Canaan walked on the streets of Marinevando, enjoying the warm sea breeze blowing by him.
I still remember that a few days ago, when Canaan opened his eyes, he suddenly found himself in this familiar yet unfamiliar world.
"Ding! Welcome the host to the world of One Piece! Current timeline: after the war on top!"
Reader comments
Really, I'm only five or six chapters into it, and the early stages of the novel are pretty good. The first few pictures are okay, but the last few pictures, I feel like it insults my own personal intelligence when I look at them again. What are you writing about? Oops, I was too fast, and I didn't have any sense of rhythm behind me. No wonder no one commented.
Even if you are chased by the navy every day, don't you use your domineering power to clear out the soldiers?
Really, I'm only five or six chapters into it, and the early stages of the novel are pretty good. The first few pictures are okay, but the last few pictures, I feel like it insults my own personal intelligence when I look at them again. What are you writing about? Oops, I was too fast, and I didn't have any sense of rhythm behind me. No wonder no one commented.
Even if you are chased by the navy every day, don't you use your domineering power to clear out the soldiers?