Ga Xiao: Adri Star

This article is really good to read, this is the real Ga Xiao! ! ! It's really sweet. My aunt couldn't stop laughing throughout the whole story, and all the young Jimei fans were so excited.

Nice! ! ! I really fell in love with the high-spirited and unruly feeling of Jialuo during the general period! In addition, the author's writing style has improved significantly. Although the first few chapters are a bit strange and difficult to enter the drama, the later chapters are much better, with a lot less conversational narration. Words like "" rarely appear in the later narrations (conversational narration is just my personal understanding, I really can't find an adjective) (PS: I want to see Jia Xiao sparring in front of the elites~) Woo hoo hoo hoo, I said I want to lower the score, but I crawled back and changed the score. I gave it two stars without conscience. I feel sad [crying]. I'm a stubborn person. I look down on my fellow fans. Isn't it [crazy]?

In a word, me! Overtake! Like! (ღ♡‿♡ღ) To be honest, I want to watch the admiral eat the kitten and wipe it clean (get beaten) \(//∇//)\ It turns out that people with high ratings will be removed from the shelves? ! (*°A°)=3 Hurry up and leave a rating (⊙△⊙)!

It's very beautiful, I personally think it's very sweet, and there are some places where it looks a bit funny. But it's just very good-looking, so it's not a loss if you join the trap.

Jia Xiao, two heroes, I will always be sad [crying] The author's writing is great, thank you! ! [Love] 4 points given without conscience [crying] [crying] (fq you are so cruel!!)

So I'm stuck here, right? ! ! The previous writing is good, but the careful words are a bit OOC. I cried to death to express my love, which is great! In my childhood memories, there was an incomprehensible sense of connection between the two of them, but I understood that the other person definitely put his lover first. I was so touched that there was actually a wife writing this article. [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on! ! The ending was really unexpected, I thought it was a good ending, but this stab was a bit heartbreaking, (I recommend watching the extras a few more times) I can't say. In my childhood memories, when I was still very young, I thought Superman was very handsome when I watched the cartoon "Happy Superman"! It's very unique and charming, especially with Jia Luo, (he was still a Rubik's Cube at that time). The bond between them can still recall the careful words at that time. "I'm going to twist you like a Rubik's Cube!" (Roughly meaning, because it's been a long time) Damn it (＞Van＜) was so abused, but I still wish them happiness. Pressure points

Sweet, really sweet. The feelings are delicate and true. The plot is ups and downs and exciting. It mainly describes the appearance of the protagonist from the front, but also highlights the character of the protagonist from the side. The scene descriptions are realistic and objective, the psychological descriptions are profound and powerful, and the simple language can make the people in the book come alive, as if they have really shed blood, lost their flesh, and become flesh-and-blood people, and the readers are immersed in it. I especially liked the chapter about racing. The audience's words of support and the exciting details in the article brought the excitement of the entire racing to a climax. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep at night. It's so awesome, so beautiful. Come back to review, it's really good-looking, I still have to score points, it's a killer [almost crying] [fear]

I really like this kind of double male lead with a lot of surprises, swordsmanship and sweetness! Author Marry Me It's really good, but it's a knife at the back😭 (Why did I give it 2 stars last time)

It's very interesting, and the characters basically have no OOC. This is the only Ga Xiao time travel novel that surprised me. It's very interesting, and it's finished now. You can read it with confidence. There may be some knives at the end, but there is candy on the knife, so it's very interesting. (Excited) (Crazy) (Screaming) (Roaring) (Eyes glowing green) (Using all four limbs) (Crawling in darkness) (Charging into the primeval forest) (Swinging on the vines) (Picking bananas) (Finding a knife hidden inside) (Distraught) (Finding the knife on the vine) There is sugar in the noodles) (Sadly ate) (Surprised to find it was delicious) (Happily ate a lot) (Discovered this book) (Eated) (Found out there was half knife and half sugar) (Screamed happily) (Shared with all the monkeys) (Leaved happily after eating)

Damn, it was so exciting,,,,, I especially liked the part about the black market and the motorcycle race, wow. I also really liked the part about being careful about the clones of the Four Heavenly Kings. Broken Knife Style and Caesar are also well written! ! We, Miss Jia, should have a state banquet!

