Genshin: Become an Immortal and Grow up with Shen He

This plot is good, please update more. Do you know the author? You have been exposed, and there will be a steady stream of people coming to see it. Rare books should be kept privately first.

The writing is very good, and the characters in the plot are not just copied. The author has his own content and ideas. So far, the emotional drama between the protagonist and Shen He is very good. There is no sword. It is a very good book. Of course the author is a bit short (have you ever thought about your future sister-in-law's opinion?) Of course there are still some flaws. Please send me the saved manuscript and I will take a look at it for you.

Ah, it's really good, although the subject matter has been poorly written, the writing is not particularly brilliant, and the plot is not novel. But I love watching it, so I decided to give it five stars.

It looks good, the plot description is very natural, and there is no sudden feeling, especially the emotional line. However, the shortcoming is that some timelines are a bit messy, but now (because it has not been done a few times) it is innocuous. Depending on the situation, if the protagonist's character has not changed too much later, there should be no problem if it slowly rises in Tomato. In addition, it is not interesting enough. I hope the author will continue to work [Thoughts]

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

First of all, the protagonist's emotional line is very good. I don't see any major flaws for the time being. I hope to keep it. The interaction with the characters is relatively faithful to the original work. I fully agree with the lack of OOC. The text is more comfortable to read. The protagonist's enjoyment is not brainless. However, there are a few outstanding problems. The first is the protagonist's personality. It's not outstanding enough. When I read it, I didn't find anything that clearly impressed me. The characterization needs to be improved. Furthermore, the daily thinking is correct, but the daily life is not attractive enough. The current plot advancement is completely dominated by the author, and there is no sense of life, as if something is pulling the character in front. Finally, I haven't seen a fan with my own understanding like this for a long time. It can be said that the author has ideas and things, but not much, so I give it 4 stars and hope you can keep up! I see that many friends are struggling with the settings. Genshin Impact is a long-term game. Generally speaking, the settings cannot be 100% consistent (even mhy himself has read the book countless times). In my opinion, there is no need to struggle with this issue in daily life. It is more about the description of atmosphere, emotion or personality. It is probably logically correct (but the plot logic of Ningguang does have a lot of loopholes)

It looks good. Genshin Impact players can watch it with their real names.

So far it seems to be okay, much better than most of the original gods, at least there are not some brainless and meaningless plots, and the characters have not collapsed, although the routines are quite common.

Saw Chapter 44. It feels OK. It's better than those that require losing your head and are still incoherent.

It's very good-looking, one of the best Genshin Impact fanfics, and the characters are very realistic. It's worth a read. I rarely take the time to review a book and give it five stars. I mainly want to support the author and do my best. I stayed up late to read the latest chapter. The only shortcoming is that it is too short, and I hope that people who like this book can support the author more and give me motivation to write down the homework. I don't want to see such a good novel discontinued. Finally, cheers to the author!

It's very interesting! Keep writing, I already have a recommendation spot, come on!

The writing is very nice, but the pace is too slow and sometimes too dramatic. The system feels like it might as well become some kind of talent and grow together.

The plot content and character creation are both good and well worth watching.

It's good to read. Come on, the author. The low rating is because few people read it. It's not that there's anything wrong with the author's writing. It's a very dull book at the moment. It focuses on daily life. It's highly recommended by friends who like daily life and Shen He.

The protagonist's personality has not collapsed, the character's personality has not collapsed, and there are relatively few poisonous points. The emotional line does not seem to be abrupt in the early stage, but it is quite satisfactory. The part where the Son of God comes to Liyue to pretend to be the protagonist's sister is a bit shocking. The rest can be said to be very good.

The plot is very good [Send Heart] It does not belong to the kind of too fast upgrade flow, but what is good is that the author did not overwrite the style of the Genshin Impact characters [Love] At present, it does not look like those grass-roots articles, five-star praise [Blowing Kiss]

The writing is pretty good. This book is the best one I have ever read among Genshin Impact fans. The pace is slow but just right. For me, it would be boring to read two pages if the protagonist is invincible at the beginning. This is one of the reasons why I like this book. Come on.

