Magic********

What are the advantages of time travellers? Daily funny + gift girl, very speechless, no comments means it is very poor, other fan Pokémon writes better than you, too watery, the word count is the same as the diary

It's okay to forget that the writing style is awkward. The description is ridiculous and funny, and the girl is also given away.

It's not bad, but it feels a little watery and the feeling with the heroine is a bit doggy.

You wrote this too well, no wonder you didn't get any ratings because it was so clear. Look at the first few chapters (a 5-year-old child came up to Liu Bo and said I know your identity, how did he know? It was too ridiculous. And how did he think of so many Poke Balls when he told Zifuqi? Even if you can imagine that Zifuqi would directly believe a 5-year-old child?)

Most of them are in the character water, like writing a diary

Too much nonsense, incoherent,

It's too watery, bro.

Sometimes first person, sometimes third person, Xiaobai Wen

Why write that the main character doesn't know many Pokémon? There are a lot of typos. There were also some curse words. Many novels about puppy love at a young age are not like this.