Genshin Impact: Joining an Immortal Sect and Growing Up Alongside Shenhe

This plot is good, please update more. Do you know the author? You have been exposed, and there will be a steady stream of people coming to see it. Rare books should be kept privately first.

The writing is very good, and the characters in the plot are not just copied. The author has his own content and ideas. So far, the emotional drama between the protagonist and Shen He is very good. There is no sword. It is a very good book. Of course the author is a bit short (have you ever thought about your future sister-in-law's opinion?) Of course there are still some flaws. Please send me the saved manuscript and I will take a look at it for you.

Ah, it's really good, although the subject matter has been poorly written, the writing is not particularly brilliant, and the plot is not novel. But I love watching it, so I decided to give it five stars.

It looks good, the plot description is very natural, and there is no sudden feeling, especially the emotional line. However, the shortcoming is that some timelines are a bit messy, but now (because it has not been done a few times) it is innocuous. Depending on the situation, if the protagonist's character has not changed too much later, there should be no problem if it slowly rises in Tomato. In addition, it is not interesting enough. I hope the author will continue to work [Thoughts]

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

First of all, the protagonist's emotional line is very good. I don't see any major flaws for the time being. I hope to keep it. The interaction with the characters is relatively faithful to the original work. I fully agree with the lack of OOC. The text is more comfortable to read. The protagonist's enjoyment is not brainless. However, there are a few outstanding problems. The first is the protagonist's personality. It's not outstanding enough. When I read it, I didn't find anything that clearly impressed me. The characterization needs to be improved. Furthermore, the daily thinking is correct, but the daily life is not attractive enough. The current plot advancement is completely dominated by the author, and there is no sense of life, as if something is pulling the character in front. Finally, I haven't seen a fan with my own understanding like this for a long time. It can be said that the author has ideas and things, but not much, so I give it 4 stars and hope you can keep up! I see that many friends are struggling with the settings. Genshin Impact is a long-term game. Generally speaking, the settings cannot be 100% consistent (even mhy himself has read the book countless times). In my opinion, there is no need to struggle with this issue in daily life. It is more about the description of atmosphere, emotion or personality. It is probably logically correct (but the plot logic of Ningguang does have a lot of loopholes)

Saw Chapter 44. It feels OK. It's better than those that require losing your head and are still incoherent.

So far it seems to be okay, much better than most of the original gods, at least there are not some brainless and meaningless plots, and the characters have not collapsed, although the routines are quite common.

It looks good. Genshin Impact players can watch it with their real names.

It's very good-looking, one of the best Genshin Impact fanfics, and the characters are very realistic. It's worth a read. I rarely take the time to review a book and give it five stars. I mainly want to support the author and do my best. I stayed up late to read the latest chapter. The only shortcoming is that it is too short, and I hope that people who like this book can support the author more and give me motivation to write down the homework. I don't want to see such a good novel discontinued. Finally, cheers to the author!