The Smoky Rivers and Lakes of the Consort

It's good to read, but this book also has some poisonous points, but I can accept it. I don't know what other people think, but I like it anyway, but the updates are too slow. I can't help it. The author has a formal job, so as long as he doesn't supervise, he can update every 4.5 Days. I'll watch it after I gain weight👀

A man is a boy until he dies. I suggest a harem. Who supports and who opposes?

The only novel on Tomato that I have completely finished and continued to read. The author saw it a year ago when it was first released. Although it is often interrupted, it is not easy to keep writing for love. From the beginning, I help the prince rob people, teach the princess after being captured, to introduce the background and travel around the world, until now to the battle of the Tianxia League. The protagonist is very strong, but not invincible. The current main line is to save the sister. Except that it is a bit short, the writing is very good👍

The author is not a eunuch, it's very interesting, but the emotional line of Ruo Fei is a little flawed, author, please do it! I still want to see the ending. The male protagonist and the female protagonist live together, and the sister is not related by blood, so I can accept it.

The author writes too slowly and can easily lose readers. Then, although the plot between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has a lot of interaction, it always feels like there is no substantial progress. I hope the author writes more about the relationship between men and women.

It is the most touching martial arts novel I have read on Tomato so far. It is not conventional. It does not talk about how the protagonist starts practicing from scratch, but puts the protagonist in a relatively high position from the beginning. The characters of the heroines are also very unique. All in all, I like this book very much. I hope the author will work hard and update it [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

This book gave me the feeling of an ancient fantasy novel from ten years ago, which is not a derogatory sense, and it is quite interesting. I would like to give you some superficial personal suggestions. Don't write about personal names. The main plot can slightly control the pace of plot development and speed it up.

This book is very to my liking. When I first read the first dozen chapters, the perspective kept changing and it seemed a bit confusing. After reading it, it felt like it was getting better. The concubine and the princess were well written. They are not the kind of female characters with facial expressions. The story of the protagonist seems to have just begun. There is still a lot to write. I look forward to the author's subsequent stories. Also, the writing is too slow, so points will be deducted [laughter]

I feel very good after reading the first twenty chapters. I feel that the fairy tales are lighter than the rivers and lakes. I hope that the protagonists can be assigned a heroine who will accompany each other to grow up. Don't pretend to be a peerless beauty who will captivate the country. Good looks are enough. I'm really tired of looking at beauties [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering]

The content is very interesting, the plot is interesting, and some parts are a little unreasonable, but the overall flaws do not hide the flaws. There is only one problem. The updates are too slow. It is impossible to update one chapter a day, let alone more than one chapter a day. This will only cause readers to lose and the popularity to drop. You know, if you don't read an unfinished book for three months, you will most likely not read it again. I hope the author can understand this Seeing that the author's self-reported income is not high, I can't be too harsh. After all, Yao lived. Those mentioned above are not accessible, Wang Haihan