interesting. Xigua Dadan even said that he is a newcomer, but I think the writing is very exciting. Damn it, it's been a long time since I read a normal and interesting male channel about cultivating immortals. Finally, there is no character who rushes towards the protagonist and blushes! The protagonist is so funny and the plot is well developed! In the small theater in the middle, the protagonist is so vivid!

It's good-looking, and it's very in line with my taste, but there's one thing that makes the plot at the beginning so similar to a certain novel next door. . . .

It is indeed a good book, the plot and characters are very vivid and the characters are three-dimensional rather than flat. It's a pity that I didn't make it to the end, but it is an undeniably good book. This first book review is dedicated to you. To Mr. Xiao who cannot see you again, I hope you can be free and unrestrained in your own world.

It's awesome, it has flesh and blood, the characters are rich and full, and they also have their own little flaws. It would be better if the plot had more ups and downs. Of course, it wouldn't be a bad idea to have more articles. I look forward to the author's creation. [Understood]

I really like Xiao Ming, and the scenes where the senior brothers get along with each other are also very tender and heart-warming. It is one of the few books that I can read again and again. It was an unacceptable ending to be reported and taken down.

I feel like I borrowed it from the early stage hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha does not have a big problem, the rest of it is all my own creation! The plot is awesome! The supporting characters are also well portrayed, and some of the machinations, calculations, etc. Are all very logical and reliable! I really like the characters of the main characters! Come on, author!

The book is beautiful! ! There is no cp in this book! I hope the author can see the personal points. In fact, the author's book is very good, and I am very dissatisfied with Xiao Ye, but in the end, it has no cp. Some people don't like people with CP. I also hope more people come to see it. I just ask the author to let Xiao Ye interact more (like the younger brother and the elder brother). Ye Ye doesn't want CP to just follow the protagonist in the later stage, so that both parties will be satisfied [crazy] [crazy] [heart-warming] (more interaction

It's very beautiful. I like both the writing and the characters. Just why there was a similar "predecessor" and why it was suddenly taken off the shelves, I will probably never know the answer.

I feel quite happy watching it There was no frustration throughout the whole process, and I really like that the protagonist has his own strength, and then all the characters turn into characters. Literary talent is really good Reading the whole article, there are routines, but the writing is not boring, and there is a feeling of finding novelty in old things. Quite enjoyable I just hope it will be similar to what the protagonist would have said when he met the elder, here. Try to write as little as possible about this kind of idiosyncratic behavior, otherwise it will feel like the imaginative mood will be gone.