叶罗丽：明月游戏人间

I don't know what words to use to describe my current mood. After reading it, I just feel that the author's literary talent is very good. Her writing has a mysterious and noble feeling. The characters in her writing have no absolute right and wrong, but I feel that the original animation plot full of loopholes is back on track. There is no nonsense. They are all trying to get rid of the thread of the plot. The most surprising thing to me is Wang Silence, I can say that I have a very bad impression of this protagonist who has a huge halo in the original plot and has "touching" words. The author in this article did not blindly criticize her to make the audience feel happy, but gave Wang Mo a chance to break away from his stupidity. It was quite unexpected, but I don't hate this kind of self-aware Wang Mo. On the contrary, I admire it. The real protagonist should not be blindly kidnapped by kindness and morality. The author did not be stingy with her children. She gave A Yuan absolute wisdom and strength, and her freewheeling character prevented her from being entangled in justice or other matters. Maybe A Yuan will still have the consciousness of the author, but the author has given her absolute freedom and allowed A Yuan to break through the rules of the world and feel her. This is something that is not found in all the books I have read. She is giving her children the right to grow flesh and blood to explore the truth of the world, and the right to lead to the real world in the future. This is my favorite novel this year. The author's writing is really good o٩(๑❛❛๑)۶ Come on

The preview of the play is beautiful and has a unique flavor. It is clear to me with thousands of worries and will never be forgotten. The excitement of the story is unimaginable, and the beautiful use of sentences is very good. I particularly like it. It's a good substitution without destroying the original characters. Highly recommended! The heroine's views are very relatable, the logic is strong, and the story line is relatively clear. The writing is quite touching. Various forms of introduction are abundant. Still highly recommended.

The author's writing style is very good and his words are poetic. A very new theme, different angles, and a coherent plot. This time: the royal princess did not abandon her subjects, Xin Ling was deposed as the gatekeeper, the Poison Empress became the new gatekeeper, the love princess and the radiation sister and brother have a good future, the fire lord and the dream princess committed suicide and were turned into puppets by the heroine to work for the heroine... The heroine is very powerful in combat. I personally like her personality and acting style, which is really good. Maybe the only drawback is that there are too few chapters at the moment, which is not enough to read.

Wow, the author writes really well (≧∇≦*). I also like the character of the characters. He is very careful when writing. Every node of the story is well done. I feel that there are not many contradictions when reading. The explanations are very clear. I like it very much, but it seems a little lacking. When will the author continue to update? [Top post][top post][top post]

It's very interesting to watch, the plot logic is online, and the female protagonist's outlook on life is also good. There are no disgusting scenes (for example, a person is crazy and trying to die in front of the heroine, but the heroine just can't kill her). This book has no such plot at all, which makes it very comfortable to read.

This is the most interesting Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read! The protagonist's image design is very good, and the plot is also very interesting, but the only flaw is - there are too few ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

！ ! ! This writing style makes me feel ashamed [learned] [blowing kiss] Five stars for you!

It's really beautiful! ! I hope there is no male protagonist [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Okay, not bad, not bad. This is the second book I've read that made the blue peacock pay the price. But I like the price of this book better. In the other book, it was revealed that she stole the spell. It's really uncomfortable. I hope this one won't be like that.