It's really beautiful and the writing is so good. Are you a junior college student in Chinese? The young appearance and appearance of Gallo 20 years ago are vividly described, and the character and appearance of Gallo now are described extremely well. The character and appearance of Beware of Superman are also vividly described. Especially the description of the environment makes the environment of Adristar twenty years ago extremely realistic. You mastered various description methods and rhetorical techniques. The characters are portrayed with real personality, like a real Buddha before my eyes. I especially like the chapter about Jia Xiao's racing. The scenes that vividly describe the excitement and characteristics of racing are so cool. Although it's a little bit knifey, it doesn't matter. Without a knife, there won't be too many emotions. The writing is very good, and the author hopes that you can sell more comics if you publish them. [Shy]

Very beautiful! The ending is so sad TT. Jialuo forgot that the boy with red eyes who he loved suddenly appeared when he was twenty, and that boy also forgot that he also loved him deeply. "The twenty-year-old Jialuo is destined not to fall in love with the eighteen-year-old Xiaoxiao." This is a sentence in Chapter 66. Although the twenty-year-old Jialuo has forgotten Xiaoxiao and cannot love Xiaoxiao, they will still be together in the future. "The bond will not fade with the passage of time, the strong love will only settle through the consideration of fate, and become deeper and deeper." This is also a sentence in the article. The teacher's writing style is particularly good! ! Looks good! !

It was recommended by a friend. I watched it in less than half a day and almost cried. Xiao Xiao must go back, because in the future planet, the four supermen, Dr. Zhai and Jia Luo are waiting for him in the future. He cannot stay here. He is the guardian of the star planet. Generally speaking, both people have their own missions. The 20-year-old Jia Luo will never have the 18-year-old Xiao Xiao, but they will eventually meet in the future. They are in love and are destined to be together. Let me praise you here, the author's writing style is really delicate! The emotional line of the main CP and deputy CP is very well grasped. In Jia Xiao, it is love at first sight and love at first sight. The magical high tacit understanding makes Jia Luo interested in Xiao. A series of subsequent situations make him more certain: they are a match of souls. Finally, thank you to the author, thank you for letting us see such an excellent Jia Xiao. Although the final ending is unwilling, it can only be like this. Thank you

I love my wife! This fanfic is really good. Ah Xiao has his own little thoughts. Gallo also blatantly favors Ah Xiao. Everyone has flesh and blood. I first saw this Amway book on DY and immediately bought a tomato to read it. Then I became hooked. My wife's writing is really good and I feel it is better than most of the fanfics I have read (I don't mean to belittle other wives' articles). The OOC part of my wife is completely acceptable and the characters written are more flesh-and-blood. I also read it for several days and stayed up late to finish it today. It is really good. You can fall into the trap [laughs]

Wow wow wow I want to see the original synopsis with more details [almost crying] [almost crying] Alas, I forgot to score. But, let's just have three hearts. I can't give up another one. [Almost crying]

I'm a slow reader. I finished this book in one day. It's very delicious. It's so sweet in the early stages (but the last few chapters are particularly easy to cry about). I really like the interaction between the two babies. It's also very cute and sweet in the middle stage. But slowly in the later stages, the knife surfaced ( There are also some interspersed in the early and middle periods) I have been crying a lot, but when I read the last chapter, I really couldn't hold it in anymore... What I like the most is that the author's writing is really super good, and the story narration is also very complete. I really like this book! Also, this is not a filter. I read this book based on my memory of watching Happy Superman when I was a kid. I can't be considered an insider. After reading this book, I fell straight into the trap. No matter what, Jia Xiao99! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It was great. I was so moved after finishing the game, especially the part about the middle monsters and the small monsters in the black market at the end. I really cried to death. The emotional scene between Ah Xiao and Jia Luo was also very delicate! ! Finally, I would like to say, madam, you are my God! ! !

