Pirates: the Mechanic of the Straw Hats

It is a good book among pirate fans. It is not like other books that are prophetic and lack the sense of surprise. What we read in the book and pictures are surprises (definitely not scares). This book very well describes the process of a person going from confusion to determination in the world of pirates. It is not abrupt or procrastinating. The only shortcoming is that it is updated. You should be more...

This book really made me see a different Luffy from other fanfictions. Many of the things the author said in the sentence are worth pondering. One thing to say is that basically other stories are either cool stories or mindless stories. There are very few like this in One Piece.

Thank you, the author. Whether it is the sword showdown between Zoro and Hawkeye Mihawk or the collision between Luffy and Carl's faith in Cocosia Village, it is like a scene of words, which catches my eyes and is engraved in my mind. After reading this novel, I understand how Wang Wei has poetry in his paintings and paintings in his poems. You are like the Knights of Pure Beauty, explaining to me the beauty of will. I offer you high respect for these scenes. Thank you, these scenes make me full of determination. D(ŐдŐ๑) All the above ideas are generated by my personal thoughts, and I have absolutely no money from the author⊙ω⊙

OK OK It's nice to follow the boat flow The touching parts of the original work are also preserved. It's very cute.

The three views are very upright, and the protagonist does not appear to be taking over the spotlight at the moment. The characters of the protagonist group are very consistent with the original work. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up

The price for Usopp taking more than 90 chapters to get on the ship is that Usopp is the best portrayed in all One Piece fans. It is no exaggeration to say that the scene where Usopp gets on the ship is several levels better than the original work, which made me feel that I had read the previous 90 chapters in vain.

The author's writing style is really good, and the daily life of the Straw Hat Pirates is really funny and heartwarming [shy] But as an old man, I have to say that the background and characters are really OOC [face covering] But it's a pity, this time I stand with white beard [Thinking]

This fanfic is very well written. It is the only one in which the protagonist can truly integrate into the world view of One Piece. He seems to be flesh and blood, has his own emotions, and has his own three views. The most important thing is that he will not be influenced by the plot. He completely regards the protagonist group of One Piece as his companions, rather than the high-level NPCs in the plot who use the original plot to influence them. Then some of the original plots are also written quite reasonably, especially if Luffy's identity is exposed in the early stages of the voyage, there will indeed be a lot of big backstage, and there will also be such a friendly relationship with the three generals. I highly recommend this fanfic, and I hope the author will write better and better.

This book is also very well written, and the starting point is higher than other Pirates fics. Although it is a follow-up drama, it is not like other follow-up stories that basically copy the plot of the original work. There are many changes due to the addition of the protagonist, which is quite rare. I am tired of watching those copies of the original work. The plots are very different. I hope this book will be popular, and I hope the author will not be a eunuch

I just read the first ten chapters. It's the most enjoyable Pirates fanfic I've ever read. I can't help but give it a five-star review. I've read more than 2,000 hours on Tomato. There are less than 10 books with this kind of impulse.

Apart from anything else, the Usopp scene is really the best among the many One Piece fics I have seen.

This is the best pirate fic I've ever seen. There is no invincible time traveler, but the funny and heartwarming daily life of the Straw Hat Pirates is written. Everyone has their own role, and the combat effectiveness is also improved in a balanced and unobtrusive way, which is better than the original comics.

It's a really good book to read. Order is the path the protagonist takes. Order is also the protagonist and will be achieved in the future. The protagonist is Chaos Good, who has a will of his own. Efforts will also be made. He understands the evil and good in the Navy. So he will side with the pirates. There are some things the Navy can't do. Only pirates can do it.

I personally think it's a good book about ships. One of the comforting points is that through persuasion, Luffy's dream was changed to becoming the Pirate King and ending the great pirate era. It's very funny in daily life and very passionate during the fights.

First of all, I got extra points for not having a female protagonist. Secondly, the style of painting is in line with the pirate world, and the writing is smooth and not weird, but it is relatively short. The protagonist's fruit ability is a bit thematic in its early use, but it's okay. The author said that when the fruit awakens in the middle and later stages, it is the time when the power of the fruit of the title of the book is truly unleashed. Now that I have seen the plot of Bucky, the protagonist's fighting ability is no longer weak. His strength has increased so much that he can keep up with the main team and will not be held back.

It's worth watching. I found that many people were criticizing the protagonist for this and that. In fact, they didn't look carefully. The protagonist has never watched One Piece and only knows a little bit about it. I didn't read much, only the early part. If the passionate plot of this book was well written, it would be a real loss.

