Star Iron: Our Salvation

The plot is okay, but the level of your commander is a bit too low. It would be better to write it as a strong memoryr after all.

Really exciting plot

It's not that the character is broken, it's too outrageous. The feeling that Jingliu gives me is that she is cold but warm, but she is not good at words, talks little, and is handsome. She is just a proud and beautiful woman, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. But when you put it this way, it gives me the feeling that the heroine is like the little girl next door, curious and gentle. , Kindness, it's because the character completely collapsed. He said he collapsed too completely. I thought the character would collapse. After all, as an author, you can't ask for the character to be exactly the same as the character in the plot, but I didn't expect the collapse to be so complete. I don't require your character to be similar to the plot, but at least you have five images.

Uh... It's outrageous that the character design of Kage-ryu is broken, but the author is not easy either. I'll give it five stars.

Good looking or average

Very well written!

Well, not bad, a bit fast, but acceptable

Good luck, not bad

Can have a good rhythm

It's okay, but the main character's combat power is still too low.