Death Doctor Eternity

The plot starts to be slow, like the one who is also the city lord, and in the middle and late stages it becomes very slow and annoying. I feel like we can add a main plot or something similar to barrage, because there are a lot of knives and complaints. If we add barrage, the impression will definitely be improved. It can be a barrage where the protagonist travels to the previous world, because there are many topics in this way, similar to the barrage of "First Player". It's best to give the protagonist a little help so that he has the idea to keep it. In addition, adding barrage will definitely increase the word count, which can be regarded as saving Uncle Nanyao's worries. In addition, you can recommend it among old books. There is nothing embarrassing. Some people will not pay much attention to the author, but will pay attention to the work. If I were not a book famine, I would not have discovered this new book. When I discovered it, it had more than 200 chapters. When writing about world games, if you don't know what subject to write about, it's very simple. You can use books you've written before as material. I believe many old fans will recognize and agree with it. You can even write some linkages, such as some legends are the protagonists of old books, so that you can please... No, satisfy old readers without affecting new readers, and also attract new readers to read the previous books. Also, I miss my boss (more than one)

Although it's still the same old routine, I still gave it five stars. Uncle Nan Yao, can't you be a little innovative? If your book writing routine never changes or innovates, your writing skills will never improve.

They are all perfect. The only shortcoming is probably that it is too slow and not enough to watch. Uncle Yao [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying]

Very good book The author is really awesome. The book was released on September 26th and now has more than 200 chapters. The donkeys in the production team have to call out "Senior" when they see it.

Uncle, I beg you to finish it. You can buy it as a gift. I already felt it from the first White Bird chapter. This book can surpass Agui. Uncle @uncle

It's still good, but it's too arrogant, and too far-fetched. The whole world answered him, and the rest is nothing, just adding a little bit of knife occasionally [smile][smile][smile][smile] It's a pity that Uncle Yao's books are so short every time. What a pity[cry][cry]

Very exciting, very beautiful. It fits my point of view on otherworldly literature. However, these recent chapters feel a bit draggy to me, and many paragraphs could be described in one sentence. In addition, this book downplays the description of level realm, or even does not have it, which is great. The characters in it are not said to be ridiculously strong, and the story's acting style focuses on one intelligence.

Bai Yi is not a killer, has no boss, and has no sister. ? I have a sister

The theme of "Missionary" is very novel

I don't know much about the professional knowledge of so many books, but I saw that I didn't want Luya to cry and reduced the use of abilities, I saw that friendship was extremely cherished because of the loss of a close relative, and I saw another priest Miriam. Character arcs, childhood encounters and their impact. I like this book

Soon the waves will end

It was very fast. After reading it for a long time, my evaluation is Zhen Ji's father is short [laughing]

Read with confidence without any knife.

It looks good and performs stably. I have read all the author's books and I don't understand why the rating is so low.

Too sweet, too sweet

Uncle Nan Yaoshu's books are still as good-looking as ever. Apart from the naming fee, which costs hundreds of millions of dollars, the plots are almost the same, the protagonists have similar personalities, and they are all good except for being short and weak.

Why can't I see this book on the author's homepage? The rest of the plot is okay, with a bit of a Japanese atmosphere, but it is obviously not as thoughtful as Sea of Corpses. The intellect at the beginning is a bit outrageous. The part about asking about the secret passage is really embarrassing, and the women's clothing is also. Although it slowly picks up later, I guess few people can stick to it. It's really no good. There is no chance of turning around. I am also a fan of the author and got through the beginning. If it were an ordinary novel, I would have given up on it at the beginning.

I have read every one of Uncle Yao's books, and they really suit my taste.

The content is still good

I'd love to see more knives. 🌚

Where is Uncle Yao's fan base? Can any of the bosses come and take me with them [smile][smile]

I came to this book late. After reading Battle Royale, I thought Uncle Yao had stopped writing it, until I saw last week that I secretly updated it. I still like this kind of adventurous story told by a shemale uncle, which I like very much.

Uncle Yao, come on! It's really beautiful!

First give me a five-star support, it's very nice.

Good looking, love watching, awesome

It's pretty cool, support it!

Very good-looking, very good-looking, really

Support (don't know what to say)

I still like Uncle Yao's books

It's good to read. I've read six of Uncle Nan Yao's books and they were all very good.