It's really beautiful, I can't stop watching it, and the characters of Xiao Xin and Jia Luo are not broken at all, ahhh! How did the author manage to write the villain so well? (•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The sugar candies in front are so sweet! It's just that the ending is a bit cliché🔪 💦💦I hope the author can write great books in the future (he's not very good at praising others, please understand🌚🌝)

This book made a great impression on me. (Who knows the sense of redemption after being stabbed several times before finishing a piece of candy...) The part where A Xiao punched Jia Luo was written in a sentence that made me feel so happy. I beat this old man so hard that it made you sad and waited for so long. The author's writing style is very good, and he has created an unforgettable (like Bai Yueguang) artistic conception, which makes it easy for people to get involved in it! (On the bed, my aunt's laughter leaked out, and I twisted into a maggot, went crazy and screamed, and cried like a fool) Summary: Your words are like a magic brush. Every scene comes to life vividly before your eyes. When reading, you feel as if you are following the protagonist through the story. You can even feel Arcas's need for a beating and Caesar's charming appearance. (Be beaten). Reading the story you wrote, tears always flow down uncontrollably. It is obviously a fictional plot, but the scene of Ga Xiao's departure is more poignant than reality. There is power in the words that can directly touch people's hearts! What I want to say is... (Omit 10,000 words here.) (Beat again)

Real! Overtake! Class! Push! Recommend! I discovered this treasure novel when I reached Chapter 10! It's really good-looking. There's candy and a knife in the middle. You actually licked the candy on the tip of the knife and ate it. The ending may be a little sloppy, but it's still very, very good-looking! Love the big writing style! Calling for you!

The author's writing is really beautiful. Jia Luo's change of heart towards Xin Xiao moved me very much [crying]. He also wrote about Xin Xin's cherishment of Jia Luo after traveling through time. The content in the middle is also great! [Sending my heart] I won't say much more [laughing], but the ending is really 🔪[crying] What a pity, such a good article cannot be given a high score [crying]

How can I put it... My wife's writing is so good, and the plot is both sweet and sharp. When it's sweet, it can make my mouth corners crazily raise, and when it's sharp, it can make me collapse, especially the medium monsters and small monsters... In short, it's super good-looking😨😇❤️ Feeling pretty good

The writing style is delicate and picturesque, and the passion and regret of Adristar are vividly written. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the emotions are sincere and touching. The more you read, the more you read. It is a rare and high-quality article! The plot is relaxed and relaxed, with just the right mix of sweetness and abuse. It has both the weight of family and country righteousness, and the delicate and tender bond. It will be unforgettable for a long time after watching it. It is worth reading carefully! The Adri star written by the author is full of flesh and blood, the characters are vivid and full, the story is moving and deep, and every chapter can touch people's hearts. It is a masterpiece that makes people fall in love at a glance and think about it again and again! The writing is gentle and powerful, and the writing of faith, protection and regret is particularly touching. The rhythm is comfortable and the emotions are full. After reading it, I feel moved and shocked. It is really beautiful!

The whole story is quite good, but I have a good feeling after reading the whole text. However, there are some minor problems with the character control of some tasks in the first part. Some of the language descriptions are a bit confusing, but I still have to praise him. He is very handsome when he rides a bicycle carefully. The language descriptions of the entire black market scene are also online. Recommended (applause) Finished, I forgot to score points (face covering)

It's very beautiful (♥∀♥). It was the short section at the end that made me cry, but the extra is still quite sweet!

In the early stage, it was lighthearted and funny, just stabbing me from time to time💘. . The later battles were not enjoyable at all! In short: super invincible and beautiful! \(*´∀｀)/ (Hey, when are you going to write another book? I really haven't read enough!) ❤️💛💚💙💜💕💗

The teacher's writing style is really good [loving], every sentence feels like a knife. I have read this book 6 times, and I still cry after reading it again [almost crying], it is so beautiful [blowing kiss] [send heart]

It's very, very beautiful. It's the best fanfic I've ever seen. Let's just say, why is there a knife in the extra story? It's very unsettling. Sometimes it's sweet, sometimes it's funny, sometimes it's funny, but it doesn't matter, I like it [laughing]

It's really well written and doesn't feel OOC at all. I can't describe it, but it's super pretty! ! ! ! This is the most interesting of all the essays written on Ga Xiao that I have read! [Adoration]