Under One Man: the Journey of Tekken

Nice. There are too many dialogues and not many narrations. Sometimes you can't remember whose lines are in your mind, so you need to read it carefully. Furthermore, the protagonist's strength is suppressed, or the enjoyment is not enough, and the enjoyment is always gone halfway. From the time when the protagonist solved several intruders in the village to when he went down the mountain, he killed several little Karami who didn't deserve their names. I didn't kill those who deserved to be killed. One of them said that he would kill me if he could. He said that he had promised others to let him go, and then he would go after him after letting him go. The same goes for the battle with Quan Xing. At the critical moment when he is about to win, the lives of his friends and civilians are threatened. When I see these plots, I am always confused, just like in TV dramas, every time the main man and woman are kissing, there is always a phone call. If it happens a few more times, the readers will probably be angry to death. Let's face it, it looks pretty good so far.

I give myself a five-star rating. If you readers have any questions, you can ask them. I will definitely answer them when I see them.

The setting is good, but since the author is afraid that Cap will be too strong in the early stage and wants to weaken it, it is best to make it clear in the text. Otherwise, the text says that the protagonist has 80% of Garp's peak strength, and then in the comments section, he says that he is afraid that the protagonist is too strong, so he wants to weaken him. Doing this is very unfriendly to readers like me who don't like to leave comments. It will make us think that this is the so-called 80% strength? Isn't this selling dog meat over sheep's heads? And I looked at the comment area, and this is the most complained about point, and I see that the author has also replied, but since he has replied, why not just change the content of the text? Isn't this a one-and-done solution? There is no need to go to the comment area to explain one by one.

Well, in my opinion it is indeed a better book. It's just that the previous plot is a bit hard to accept. Maybe most people are looking for cutting the grass in the later stages. Well, I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, Oli!

It's interesting, really good!

The subject matter is new, the protagonist's character is vividly described, and the plot is relatively weak and not delicate enough. Slowly, it gets better and better. One more thing, please update me quickly [angry] [angry] [angry]

It's pretty good, come on

Author, can you do it? [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]

It's okay. Currently, it's mainly about the storyline of "Rust Iron"

Brothers, you can feel free to eat after finishing it

It's pretty good-looking, a little funny, and a little bit like Karp.

I've wanted to see something like this for a long time

Come on, come on, come on

Chen Duo praises and supports

Yes, yes. I laughed as I listened.

More, more, more! I'll let you have more! ! ! [Anger]

A very good book, very creative

Red and fiery, in a trance

Please give me a five-star support. Apart from being a little bit toxic when I first came out, my writing has been pretty good since then.

It looks so good that I want to drag the author into a dark room and arrest him for coding [punch]

It's really good

Nice but too short

I've long wanted to read the Iron Show chapter

Good book, but it's hard for my sister-in-law

Very well written, cheers to the author＾0＾~!

Rating star rating Not bad. . . . .

Good looking, highly recommended

Looking forward to a perfect ending

Come on, the author is great

Very nice, smells like capuna