Overall rating: nice The article has a clear structure and context, a clear main line, a framework and logic, so that everything happens for its own sake, so it is not a tall building. The characters in the anime Ye Luoli do not have OOC in this article. It is also because the author is logical, and the original character of Ye Luoli has transitioned to the current character in a way that is consistent with the most essential characteristics of the character and serves the plot. The protagonist's personality is distinct and not annoying, and he has strong power. The protagonist has experienced too many unreasonable things and his somewhat surly character will not make people annoying. It will only feel reasonable and a little interesting. Today's aesthetics are no longer the silly and sweet type of Wang Mo. Such people are too fake. Many anime fans are against Wang Mo. Part of the reason why Mo's plot feels so cold is that Wang Mo himself is unreasonable, naive, unreasonably kind, stupid but luck-ridden. The protagonist's character can be like this, but Wang Mo's environment cannot grow such a flower, and the underlying logic is wrong, so this character will be weak. The character of the protagonist in this article exactly reflects the wishes of the new law, that is, the preferences of today's people. But at the same time, the innovation and highlight plot of the article are also reflected in the fact that the author can obviously write a cool article in compliance with the new rules, but he wants the protagonist of the article to go beyond the audience's wishes, adding a mysterious color to the article, and the story develops to the end to give people a sudden enlightenment experience. However, there are also some minor shortcomings. The author guesses that the author's outline should have been revised in the later period as the events developed. The author's theme of fighting against fate emerged a bit hastily, making people feel that the plot is not so coherent. This is not talking about the separation of the plot. The plot is still complete and does not have much impact on the viewing experience. Regarding the ending, I think it is an open-ended he. Following the development of the plot, and based on various hints such as "Only the law can kill the law" mentioned in the article and the protagonist finally gaining the power of the old law and being the spokesperson of the new law, the final outcome is not difficult to predict. Why is it said to be open-ended? Because the ending does leave room for the audience to imagine. I guess it was deliberately designed by the author, because the subsequent development is unclear, or it is difficult to explain clearly. As a story with a larger world view, the ending cannot be as simple and crude as a fairy tale with the prince and princess happily together. Therefore, this kind of ending is reasonable and echoes the rationality of the logical framework of the article mentioned by the author before. As a reader, I don't object to such an ending, but such an ending will not bring you the pleasure of finishing it in one go, and the feeling that the aftertaste will remain in your heart. I personally feel that it can be longer, or write some extras. I hope the author can consider it. The author's writing style is good, although it is not praised to be very good, but it can be seen that the author carefully considered the words when writing. This has to mention the original Ye Luoli world view. Its language is based on the original world, so although there are many self-made plots, it will not make people feel abruptly separated from Ye Luoli's world itself. Finally, I would like to digress. I like the works written for love, because such works are written from the heart, and there are fewer words and plots, because the author loves his own writing more than the readers, so the readers' perception is also good. As a reader, you are accepting the output of ideas. If the author cannot even convince himself, how can the reader be immersed in the situation. Although there are also disadvantages in works that generate electricity for love, such as updates, the arbitrariness of plots, and the possibility of becoming the output of pure opinions, lacking logical coherence, etc., For this group, screening is also easier. As for how to tell whether the author is motivated by love, it depends on your own concept. I believe that every excellent novel has the author's love poured into it. As for the protagonist of this book, Yuan Ming, it is naturally the author's preference.

Kite life, butterfly, law. "The entanglement of old laws and new laws, the endless threads, represents the endless struggle." The author's writing style is gorgeous, the structure is meticulous, and the thinking is clear. The characters in the writing are independent and independent. The pictures are gorgeous and have destiny and turning point. The conception is clever and the meaning of the expression is meaningful. Life is in my hands, not in heaven. Writing is for me, not for the rules.

Super pretty! Show them all to me! Don't be ignorant... That's weird~ I beg you, come and watch! Super, super, invincible and beautiful fan! There is no plot that loses IQ at all. It is interlocking and tightly integrated, making it impossible to put down.

It is a masterpiece, depicting the forced will of three thousand people, starting a feast of awakening. At this point, I hope all the souls in your paintings can play the final chapter of dawn. + I don't like book reviews very much, but this Ye Luoli fanfic, I can see that the author loves the protagonist in his writing very much. He has given soul to him, and the words jumping on the tip of the pen are very descriptive. This is a poem of awakening, banishing the numbness and cold frame, breaking up and reuniting is the love and blessing for the soul in his writing. I like this kind of author. Meaningless suffering adds to the chapter of the soul in his writing, it is like a puppet. Without a soul, love will make flesh and blood grow crazily, and the same goes for the soul. +The above is the reason for my book review. So, gentlemen, we are destined to meet again.

