Rebirth**********

Your writing style is actually quite good, but if you want more people to see your work, you have to be like a big believer. You are writing online articles, so you have to have fun. I suggest that you don't start so blandly. In addition, the main character's mother goes back to see his father-in-law, and provides a reason for not seeing him! I watched it again, haha ​​it's pretty good