Ye Luoli: Time and Xi Never Part

The author's writing style is very good, and I admire Shi Li. What the author wrote is exactly what I thought. I really appreciate the author's narrative and discussion, and also like the author's writing technique (similar to mine). In short, the author is very good at writing, but let me say that the only thing that is lacking is that the plot is a bit confusing. , As a reader, I don't feel comfortable reading it, but it often makes readers think, which is just right. I hope the author will continue to update, and if you have a chance, you can also get to know 😘. I feel that the author is great (I will review it after reading it, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Really really like it!! The wording of the article is just right, and the character is not ruined. The author writes Shi Li's love and hatred appropriately. I hope the author can continue to work hard to update. I wish the author a happy day~[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

The writing is superb, I love it [Adore] very much, the plot is compact (although it occasionally inserts other things, but it doesn't hurt), the logic is OK, some personal settings are simply set in my heart, and the content is also very in line with my wishes. To sum up in one sentence: Awesome! 😘 Dad, after a year, I read it again, but I didn't expect that I had published a book review before. It is indeed a book that I liked very much before, and I still like it very much now. Also, I wish you a Happy New Year in advance! 😘

The author writes well, keep up the good work

It's great. This is the second best thing I've heard. The character is not bad either.

The author's writing style is good, the structure of the article is clear, the characters are not broken at all, the plot is sweet and sad, and the most important thing is Shi Li's CP, I love it so much!!! Other CPs are also super easy to knock off 🥰🥰🥰

It's really good to watch 👍 👍, I hope the author will make more extra stories, especially the sadistic ones. I want to see the follow-up to the plot released by Ye Luoli's official website, which is the confrontation between Li Hui and Shi Xi after he betrayed the fairyland, or Shi Xi went to a place after knowing Li Hui's betrayal. In this place, she thought there was no one, so she cried and muttered something to herself. Then what she didn't know was that everyone in Lingxi Pavilion and Li Hui saw and heard it next to her. Anyway, it was just torture. I hope the author will update more, thank the author 😄❤️ Can the author update more? I really like watching it(//∇//)

It's too cruel. Can't write about dessert,

I hope the author will work hard, don't be lazy, and update early. Of course, it's useless to say so, so be it.

I feel that Li Huibeng's character is too broken. I think Li Huibeng's love should be forbearing and restrained. He shouldn't be a madman, but he might be in the future. It's really touching! But I feel that the BE chapter and the first half of the heart-breaking game to I Care are very well written, and are particularly in line with my fantasies about Shi Li's follow-up. It is my favorite book I have ever read, because it was because of Shi Li that I read Ye Luoli again. Before Time Rain came out, I felt that it was too Mary Sue, and I fell into the trap because of Shi Li. Good cheers, author!