Cardcaptor Sakura's Love and Future

I haven't finished the update yet, so let's talk about my feelings after watching it now. It's pretty average, a little above average in my opinion. Let me first talk about what I personally think is not good. 1. Dialogue. You don't have to say your full name during the conversation, right? You can give him a short name. You can also add some expressions or some actions before speaking. For example like this Sakura just woke up and slowly walked down the stairs holding on to the handrail. The male protagonist heard the sound and turned to look at the stairs. After realizing it was Sakura, she said with a gentle smile, "Come down quickly and eat." 2. The male protagonist can have more roles, I feel. Similar novels often add some of their own original characters. The original author comes to read the same novel, mainly to see what will happen to the original plot when the new characters appear? For an important original character, you must portray something about him. 3. Update from time to time. (This may not be because of the novel, but because the author may have some things to deal with or some work to do) Take your time, come on, come on!

Big cheers for the author! ! !

Very good. This is so good. It's good to keep writing and don't give up. Come on, it's not easy to start a book. Keep writing it to the end. It's good. It's really good.