
Under One Person: Exposing Zhang Lingyu and Xia He Playing with Tietie
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I really thought it was a famous scene [eating melon] After watching it, it turns out that most of the videos were made by you yourself [laughing awkwardly] I'm really speechless [stop]
Why do you want to blackmail Jia Zhengliang? , Although it is annoying, changing the facts is even more disgusting and has a bad impact.
Just watch it for fun, change the character, tamper with the facts, (famous scene), save points
How to say it? If you want to expose a famous scene, then expose it, but you can't say you're going to make it up! It's okay to make unwarranted guesses, but don't ruin your character! Good guy, it's obviously 500 a night, Jia Zhengliang, you changed it! I really can't stand it, you're so broken! Everything else is fine, even if you start some conspiracy theories later, it's fine, but don't let that joke fall apart! Good guy! There's nothing wrong with you trying to make a conspiracy, after all, you're a fan! But I came here for your famous exposure scene! In the end, you broke that joke for him.
Write famous scenes, just write famous scenes. Originally, I came here to read the famous scenes. The title of your book is also based on this to attract people. If you like Fengshayan, you will like Fengshayan. Just compete normally. You are the author. Are you afraid that you won't be able to compete with me? At worst, just don't let go of that 500 a night thing. Change the plot: Feng Shayan and Jia Zhengliang have never met in the competition venue, or his mobile phone has not been damaged. Is it that difficult? He is always a simple and honest person, why bother if you just change him to another kind of person. He doesn't have any negative fans. You don't deserve the scolding. You said that his personality has been changed, why don't you just make it clear in the first picture? Just talk about changing the character. Who knows what kind of character you are talking about? It is completely opposite to the original work. Also, you, the protagonist, have to be under the Tianxiahui to participate in the Luotian Dajiao? He lets go of all strangers under the age of 30 in the world. You can do it by yourself. If you get his daughter and then get the Tongtianlu from the Luotian Dajiao, you can use this to propose marriage to Feng Zhenghao and get his daughter to marry you. How could he refuse to add his daughter's happiness to a movie called "Eight Magic Skills"?
There is a very big problem in Chapter 19. You changed what happened and added a new one, but there were witnesses at the end of the whole thing, and the protagonist was too hung up, and the protagonist's strength is obviously different from that in the clip. In a real fight, everything is missed, and others will see problems when they see it. You might as well write the ending as it originally happened, and then the protagonist takes a walk after eating, Jia Zhengyu makes a sneak attack, the protagonist blocks it and finally defeats Jia Zhengyu, then makes up the protagonist's advice to Jia Li, and finally Feng Shayan comes over and highlights the protagonist's attention shift through the camera. This highlights Jia Zhengyu's despicability and also gives others a good impression of the protagonist. Isn't this better than making random changes?
This type of novel is best without a protagonist
If you want to expose something, do it well. If you want to expose something privately, please do so. And you have a hundred years of cultivation and a complete mastery of the Sky Shuttle. Not to mention that you are invincible in the world, and you can be alone. Why are you still a 2B?
I thought about changing the character of Jia Zhengliang. He may not be a bad person, but the pretense is real, and the original arrangement of the scene between him and Feng Shayan was so classic. When the two of them fought, I thought about what would happen next. In the end, the two of them were together. It's nothing classic, but when Jia Zhengliang spoke for Feng Shayan, he actually hit Feng Baobao, which was inexplicable. Just speak for others, why hit others? In the end, I changed a few chapters of Jia Zhengliang, but not many of his words will appear in the future.
It was quite interesting at first, but I felt sick after reading Chapter 19 [vomited]
The male protagonist maliciously edits the video in order to acquire a female, which really makes people speechless.
I thought it was pretty good when I first read it, but then the author made various magical changes, euphemistically calling it the second design. If you don't like it, don't read it. I think it's right, so I gave a negative review. In your words, you just can't stand it. Don't read it.
It's a fun book, but it's too watery.
After reading a little bit, I don't think it's very good. I think the writing of several protagonists and villains in the book is not very good, and they don't quite match the original characters. For example, Wang Ye, Feng Yansha and a few others, I don't think the writing is very good. I am a fan of Wang Ye. Yes, I read a little bit. Anyway, I saw Wang and I felt like he was a different person, and Feng Yansha. I really couldn't find anything in common between them except for their names. Maybe I'm too harsh. I hope the author can continue to work hard and practice his writing. [Sending my heart]
Since it's a one-person scene, don't make drastic changes to the character's settings. Otherwise I wouldn't be able to give 0 stars. If you want to change it, just write a fanfic. This is the first time I've seen a famous scene that doesn't follow the original settings. It's too bad.
It's gone, the exchange is no longer interesting [smile]
Haha, I feel like there is something wrong with changing the video. Later, he used the usual method of stealing women to maliciously smear his original wife. Bye-Bye.
Feel free to change the plot characters. There is a system that makes such a price drop, just like a diaosi
It's all black, just for the sake of being black
The protagonist changed the few chapters of the video. If he changed it too much, he would lose a lot of readers. I gave you a cool song. Did you just show the famous scene properly, but you changed it randomly?
I usually read the table of contents first. When I see a very exciting title in Chapter 74, I read a few chapters and think it's okay, so I start from the beginning. In the end, I waste time and feel disgusted. The subject matter is still okay as long as the author's writing is good. But the author's writing is not good. Let's first talk about the genre of this novel. Is it funny or scheming? I can't see the scheming at all. I don't think it's funny at all. I feel that it is overall poor. The character of the protagonist is not well written, which makes people feel that the protagonist is immoral and narrow-minded. He also likes to dress himself up as an innocent white flower. The plot of the magic reform is successful only if it is not disgusting. The summary is that the content is generally toxic and the character of the protagonist is not likable. This is the protagonist's halo. Everyone around the protagonist has no ability to think. The two stars are completely full of some original famous scenes.
Chapters 18 and 19 made me feel sick. . They are all fools [stare] I saw the reviewer's comments and read chapters 36-37, which proves that my rating is correct.
It's just for self-entertainment, but the famous scene will make you drugged and raped!
There is a reason for the low rating. I won't go into changing the plot. It's just a little private stuff. It's excusable. But if you change the character, you've gone too far.
Exposing famous scenes? The famous scene changes! Human society changes! The changes are messy. If you are a conspiracy theory, then just write the conspiracy theory and add a title that exposes the famous scene!
What kind of famous scene is this? It's such a mess, I feel like I'm going to vomit.
Erxing is already giving face.
I could read Chapter 19 before, and it was pretty good.
The character of the author who arbitrarily discredits the characters for his own desires is not very good!
Spreading rumors is illegal