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Let me briefly explain it first. I have only read the story of the first world, so my opinion may be biased, but I think if it is not written well, I can say a sentence in advance, rather than a sentence in the later world, which will be better (this may be the psychology of some readers who try to make me read later). Although I didn't spend any money, I also spent my time talking. To put it simply, the first world is a story in which a childhood sweetheart ends up falling from the sky halfway, and the male protagonist cannot resist the plot and falls from the sky together. In the middle, when the male protagonist is entangled with Tiansheng, he also wants to be with the female protagonist. This is a mentality of wanting and wanting. And throughout the story, from the moment Tianxiang appears, the male protagonist is ambiguous but doesn't want to let go. Even though it was said at the end that he was married to Tianxiang and that he would no longer be entangled with her (I didn't read this section clearly, please correct me if I have any questions), the ending was a combination of he and oe, and I didn't see the atmosphere of be at all. It's said to be abusive to the male protagonist. Even the few drops of cat urine he dropped would make dogs disgusted. Moreover, the male protagonist's character is centrally air-conditioned (specifically in a derogatory sense here). I feel incompetent to accept that my sweetheart is like a scumbag. Speaking of being controlled by the plot, I didn't see him feeling helpless in order to escape the plot but was forced to fall in love with the sky. I felt that he was quite happy with it. Four stars means the author's writing is good so far, and one star means I was disgusted by the male protagonist in the first world. That's it, goodbye👋

Very well written! ! The image of the heroine is very good, the details are handled very well, and the emotional description is very profound, which allows me to experience the feelings of the heroine, but there is a little more. However, the writing here is very good, I will leave a mark first\^O^/, and when this book becomes popular, I will become a long-time fan! ! ! (° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho! Keep up the good work, author (ง•̀_•́)งI give it a five-star rating^ω^! ! !

After watching the first world, I thought it was quite interesting! The heroine in it completely fits my ideal type. She is calm, generous, gentle and has a brain (not a love brain) and can grow on her own (without pretending to be sexy). The heroine is more on the road to improving herself! What I feel after watching it is that the male protagonist has been weakened? I don't know if that's right, I just think the heroine is so attractive to me... It's inevitable that the male protagonist likes her (although the plot is very powerful). What attracts me is not the various slap-in-the-face plots of the female protagonist. It's not like other fast-traveling stories that only focus on tasks. She is doing her best while doing the best in the task. The appearance of Gu Shi'an falling in love with the heroine is the best proof. Including the step-by-step step-by-step approach to completing the task, what also touched me was that the author explained the relationship between the "original owner" and the "host" (similar to whether the host would feel uncomfortable if it were worn by the original owner?). Very few novels will explain this, and the explanation in the article makes us feel more at ease when reading the article. In addition, the stories of the passers-by in the article are slightly out of touch with the original text and are well designed. In fact, they are not completely uncontrollable. They can all be changed according to opportunities, right? Then at the end of the first world, many people scolded the male protagonist, well... The author of sadistic novels still has to be big-hearted. My personal feeling is: I will not feel uncomfortable in this book, which makes me pity, because the female protagonist has raised herself very well, so the male protagonist is not the male protagonist. The so-called... Really... Let's put it this way, I have also read a lot of sadistic books, and I will subconsciously take on the perspective of the heroine and feel the frustration and gain of "I" who "love first". The male protagonist in the book will also twist his heart whether he loves "me", as if he has been stabbed... But Su! In fact, the psychology of the female protagonist in this book is the reaction of normal people. The momentary heartbeat when getting along with the male protagonist, the discomfort when jealous, the unswerving pursuit of excellence, the self-consistency of knowing that the plot is difficult to change... I feel the heroine's slow growth and her energy, so I don't feel uncomfortable (of course, everyone is reading a novel and thinking There is nothing wrong with the relationship from beginning to end, this is a sadistic novel after all) But what I mean is: life is not only about love, the heroine is very mature in thought and action, and it is good for her to manage the life she wants. Love, that is, the hero, whether she overcomes the plot or not, is not so necessary for her (we also need to become big women in life~) As for the last opportunity to agree to the male lead... It would be to agree to the ending of the TV series based on them! Since it doesn't matter whether there is more male protagonists in life, then open up the situation and give a chance, which is equivalent to people rushing to be a male nanny. Life is so short and yet so long~ It's a pity that I didn't see any foreshadowing, such as the diary written by the female protagonist (?), How the male protagonist escapes from the plot... The above are all personal thoughts (tonic scold me), the last one! I will keep the novel on my bookshelf and wait for the author's updates~

