Reborn: Bao Guowei’s Rise

The system is too abrupt, and the protagonist is reborn, not a modern time traveler. I don't know anything about the system. It's too weird to accept it all at once. The subject matter is good, but the plot needs to be changed, otherwise it will be difficult to fix the pit.

It's very interesting, come on, I'll follow you faster, and most people like to watch the daily life of father and son. Write more about it, not the dance practice. Some people may not like to watch it. For example, I like to watch daily life. Update quickly, write more about the daily life of the Bao family, and in the mid-term, you can write more about the martial arts training. Don't interrupt the update. There are only two themed novels about the Bao family and his son on Tomato. Yours is one, and the other one is about time travel and has no system. I prefer to read rebirth and systematic ones. Remember, don't interrupt the update! Be sure to read my comments and suggestions.

Interesting interesting

Don't you need the ocean? In what era were paper banknotes used? It was legal tender and it was only after 1935, okay?

Not bad, give it a thumbs up