After Confessing My Love, the School Beauty Took Me Home and Made My Father-In-Law Mad

The update is too slow. How long will it take to catch up on the book? ? ? ? Many good books are so slow that I have not read many of them. I have forgotten which books I have not read and cannot find them. I am depressed...

The author advises you to hurry up or else I will send a razor blade to your home [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, the rhythm is good, but there are a lot of typos at the end, and I personally think it would be better to remove Chu Qingxian's feelings for the male protagonist. Otherwise, I would feel a little bit sad while watching it. [Cry][cry][cry]

Speaking of the author, the protagonist is designed based on the prototypes of Li Bai and Wang Zhaojun, right? They all use swords and ice. When the heroine summoned the phoenix, I suddenly thought of Feng Qiuhuang and Phoenix Yu Fei, who are very similar to Li Bai and Wang Zhaojun~

Is this really a single heroine? The male protagonist is already having affairs with other women, right? I hope the male protagonist won't have an affair with another woman later, okay? After all, it's not easy to find a single female lead novel that I like to read.

So sweeter than the plot of Genshin Impact. Genshin Impact is full of knives.

Don't abuse Qingxian, he just fell in love with the male protagonist, what's wrong with him? Give him a good ending. Even if there are two female protagonists, it's okay to have a better ending. Don't wait until I see a good ending. I'll give it five stars again.

The endless fantasy of the Mangekyo Sharingan is too fantasy for them.

Chu Qingxian was a little upset, "Obviously I was the one who came first" [laughing evilly]

It's very beautiful, and there's really a lot of dog food.

His grandma's had big knives all over the back.

It's okay, at least I can watch it myself. Everyone has different tastes and adaptability. A product that looks good to me may not look good to you.

Very good, keep it up, just my personal opinion of course. There is no poison, very leisurely and relaxed

Your hobbies are really weird. This kind of thing is even more extreme than the harem I like to watch. Is it just the whole process? Um, a kiss. Um, I love you. It's okay. Don't be afraid. I'm here. Oh, you hate it [face covering]

The characters are well-drawn and very sweet. It is suitable for people who like to read stories with single female protagonists. The villains are also well-drawn and have independent emotions. The plot is neither rigid nor cliché, which is okay, so I give it a five-star recommendation. Finally, I would like to add that I would like to congratulate the author on writing a million words as soon as possible and preferably ten million words. Still good

It looks good. I hope it will always be a single heroine and not be ambiguous [pouts]

The author is awesome! ! ! Chapter 161 of a huge hole dug has been filled perfectly! All I can say is it's perfect! ! It's the Chu Qingxian part that needs to be written as soon as possible (I've only seen Chapter 162 now, so I don't know if it's been explained below) No, I really don't object to what you wrote, author, but are you sure there isn't any plot missing in the middle? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! Isn't it a little too fast? I think we should absorb 101 dragon veins and then upgrade to level 99 before the next plot happens, so that we can endure even amnesia and rebirth. So let's rewrite it from the one about the fusion of three gods and destiny master [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] This kind of setting is really not easy to have! This is the best setting I have seen so far, bar none. After waiting for that, let's continue to look forward to the next plot. Author, you have to remember that it is you who decides the development of the storyline. I can see that you are trying to raise Su Chen's level as much as possible so that he can reach level 90 or above quickly, and then connect to what happened after Chapter 220, but have you ever thought about pushing these plots back? Don't you have any control over the plot?

It's very interesting, but when I wrote about Chu Qingxian, I felt very uncomfortable. I either have to accept it or stop engaging in such torture.

It looks good, just don't have too much dog food

Very satisfied, the author will continue to work hard

It hurts my heart, either don't write about her feelings, or just accept them all,,,,,,

Come on, it's well written.

Author, please stop being ambiguous, or just accept Fairy Chu. It's a bit cruel.

If you can rate it like me, it's really Thai pants hot It's so good. I love to see the author. Please update soon [I'm about to cry]

Not bad. The characters are well written. I think it would be better with more details.

It's free when you go up, and it's sweet at the end [eat melon] [eat melon] which is okay

Very good, just a little lacking. I finished reading it (even though I jumped a little bit [rolls eyes] [smiles evilly])

It's really suitable for people who love watching cool stories and falling in love (personal opinion) Give me back my single heroine

Awesome, it's been updated, I thought the author was dead [eating melon]

Praise for the author