The writing is very good, keep up the good work, [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] is really good to read. The first aspect has the inner feeling of a youth campus novel. I like it so much [blowing kiss]

The first world depends on personal preference. In the first world, the male protagonist is always controlled by the plot, and he can't help himself when he encounters the female protagonist. Jiang Jiang can make a vicious female supporting character semi-out of plot control because Tiandao has little control over the supporting characters. After all, male and female protagonists and key nodes are must-haves in a novel. Of course, this is my personal understanding. This book is non-CP. Some of Jiang Jiang's emotional controls were staged and some were controlled by the original owner's subconscious awakening. Looking forward to the completion of the second world, give the author a five-star encouragement

Consider writing a side story [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]Write a side story for the first world [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] I can't accept it. I really can't accept the possibility of Lin Chu being with the heroine [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]. Dumeiba [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Xiao Gu is like a white moonlight that briefly leaves little traces [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I can't sleep, it's really too bad [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] The ending of the first world [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] is too bad

Ness, this plot is really good and quite novel. No, I always get a Mary Sue or a slap in the face, a love-at-first-sight plot, (˵¯͒¯͒˵) I love it so much

Has the author considered writing specifically about Bai Yueguang? He only appeared in a few chapters and left an indelible impression in my heart. Gu Shi'an and Gu Shian are too Bai Yueguang. Even after reading the first story, he left a deeper impression on me than the male protagonist or even the male and female co-stars who often appear. It is really too Bai Yueguang.

I was really looking forward to reading this novel at the beginning, but the ending almost shocked me to death. This is the second heart-breaking novel that I have read. I don't know how to describe my current mood...

I watched it for the lightning protection point. The lightning protection point is the setting that I like. The queen of the sea raises fish, and the heroine cares about her kidneys but not her heart. Then I only read the first world. The writing is not bad, but what's wrong with it? Where to raise fish? And why didn't that scumbag abuse him in the first world? Swinging between two ends, now that a vicious female protagonist has awakened, the heroine also said that she would give the male protagonist one last chance to help him, but in the end he was still controlled by the plot. The final result turned out to be that the male protagonist came back and gave him a chance to pursue her. I feel like I didn't see what I wanted to see, or what I thought was introduced to me, I didn't see it in the article. The writing is not bad and the writing is readable.

It really makes me feel indescribably sad. Gu Shian is very unforgettable. In just a few chapters, a pure love and youthful farewell are really unforgettable. I was disgusted by the first male protagonist in the world

Very nice. The heroine sometimes gets too involved in the drama, but she seems to suffer from apathy. I won't say that there will be situations where people who originally liked the original heroine will also like the heroine. Instead, there will be situations where non-important people like the heroine. But everything will become a thing of the past, and they will all exist like passers-by. The author also said that all future male protagonists will be passers-by to the female protagonist. The heroine will not do unnecessary things, nor will she make decisions for the owner of the body without authorization. She will implement the character of the body owner. The most important thing is that in the end, the person in the body of the heroine will return to the body. All this is a very natural transition, and there should be no controversy about the so-called "if you really love someone, you will definitely recognize her". Also, the first world involves the awakening of plot characters, and it feels like there is rarely such a direct plot. The original heroine herself is not a very good character. Of course, the first world has not been completely updated yet, so there is no guarantee that the subsequent heroines will all be like this. You can read this novel📖.

Although the plot is affected, I still hope that the heroine can fall in love happily, improve herself, and be colorful. The original protagonist returns, puts aside the so-called male protagonist, and focuses on his own life. Don't get caught up in these complicated relationships.

A rare good book. It's not a completely immersive quick-travel experience, and the heroine doesn't have a big personality change due to the different roles she plays. The biggest advantage should be that the system is really a mentor-like role in this book. There won't be too much interference, and the heroine doesn't have that strange feeling of being a heartthrob. Everything is natural, happens naturally, begins naturally, and ends naturally.

I would like to ask the author, can every heroine in the world only affect small roles such as female supporting characters? You can change the life trajectory of the female protagonist, but you can't change other people's, right? She came to live for the original owner just to change the trajectory of the supporting character, right? Also, if you want to have a male patron Gu Shi'an throughout the whole story, it is better to remove the no cp. Everyone in the comment area seems to be very supportive. Otherwise, the relationship between Gu Shi'an and Gu Shi'an will be very abrupt. Also, the heroine influenced the female protagonist, and even when she told the heroine that the world was a novel, Heaven did not stop her. But when the male protagonist went to pursue the heroine, Heaven stopped him. Is this really reasonable? Compared to changing the heroine to someone else, wouldn't it have a greater impact on the way of heaven if a character reveals that she is in the novel world? It can be seen that the author wants to write about the female protagonist Bai Yueguang, but if Bai Yueguang doesn't even have the faith to let the male protagonist resist the way of heaven, what kind of Bai Yueguang is she? You can refer to Cheng Ran's novel. The heroine is also Bai Yueguang, and she is also a long-running type. However, in the novel, both the supporting character and the protagonist can write their own independent and detached characters from the novel. They have their own feelings, so even if they can't resist the will of heaven, it will be a big change.

