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I first want to ask, is the protagonist's guardian spirit only Sima Yi? In fact, you can write a protagonist with a warrior body or a special physique. After all, the Jin Dynasty also had many famous generals and counselors. If the protagonist only has one guardian spirit, I feel that he is not worthy of Sima Yi at all. After all, the Jin Dynasty is also a dynasty, and the descendant does not even have a special character. There is no special physique, only one guardian spirit, which looks very cheap no matter how you look at it. The Han Dynasty divided the three kingdoms, and each kingdom had a warrior god body. As a result, the Sima family of the Jin Dynasty that unified the three kingdoms did not even have a special physique. Don't you think this is very, how should I say, just funny? Sima Yi is called Greedy Wolf, Greedy Wolf is a treacherous and deceitful person. Sima Yi's abilities can also be described as Greedy Wolf, because Greedy Wolf has many abilities of Sima Yi, which can be said to be almost universally recognized. Also, doesn't the protagonist have a legendary weapon? Cao Yanbing has the Ten Palaces of Hell, Liu Yuchan has the Snow-Stepping White Wolf, Sun Zhantian has the Great Wilderness Purple Lightning, and Xiang Kunlun also has the Tianhuang City-Breaking Halberd. The protagonist is a descendant of the Jin Dynasty. Doesn't he even have a weapon? Also, I want to ask one question: does the protagonist really want to be a minister, or is he like Sima Yi, holding back. If I really want to be a minister, I can only say that it is not suitable for me. How can I put it? In the original work, Cao Yanbian was okay after he had the heart to become a king. However, the protagonist is a time traveler. He traveled to the world of Zhenhun Street, but still assisted Cao Yanbing. It can only be said that this book is not suitable for most people, because in reality, people in our lives are under great pressure. For example, some people are employees, and employees of the company are busy running their jobs every day. If you are a student, you have to go to school every day, and there is a lot of pressure. They want to read articles, and many of them want to read something that can make them feel better and relax. If the protagonist is a descendant of Sima Yi, and a time traveler, or assisting Cao Yanbin, how can I put it, it doesn't feel much different from the original work, and there aren't many novelties. At most, we can only look at his affairs as a courtier, but if the protagonist rebels like Sima Yi in the end, there will be more writing points, and there will be more stories and novelties to attract others. Although the American dramas you wrote all represent Sima Yi's wolfish ambitions. And Si Mahjong is written like a central minister who wants to assist Cao Yanbing, but he is also written as ambitious, but it is also the same as another previous book about the Jin Dynasty. How can I put it, it is very disappointing. The appearance of the protagonist seems to have not changed anything at all. The plot still develops as before. Oh, no, there are some changes, but overall it is still the same as before. The appearance or absence of the protagonist has little effect, and Yu Jin is resurrected. , The protagonist signs a three-headed hell dog, and the other plots are all small-scale changes, but there are no large-scale changes at all. I am not asking you to make large-scale changes, but to let you have your own plot and protagonist. The use of the protagonist in your way of writing can be minimal. Maybe the protagonist will show true wolfish ambition later, but no readers will wait until that time. Now readers are asking for the golden three chapters or something, because there are too many novels now, and no one will waste time reading this kind of novel. Do you understand the plot of the original work? If others think this book is not good, it is not impossible for them to change to Zhenhunjie, but the number is relatively small. Your writing style is very similar. How do you say it? It's very similar to the way you wrote to make up for regrets a few years ago. But why do you think so few people read your book? It's because you don't have the passion and novelty that readers want. They just want to read the original work. Do you understand? It's almost like the original except for the main character, you know? In the introduction to your work, Chapter 8 shows its fangs, but you didn't see it.