After time travel, after merging souls with Jiraiya, he decided to change the ninja world step by step. Every time he changed in the future, he failed every time... Until 44 years after time travel, everything was different.
Reader comments
It's a good book, but it's not what I was looking for. The book I want is a book that can fill up the story of a hero who has regrets all his life. Although you are excellent, it is not the story of a hero who has no regrets after all. [Love]
It's the first time I've seen it written like this. It's very nice. I hope it won't break.
It is different from other Naruto novels in terms of characterization. In terms of plot, the ending is the cliché of uniting the ninja world to defeat Otsutsuki, but the process is very different. Overall, the author greatly enjoyed this novel. At the upper-middle level [Like]
I'm very optimistic about you as the author, I hope you will update soon [laughing evilly]
There are still a lot of poison points, but I don't care [laughs evilly]
I have nothing to do with being invulnerable to all poisons [laughing evilly]
If the author still has some regrets about this book, he can polish it and re-publish it, or publish it on other platforms, if he has time.
Each character is described in a very profound way. It is not a one-man show. It is quite good among similar novels I have read. However, you need to pay attention to the quotation marks.
I hope I can write well and don't cut off the roots [thinking][thinking][thinking]
It's okay, but Tsunade fell in love too quickly, which is not good.
Draw a Naruto manga and sell it to the entire ninja world, and your destiny will change.
Come on, come on, it's good. ! !
Good job. I will improve on the shortcomings in the future.
Come on, don't cut off the roots
Well written and very original, keep up the good work
Very well written, keep up the good work
Come on! I'm optimistic about you!
The author's writing is good, the descriptions are quite real, and the protagonist is brought to life. Come on, you can look forward to the future.
It's my type, not so brainless
After reading this part, I personally felt it was very good. I highly recommend it. The character description is very profound and detailed. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it will be considered a good book among the fans.
There are so many Naruto fans, but not many about Jiraiya. I hope this one will get better and better.
I'm such a dark Konoha [face covering]
It's a good book, but it's not what I was looking for. The book I want is a book that can fill up the story of a hero who has regrets all his life. Although you are excellent, it is not the story of a hero who has no regrets after all. [Love]
It's the first time I've seen it written like this. It's very nice. I hope it won't break.
It is different from other Naruto novels in terms of characterization. In terms of plot, the ending is the cliché of uniting the ninja world to defeat Otsutsuki, but the process is very different. Overall, the author greatly enjoyed this novel. At the upper-middle level [Like] I'm very optimistic about you as the author, I hope you will update soon [laughing evilly] There are still a lot of poison points, but I don't care [laughs evilly] I have nothing to do with being invulnerable to all poisons [laughing evilly] If the author still has some regrets about this book, he can polish it and re-publish it, or publish it on other platforms, if he has time.
Each character is described in a very profound way. It is not a one-man show. It is quite good among similar novels I have read. However, you need to pay attention to the quotation marks.
I hope I can write well and don't cut off the roots [thinking][thinking][thinking]
It's okay, but Tsunade fell in love too quickly, which is not good.
Draw a Naruto manga and sell it to the entire ninja world, and your destiny will change.
Come on, come on, it's good. ! !
Good job. I will improve on the shortcomings in the future.
Come on, don't cut off the roots
Well written and very original, keep up the good work
Very well written, keep up the good work
Come on! I'm optimistic about you!
The author's writing is good, the descriptions are quite real, and the protagonist is brought to life. Come on, you can look forward to the future.
It's my type, not so brainless
After reading this part, I personally felt it was very good. I highly recommend it. The character description is very profound and detailed. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it will be considered a good book among the fans.
There are so many Naruto fans, but not many about Jiraiya. I hope this one will get better and better. I'm such a dark Konoha [face covering]