A slow flow of water can make readers feel the same way. I don't like the male protagonist very much at the moment, but I hope the female protagonist can be uniquely beautiful [Sending my heart]

Um, the male protagonist is unclean, but the female protagonist Neptune is clean, uh...

The writing is very good, but Lin Chu really gives people the impression that from the beginning, it was as youthful and fresh as mint lozenges, and later after the original heroine appeared, it turned into chewed gum, which was tasteless and liked to stick. In the end, it turned into a mouthful of old phlegm that could not be coughed out and got stuck in the throat, and finally made the heroine swallow it. Who knows this feeling.

When I wrote the first page, my mood was up and down, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh colouring coming out I am going crazy. It's sweet in the early stage, fun in the middle stage, and what the hell is it in the middle stage? (Completely disregarding the reader's heart, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I really want to use the toilet picket to hit the male protagonist's face ༼ꉺεꉺ༽ and spit) The original male protagonist in the middle and next issue is about to get fucked! ! ! ! ! ! (The male protagonist in my heart is dead. The author's wife should give Gu Shi'an back ༼;´༎ຶ ༎ຶ༽!!!!! (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)) Later (Chapter 48) Seeing now, holy shit! My eyes, my heart, my brain, my memory don't want it anymore. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo XX

The writing is delicate, and the youth written in the early stage is very beautiful. The innocent feelings of youth are really very yearning. What do I want to say about youth? Youth is a boy running under the sunset, the hair blown by the breeze, the fight under the street lamp, and the pure feelings between us... Youth is really beautiful!

Author, would you please come back quickly? Please, although I have only watched the first world (I am so tortured that I dare not continue reading), but I really think your writing style is very delicate. I will light up five stars for you [love]

The writing is very good. The first world is very interesting. I have read a lot of novels with happy endings, and then this world left a deep impression on people. Although I was really annoyed by the male protagonist, I hope you don't lose confidence. If you write about fast travel in the future, you can speed up the pace appropriately and add a little more excitement. Nowadays, readers like to read refreshing articles. Maybe it doesn't go as expected in the future, so a lot of people in the comment area are scolding me. Don't be discouraged and keep working hard.

The writing is very good, both in terms of plot and writing style, the steady flow of life, and the grasp of people's hearts. For example, a book friend commented that this book should not appear in Tomato, it should appear in a magazine, or in a bookstore on the street. The reason I can't stand it is probably because I can't accept the style. There is no slightest bit of nonsense. It completely shows everyone another world. Everyone is a player in the game and is living their own life. Come on, author, the readers here do not represent all readers. This is the world of tomato articles. Maybe in a different environment, the evaluation will be very different [Like]

I thought at least the first world was over, but! Oh my God! [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying] Come on, please do more! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

When I was watching it, I thought it was over. I was still thinking about what the world below was like. I was still thinking about how well written it was, but one world was too long, and would it be too long after that? As a result, a shitty yellow button appeared in front of me! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh crying (´;;`)

It's a good book, the author's writing is very good, I loved the first world so much, I don't care, Lin Chu before Xia Nuan appeared and Lin Chu after she appeared are not the same person in my heart! Absolutely not!

It's very interesting. The first story gave me a sense of ordinary comfort in life. It didn't deliberately describe the plot of a heroine because of the heroine. It wrote a lot of contradictions and helplessness in life. It has a strong impact. Keep up the good work (=^▽^=)

The first story is really beautiful. At first I thought it was a sweet ending, but later I changed my mind and thought it was be. Unexpectedly, the third perspective in the article introduced us to a traffic ending. I actually still believed that the author would write it as be. The story in "Childhood Sweethearts Can't Stand Up to the Skyfall" is very, very well written. The female protagonist's inner drama, the male protagonist's inner confrontation, and the supporting characters are all perfectly grasped.

It's good to read. I really like the heroine's independent and self-reliant attitude towards life. The writing is also good. I'm a bookworm who loves it. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the second world. I would like it not to be unfinished at the end. After all, the first world is very interesting but ended too hastily. It would be nice if there was a side story at the end [Blowing Kiss]

I watched The Second World and skipped the first one because I didn't like the setting. But the writing of the second world is really good5555 The writing is also very good