One Person: Lightning and Thunder in the Left Hand, Samadhi True Fire in the Right Hand

Are you so picky? I think this book is the most suitable fanfic for me. Except that it's a pity that it doesn't start with the perfect rescue of Sister Baoer when she just came out of the cave, the rest is really good! The disadvantage is that the various spells are relatively weak...

I personally feel very good that the other characters are really not as decisive as the protagonist of this book. I see no problem with the plot, and this is the only one I have read! ! Get Sister Baoer's! ! ! Not one of them! So you guys understand [laughing evilly][top post]

I'll give it four stars first, because the male protagonist is a bit humble and a bit similar to Zhang Chulan, but it's acceptable. The main reason is that there are too few chapters. Five stars feels a bit too much. So far, the writing is pretty good. Let's see the follow-up. If it can be maintained, I will make up for the five stars. The first part is good, but why is it written like this at the end? I mainly read harem stories, so when I come across harem stories, as long as they are not too bad, I basically give them four or five stars. At the beginning, I gave this book "Thoughts" because there were too few chapters to give it five stars, so I gave it four stars. I thought I would add another one later, but I forgot about it and only saw it in the past few days. Later, there will often be a phenomenon of forgetting the heroine and missing the heroine. If you can't write so many heroines, then you can write Bao Bao, Xia He, and Feng Shayan. There is no need to add so many heroines. If you write so many heroines, they will basically appear when you are collecting them, and they will never appear again after collecting them. So what did you include? You are still a passer-by in your life. You don't really think that writing like this is very artistic, do you? I just feel like I am a scumbag at the same time, and there are all kinds of jokes. I am not opposed to making jokes, but there is no need to make jokes just to write an update, right? A lot of jokes are forced onto the top, which is so embarrassing. ——————2024.11.3

The writing is quite good. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far. Good luck to the author [I learned it]

It's a good start, come on, author, keep it up, don't let it slip later, or you will become a guest after a while when you gain strength.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

Personally, I think it's good, it's quite interesting. If you like it, you can check it out. After all, a thousand people have a thousand opinions on whether a novel is good or not.

Update soon. Just these 4 cars. No, it seems to be 5. Can Sister Baoer have more cars? It's really rare

It looks good. The author can keep up the quality and update it twice a day. He can also keep updating the unfinished content. Good luck to the author! ! !

When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was going to be a heroine who couldn't fight against a time-traveling girl, which would be a bit frustrating, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and smart, can afford to take things on, and does not give opportunities to scumbag men. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not too thorough, I will sigh after reading it. 3. The writing is solid, the description is detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature is combined with the experience. It is comfortable, yes, I am short of words and can't describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think it's not a loss to invest in shares.

A front-row reminder: this book is a harem novel, so don't read it if you don't like it. To be honest, the plot arrangement is not very good, and the protagonist's character is not likable, but from a certain perspective, the taste of the work is fresh.

Very pretty. I originally wanted to give you four stars, but because you are crazy again, I gave you five stars. I hope the author will continue to work hard and become a great author. Don't forget me then [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. The author will tell you why hydrology and various issues are related. I like this kind of author. The writing is very good. I like you. [Like] [Like] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

Great author, please update it soon. I personally think this is very nice.

In terms of plot structure, the novel adopts the mainstream online novel model of "system + time travel + growth". The protagonist goes from being ignorant when he first enters the alien world to gradually mastering the secrets of Maoshan, and then summoning the ancestor to reverse the situation when facing a powerful enemy. The rhythm is tight and the excitement is intensive. What is particularly commendable is that the author does not blindly rely on "plug-in" combat, but uses the protagonist's understanding and application of Taoism to show a "win with wisdom" fighting style, which is in line with the core concept of "the end of Taoism is Tao" in the original "Under One Man".

Definitely worth five stars, the writing is great, and the parts that deviate from the original plot are also very reasonable. What has the author experienced? Or has he read too much? Why does he feel like he will become a monk soon after seeing the various forms of time [laughing and crying] There are many places written that are worth poking at the hearts of modern people. I am seriously commenting on this to show respect.

Generally speaking, this book is well written. I felt a lot of pain in it. I haven't read it before. But anyone with a little knowledge can read it smoothly. The text doesn't have any big flaws. Overall, it doesn't feel too teary. It's still good. I can recommend it.

I like your point of entry. Whether the fanfic is good or not depends on how you set the protagonist to enter the story. But the story of one person is too much. If you lack a lot of self-created plots, readers will also find it boring. Sooner or later, it will be a matter of time to enter the small black room. I give you a suggestion. In the follow-up Biyou Village incident, do not include too much content in the original text. If the protagonist wants to survive under the threat of the Wang family, he must have greater aspirations. In the follow-up plot, the ambition of the protagonist can be added, such as Maoshan's support, control of the Ten Guys Club, and entry into the company's senior management. The common people's routine of conquering the tyrants

Overall, it's okay. It integrates a lot of things, but it's not integrated well. It's more or less like a continuation of a dog's tail. No need to go up or down, just watch and pass the time. It doesn't matter if you don't like some of them.

I don't watch it much, but I quite like it. I also saw some of the complaints you wrote about the platform and some people, which made me feel sympathy, so I decided to give you a free little gift every day [laughing and crying]

Come on✊, don't be a mess, don't be a eunuch

In terms of fan fiction, this is the first time that I can write such a long one for him. The idea of ​​​​telling a story by myself is difficult. The character description is quite good. You can drive, but you can't stall horses. You'll get tired of looking at it. In this case

It feels pretty good. The most outstanding thing about my dormitory is that Feng Baobao's language description is very good, and the language description of Sichuan girls is also very good. I was a little curious. The harem story in this book is probably confirmed. After all, um, the protagonist dares to sleep and be irresponsible. Haha, the Hall of Rebirth will bury him sooner or later.

It's great. I love watching it. But the ending is a bit rushed. It's a shame. I kept looking forward to it. It ended suddenly. It's a pity. Why does my Lu Linglong have so many plots? Beibei is the same. Overall, it's pretty good, but I still want to keep watching [eating melon]

It's pretty good, and the multiple heroines are also quite nice.

I like the subject matter, but it's a bit too toxic. In other words, I'm not here to watch the serious plot. I really can't stand it.

The author should update it soon, people are waiting to see [please update]

Not bad, not bad, suitable for inheriting the spirit of Cao Cao [laughing evilly]

Overall, it's very nice to watch, highly recommended.

But it's good, I personally feel good about it. I quite like it. Come on, author