It is considered a good one among Pirates fics. Although the plot is mostly based on the original work, there are also second-generation plots, and they are quite interesting. It feels like watching One Piece for the first time. It is still being serialized. I don't know what the follow-up plot will be. I hope there will be more plots with different characters. For example, will Ace or Sabo have a role in the future? Also, I don't know how to write the plot against the Five Old Stars. Although some settings are a bit fantasy, they are not too invincible and feel acceptable.

I have personally read this book four times, and it is very interesting no matter how you read it. Although it is a follow-up book, it also has its own exclusive plot. The protagonist, as a person who has never watched One Piece and has no system and no knowledge of the follow-up plot and plug-ins, is still able to lead the Straw Hat Pirates to the top. In this book, the original protagonist was originally However, most of the plot has been changed. The book is about a group that is a fusion of pirates and navy, and it also tells about China's red revolutionary ideas, which most pirate fans don't have. Anyway, I personally can't say how to praise this book. In short, it is very honorable, and it is also stably updated. It will not stop updating suddenly, and you can follow it.

After reading Chapter 1578, I have some thoughts. The characters are restored very well, especially when invited on board the ship at the beginning. The protagonist only knows the work One Piece and has never seen One Piece. This is very good. There is no selfish intention to get close to anyone because of knowing the plot. I am simply attracted by Luffy's personality charm. I was quite moved after watching it. The three views of the protagonist are good. The character concept of growing up under the red flag also allowed Luffy to learn a lot. It did not change his purity, but only made him better. The subsequent plot of each partner boarding the ship is also very well written, and it can be considered flesh and blood. This is an advantage. In the early stage, the protagonist acts as a missionary and spreads faith through various deceptions, which is quite interesting. The fruit development mentioned in the introduction is really good as written before. Various development and use. The peak period is when fighting Lao Sha. It is recommended to check it out. Each member has his or her own highlight. Just like fighting the BOSS in a team battle, Lao Sha has also been strengthened. After all, it is a desert. It cannot be as simple as the original. The domineering desert bonus strengthening patches that should be given are all there. After Impel Down, the protagonist's roles became less and less, and he felt like a marginalized passerby. Occasionally, he would play some black technology with Franky Usopp, or tell what the protagonist would do if he did it. He also wrote a lot about other people, especially Zoro. Well, the story was quite good, and it fits the appearance of a swordsman. Daily life is not bad, but writing about being beaten around by Nami every day was interesting at first, but it will get boring later. The subsequent battles are all other members, and the protagonist does not have many roles. Normally, there is no missionary. There is no fruit development, no domineering training, and no training. Although the protagonist is mentioned and the Straw Hats keep a low profile, after all, there is a lack of feeling. It is understandable. The strength is not enough. The plot is not known. There is no cost of trial and error. You must be responsible for everyone, but please also let me see you doing real things, or in other words, full firepower. It has been so long and everyone is working hard. Don't tell me that you have been slacking off. It is best to hide something.

The author's ideas are quite good, and the inner drama is quite rich. Why he did this and the purpose of doing it are all reasonable and reasonable. The protagonist's personality is also quite good, and the daily interactions with each other are also very interesting. I just felt that some small areas were not handled well, such as Zoro getting on the ship. In the original book, on the one hand, it was because of Luffy's recognition, and on the other hand, it was because of being persecuted by the navy. If he didn't resist, the navy would not only not let him go, but also wanted to kill him, so he had no choice but to board Luffy's ship. Otherwise, even if he approves of Luffy and thinks Luffy is a good person, he can definitely become friends with Luffy after being released by the navy, and he does not necessarily have to become a pirate. If he hadn't been desperate, who would have fallen into a trap? Maybe the author handled it better. He felt that Sauron had been wandering for half his life and was ridiculed by others. Suddenly he met a close friend who believed in him and supported him. He felt that he would definitely become the world's greatest swordsman, so he bowed to him. It's also true.

It's a pretty good pirate novel, with some of the author's own ideas added into it. Each character is well created, and it also fills up some regrets. Together with this book and The Swordsman of the Holy Light, it's one of the few good pirate novels I've read in the past few years. Unfortunately, the Swordsman of the Holy Light was written too early, and many of the settings were backstabbed by Oda. Why is the rating so low [what]

This book is very interesting. It breaks away from the invincibility genre and mainly describes the protagonist's revolutionary cause in One Piece. But this is not the main reason why I gave it five stars. The settings inside are what attracted me. The Devil Fruit settings in other Pirates fandoms are not as good as this. Some are Devil Fruit trees, and all Devil Fruits are on trees; some are Devil Fruits that are the manifestation of the laws of the Pirate World, and every Devil Fruit can come into contact with the laws when you go deep; some are Devil Fruits where a devil lives, and you must defeat the devil inside if you want to awaken; others are simply Devil Fruits, and there is nothing else to say about them. . . . I have read it a lot from other Pirates fans, but this one feels fresh to me. It is another way of saying it, and I think this statement is better than others. At least the explanation of the rubber fruit turning into a Nika fruit is better than other Nika fruits disguised as rubber fruits. The Devil Fruit in this book is like a journey of belief in becoming a god, and the Devil Fruit ability user is that god, but it has side effects.

