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Fantasy and Passion, Forced to Become Possessed
Fantasy, unsystematic, passionate
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What Are Some Good Fantasy Novels?
I recommend a few engaging martial arts and fantasy novels. They are all conscientious works and a must-have for those who want to read! Let's also share our inventory. Hahaha. Are there any novels you'll never tire of?
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A Masterpiece Like Jian Lai, a Comprehensive List of Good Books
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Is the Traditional Passionate Fantasy in Decline? No System, Not the Kind of Holy Mother
Is the traditional passionate fantasy in decline? No system, not the kind of Holy Mother
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I read the first seven chapters, and it was indeed a bit confusing. The characters did not appear clearly, especially the protagonist. The wedge actually affected the protagonist to a great extent. There were too many characters and the scenes were a bit heavy. The protagonist was not highlighted, and even somewhat obscured. The last two wedges are best used as extras. The protagonist's life experience can be slowly revealed in the next dozens of chapters. It is difficult to impress the readers by instilling the protagonist's past and present in the first few chapters. I don't represent all readers, this is just for me. Then the battle is fierce and your moves are fierce and diverse. This is your characteristic and strength. But success or failure lies in the battle scenes. The defeat lies in fighting for too long, and the plot cannot keep up with the rhythm of the battle. You cannot use 3,000 words in one chapter, or even the whole article is about fighting. It is too long, and readers are not here to learn how to write martial arts novels. If the plot is not eye-catching, it will be difficult to read it calmly as you said, and you can't help but read ten lines at a glance.
Don't you understand the three golden chapters? The first few chapters were written inexplicably, but there was some continuity in chapters one and two. The third chapter was inexplicably about the village. When I read the third chapter, I thought Komaki was the little boy in the first and second chapters. But in the fourth chapter, there was another surprise. What the hell, it was so confusing.