This book is a novel based on the game "Genshin Impact". The story centers on the protagonist of the game and describes his interactions and adventures with a variety of different characters. Through rich plots and delicate descriptions, the charm and depth of the game world are demonstrated. This novel tells the story of the protagonist's communication and cooperation with various characters in the game in a humorous way, as well as their joint efforts to meet challenges. This book is a good reading experience for readers who like the "Genshin Impact" game and are interested in the background story of the game. Point of View: This book shows the diversity and wonder of the game world from the perspective of game characters. Through the interaction between the protagonist and various characters, readers can have a deeper understanding of each character's backstory and personality traits. Plot: The storyline is compact and interesting, full of adventures and challenges. The protagonist meets various characters in the game world, completes many tasks and adventures with them, and also experiences many unexpected storylines and twists. Characterization: The main characters in the book all have unique personalities and characteristics. The protagonist is brave, witty, and good at cooperating with others; the other characters also have their own characteristics, some are kind and upright, and some are cunning and smart. Their characters and development trajectories are intertwined with the storyline and promote the development of the entire story. Target readers: This book is suitable for players who like the game "Genshin Impact", especially those who are interested in the background story of the game. At the same time, it will also have a certain appeal to readers who like adventure and humorous stories. Personal opinion: I think this book blends the game world and storyline well, giving readers an enjoyable reading experience. Through the interaction between the protagonist and various characters, readers can gain a deeper understanding of the details and backstory of the game world. At the same time, the storyline is interesting and engaging. I believe that readers who like the game "Genshin Impact" will have a strong interest in this book.

It looks great. The most important thing is that there are no too new characters, so it is very friendly to me, an old player who has quit the game for more than two years. But the disadvantage is that it is too short and ends too early, leaving some holes unfilled, and some holes are actually dispensable in my opinion. Compared with other fan fiction with grand scenes, this book is basically about daily life, and the few battle scenes are basically crushing. However, the author has good control over the characters, and there is no OOC plot. Overall, it's a good Genshin Impact fanfic, and I hope the author will keep up the good work.

Short, too short, not enough to look at! Great author, come on!

The writing is very good, and the daily routine is very warm, but the pace is a bit slow.

The development and promotion of the storyline are so natural, the fights and emotional development are not so abrupt, and some small episodes in life make people feel that this book is full of human fireworks, giving readers a strong sense of involvement. It is a quite good book It's a pity that I finished reading it in two hours. The author is really short and weak.

It's good to read. The Genshin Impact I've read before was basically all about the plot, but this one fits the bill perfectly. Although I like Keli, Diona, Qiqi, Yaoyao, Nasida, Paimon, Zaoyou, etc., But these are not important. What's important is that this book is really good, so can you update it more quickly? It won't be more than ten chapters a day. I'm not greedy either.

The personalities of each character have not changed. This is respect for the plot of the original game. This alone exceeds 90% of Genshin Impact fan fiction. The plot is not nonsensical, and it is very smooth to watch with your head! Worth recommending! ! !

It's really well written, but unfortunately it's a bit short, which worries my sister-in-law. There aren't many battle scenes, it's mainly about daily life, and there's also my side story. I promised to write a side story, but why didn't I see it? Keep up the good work, author, I hope it will be longer next time [laughing]

A very nice book, I recommend everyone to read it. Forget it if you like cool writing

One word is: great! Two words: awesome!! Three words: Awesome!!! Four words: It's awesome!!!! Five words: It's awesome!!!!! Six words: It's really great!!!! Seven words: It's really great!!!!!!! The eight words are: This is indeed great!!!!!!!! Nine words: This is indeed awesome!!!!!!!!! The ten words are: This is indeed great!!!!!!!!!! I also finished reading it, but the ending was a bit rushed. I still want to see their married life, and I don't know where the author is.

It must be good-looking. This book describes the process of Shen He's character being slowly transformed by the protagonist when he was a child. And since it is a fanfic, there will definitely be some peeing. However, I haven't seen many peeing in this book so far. It is also very good.

It's a very good Genshin Impact novel. Unlike Shuangwen, it tends to be fresh and daily. After the traveler came, I didn't know what the style was. I know that people who only read Shuangwen will also like to read this kind of novel!

I feel that it is quite good now. The character creation is reasonable and fits the plot. The plot setting is also very novel. However, the main line of the game should not be left behind. The accumulation of the previous protagonists must be reasonably controlled. Overall, it is quite exciting. Keep writing and keep working hard.