The Beginning of the Rebirth of the Apocalypse: the Floating City

Those who like breast cancer can watch it, those who like to endure it can watch it, and those who like to make trouble for themselves can watch it. All kinds of top passers-by will surround you, everyone is welcome to watch [shy]

Does the author have a male protagonist? I hope not. Let's talk about it then. And when the anchor tells stories. For example. Narrator. And dialogue. Sort of. A little bit when connecting. If the narration is about to end. Talking about connection. Feel the narration and dialogue. Every time I connect, something doesn't match up. That means it's too fast. It feels like the narrator is coming before the dialogue is even finished.

Shamelessly give yourself a five-star review. It's not easy to code. Please criticize me gently. Please, please

The writing is okay, and the cheat settings are okay. There are very few basic errors. Suitable for people with less experience to read. Disadvantages: The heroine's experience before rebirth should have various impacts on her post-rebirth, but it is obvious that the author did not consider this aspect properly.

Emm said this. I was really excited when I first read it. The writing of Goldfinger is also quite good. It can be said to be very good in the end of the world. But after that, I have a slight desire not to read it. Mainly because of Yao Bao. To put it this way, I am really a bit ungrateful. She was betrayed. Her parents treated her like this despite the difficult circumstances in the last days. She was still thinking about wanting to live a comfortable life while also wanting the favor of her family. Although Yao Bao was still young and didn't understand much, if Yao Bao's family were good people or other heroines, how could they not let your family be with you? At the beginning, I also thought that Yao Bao would not be like that, because sometimes parents and children may be different. At the beginning, I also thought that Yao Bao's mother really loved her, but in the end, everything was in vain in the face of interests. People will change in many cases. Generally speaking, it is good. It would be better if the heroine is more ruthless and decisive, and the main thing is not to be too holy. But in terms of the country, I still feel that the writing is very good. The author will keep up the good work [Sending Hearts]

The author is so beautiful [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration] I hope the heroine is beautiful alone! ! !

Writing is not easy, so give me five stars and keep working hard. The subject matter is great. I really like Goldfinger and Suspended City. I watched half of it and really wanted to know the next development. However, the heroine's behavior sometimes made people anxious and wanted to curse [it turns out that rebirth does not increase IQ]. The heroine has the heart of a holy mother, but not much. The girl is also an unexpected little white-eyed wolf. If you continue to watch it, you will really get mastitis [face covering] (angry)

Super nice [Learned it] Great cheers to the author [Like] [Send heartfelt wishes] [Please update]

I have read so many novels, and the heroine's Golden Finger in this novel is my favorite. The random door, and the floating island are also equipped with protective covers. If you don't commit suicide, you will not die. You can eat and wait for death on it, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering] I listened until the end [Like][Like][Like] I like it very much, great!

Well, not bad, but I didn't see enough

It's still spacious, not bad.

It's great, but the ending felt too rushed.

It's okay, it looked pretty cool from the front

Overall, it's okay. It's a cool story about a heroine in the apocalypse. There's no CP. Sisters who want to read it can go check it out.