It's really good-looking. It has more depth and literary talent than most Tomato books, and it's not affected by the junk original work at all. I've always bypassed this kind of fanfic before, but this one really surprised me.

Very good plot, looking forward to the update. The protagonist is a bit fun-loving and strong. Anyway, he has never been bullied from the beginning. So far, Prince Water seems to be interested in the protagonist.

The story is very novel. What surprised me the most is that Yuan Ming has self-awareness. Although this is also given by the author, I am still surprised. The author really brought them to life. I also like Yuan Ming's character very much. It is so to my liking. I haven't liked a novel so much in a long time, so I think it is worth five stars. [Like][Like][Like]

Our heroine - Yuan Yuan is a beautiful but a little bit evil Princess of the Moon. I think she is very good. The author's writing style is super good and the plot of the article is also very novel. It is the kind I have never seen before. I like it very much and I am looking forward to the next development more and more. Hehe

It's really shocking. I especially like to see this kind of heroine who is a villain, but she is elegant and calm even when she kills the enemy. She is cold-hearted and has no worries. She does everything just for herself. She is also very powerful. After reading it, it is really shocking. When I first read this book, I felt that there was nothing interesting to read. Halfway through it I stopped watching it. This is the second time I watched it and my hands were shaking. It was really shocking. I really like it. In this false world, only the heroine is the most real. All of this is just a toy of the author Huang Liang Yimeng. But the heroine has broken through from a toy to the law, and she is the most powerful existence. Yuanming congratulations on your freedom

Absolutely amazing. This is the first time I have seen this type of book. The first character written by the author has his own life. This book gave her life and set her free. It can be seen that the author really likes Xiao Yuan. I think everyone likes Xiao Yuan until they see the end. [Sending Hearts] It ended so quickly and I couldn't bear to let it go. .

Emm, it's very good, the writing is very good, the protagonist's character is very good, he kills decisively, the heroine is very powerful, the plot is fast and not draggy, and there are indeed many private settings. Just, can you update it faster? Also, is there any CP?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh they look… but they are so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Unexpected ending and plot, a masterpiece in Ye Luoli's fan fiction! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, the rhetoric is gorgeous but does not feel like words are piled up, the characters are very three-dimensional, and everyone is very vivid. Wang Mo's reversal was something I didn't expect. The author really brought everyone to life. I can really feel the author's love for the characters, allowing them to grow and experience the world as they want.

True and false, false and true, the author greatly involved himself in the situation and intertwined with Xiao Yuan. It seems that Xiao Yuan really penetrated the latitude and brought us a grand curtain call. I really like this kind of plot. The intertwining of the characters is the most delicious setting.

So pretty! I also like the heroine's character! The plot is also good! Worth a look! ♡ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з♡

The writing style is superb, and it can be seen that the author has a rich cultural heritage. The heroine's IQ is always online, and her character is very good. The supporting characters who were not cold when watching anime in the past instantly felt like it under the author's writing. Ye Luoli's own loopholes have also been reasonably repaired, and she seems to be in a comfortable mood.

Very nice! Super pretty! It is very shocking, whether it is the former heroine under the old rules, the new heroine under the new rules, or other characters, they have realized their wishes and gained freedom. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and the story is very connected.

A truly sober person knows that he is just a performer. The author really brought this character to life. He has a cunning and cute personality, but is evil at heart. The plot is reversible and the characters are well developed.

This is my favorite book among all the Ye Luoli fanfics I have read. Although it is relatively short, the author's literary talent is really good, and the story is unexpectedly exciting. The ending of this book is so eye-catching, and I like it very much without cp. In short, it is very good to read [Blow Kiss]

The author's writing is really good! The sooner it is updated the better! [Blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful. The author's writing style is really outstanding. I quite like the heroine Come on, the author is great @Dayin

The dear writer draws a new chapter on the original story with delicate writing, enriching the image of its characters. There is no absolute good or bad, and all the characters retain the most realistic background.