Group Chat: I, Obito, Why Should I Defect to Konoha?

The protagonist is sinister, thief-spirited, decisive, and "good at disguising." The number of words is too few and needs maintenance. Identified as currently inedible [eating melon]

It's pretty good to be honest. It's just that many heroines feel that I prefer to watch Obito's discomfort. In my mind, Obito should only live with Lin, and no one else should mix in with him. It would be okay if it was used, but it already has a harem style trend.

This paragraph of action description and language description vividly depicts the beautiful scene, which runs through the middle part of the article and is the clue. At the same time, the battle in the following text is used to add sad scenes to the music, showing people's joy, suggesting that they are actually the spies hidden by the adult, explaining the reason why they showed weak combat power during the battle, leaving suspense and attracting the readers' interest.

It's pretty good. There's nothing poisonous about it so far. I hope this book gets better and better. It would be better if there were five chapters added every day @ The Children Who Look Up at the Stars

It's well written, but don't read it. In addition, the protagonist is a time traveler and not a native Obito [face covering] If you have a fetish for original novels, don't read it. The rest of the old bookworms can safely eat it, and there are basically no major poisonous points.

It was fun to watch, but suddenly it was gone. It was so uncomfortable.

It was a bit unexpected. I thought it was the person who was killed by Obito in the future who returned to the chat group, and then something like that.

Author, you have to update it, otherwise we all want to keep it. Most of the losers just take care of themselves and then become useless. Nice looking, but not enough.

Harem? Accept those women? ? ? It's a mess, and a girl is missing.

This Obito article is quite good

The writing is good, but I am too young, and even though I have a harem title, I am still 10 years old after more than 100 chapters.

This has a kind of nurturing pleasure, and the things in it are not as unchanged as the original work. The plot is very cleverly connected, and the original famous scenes are interspersed in it. The time back is particularly interesting, and the strength is not too exaggerated. The step by step growth is indeed very interesting.

The writing is quite good But I have some doubts. If the three magatama is replaced by a kaleidoscope, it cannot become eternal. After another eye change, it cannot inherit the pupil technique. Sasuke has not been seen to be able to read.

It's okay, but I don't really like harem stories.

Super pretty! ! ! It would be great if the author added some other blood stains, such as Ice Escape, Burning Escape, Red Eyes, and Corpse Veins.

It's a very good book, although I don't like the main character having a harem at the end. Good luck to the author.

It looks good, but you can stop suppressing the protagonist so much. You can kill monsters and extract chakra, but there is always a lack of blue bars during battles.

A very creative fanfic, using Boruto's ninja tools to travel through the future and past to kill everyone. The shortcomings are that it's a bit messy to wear, the main character is a little kid running a harem which is a bit funny, the emotional description is a bit light, and the last chapter can actually be skipped.

I think it's very good. I think it's a very novel subject matter. I jumped directly from the first few chapters to Chapter 65. It didn't affect my viewing experience at all. It's not embarrassing, but I don't think it will affect the subsequent viewing. Author, your update speed is a bit slow. It feels like squeezing out toothpaste. Are you trying to get better? [Rolls eyes]

Very good, the author keeps up the good work

I'm in a trance. Let's just talk about my feelings. It's boring, unpleasant and boring 🥱

The book has come to an end here. I have no idea recently and really don't know how I will write this book later, so I decided to stop writing for a while and maybe write similar works in the future. Thank you very much for reading this. If you see this, please give it a thumbs up, because this is nonsense.

In theory, is it possible for Obito to use teleportation to pull Lin from other parallel worlds? It is only a matter of time before he creates a world with only Lin [laughing]

It's okay to expand on the content of traveling to a parallel world in the future or something like that.

It's okay, it's okay, but it's a bit unsatisfactory

This book, Tai Liu, has a novel plot and is pretty good.

Starting with Dao-san, and then Dao-san, it is indeed a little Japan

It fits the original plot of Time Traveler, but won't change much of the plot. Even those who haven't watched Naruto can still watch it.

Five-star praise is given to you.

Yeah, it's okay. You can take a look.