It's good-looking and eye-catching. Compared to other pirate novels, it's quite good. The development of the protagonist's fruit itself is also a highlight, and the relationship with the Straw Hats is a relatively good aspect. In contrast, the typos at the beginning and the wrong sentences have not been corrected yet. This is a shortcoming. The first 30 chapters at the beginning are a bit rough. Afterwards, the progress of improving the writing ratio is slower. But compared with the original work, which focuses on battles, the details in life are the key. Compared with the brainless black and white, it should be a lifetime. It is an unsystematic novel in itself. Compared with refreshing novels, it is more in line with my taste. Watching the growth of the protagonist and the Straw Hats is not an achievement of watching children grow up? This comment itself is my personal opinion. There is no need to force your opinions into reading the book, otherwise the book will be boring to you. The word count is too few, please add more. I'm hungry [please update] Why does it always show that there is something wrong with playing this platform for less than 30 minutes?

Really really really super super super beautiful! ! ! I have just seen the Rogge Town, and I am so excited to see who lives in the revolution. This is no better than the kind of harem novel about romance, and the cool novel about cheating at every turn! ! !，，20，！ ! ! This type of writing is really rare! ! ! Author, please, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely must write it to the end! ! ! !

The writing is very smooth, and many details have been changed but they are all very real. It is not abrupt in reading, but it is very heart-wrenching to watch in the middle of the war [crying]. Will Ace cheer up and go to sea again? I hope my second uncle can get on the ship. I have read about 1,600 chapters so far (the only pirate fanfic that I have read from the beginning to the latest update). I really like this novel. It is not a mindless novel, there is no system, no cp, no ambiguity, it is all a firm friendship. I don't know the plot in advance. As a deputy captain, he is very smart and has an IQ (really smart, not invincible, and his team fighting ability will not exceed the standard when following the protagonist). He always considers the team. (The improvement in combat power in the early stage is more reasonable), a lot of arrangements have been made for Luffy to become the Pirate King (without stealing the spotlight of the protagonist group), and he has connections with the Navy and the Revolutionary Army. Some character plots have been adjusted for the second time, and these adjustments will not make you feel abrupt, they are all reasonable. The adjustment of Momonosuke's plot is very unexpected [face covering] I can only say that the author did a great job, I love the second uncle and the third uncle very much, I hope the author will make more

The author's writing is very good. It is not just about following the ship, but the author's understanding of the world view of the pirates. The plot development is reasonable. This book feels like it has sublimated the world view of the pirates. Behind the adventures of Luffy and the others, it is no longer just the feeling of watching animation, but there are more personality charm and expansion of thinking that cannot be described in animation. It is better than most brainless following ships. I read more than 4 million words in 5 days. I look forward to subsequent updates.

It seems that there are more than 1,000 chapters and I can't help but leave a comment. Among the many One Piece fanfics I have read over the years, it is undoubtedly a masterpiece. There are few better than this one. It is not a routine novel. It writes an adventure story like the original one with friendship and free rescue without losing the protagonist's drama and planning. Except that sometimes there are very few places that to me are OOC and do not match the strength and ability settings of the original work. This may be due to the length of the book. But the plot, writing, and logic are like silky latte coffee, soft and fragrant. The battle chapters can keep people immersed in it, and the daily chapters can make people laugh. And compared to other aspects, the author is particularly good at writing about daily life. Overall, it's well worth reading, and the author also wants to support it.

It's a rare growth time traveler for an ordinary person who doesn't know the plot. The early stage is very shocking, and the daily writing is very good. The protagonist really loves Luffy. The sand sculpture style interaction between the crew and various highlight moments really have the feeling of the past One Piece. It is not a stereotyped ship, but the shortcomings of the mechanical fruit development, and then there is a bit of fantasy in the middle. The part where you first meet Robin is a bit strange. I hope to see the protagonist drive a Gundam and put on armor in the future.

Seeing Meet Garp has its own thing and you can watch it, but it's a bit awkward for the main character to say one thing and do another. It's not okay to keep the main plot as it is in the original work. There are variables that should make the plot change more and more as time goes by. Why is it still following the original work more and more? When will there be a major change to the original work? I'll give it a + star

It's very beautiful, and there are many details that really impressed me. It's just that the update is too slow, and the cover of the book feels a bit low. I've read it before, then forgot about it, and can't find it. The cover doesn't look like the writing is good, and I just found this book again recently. [Laughing][laughing][shocked]