I Transmigrated into a Male-Oriented Novel and Saved the Beautiful Older Sisters

I finished reading the entire plot today, and went back to watch it again, and found a lot of foreshadowing. For example, the scene where I saw the Jinchun Sword in the study at the beginning paved the way for the secret realm of Chunmi later, and the setting of Yanling. Although it rarely appears later, I always feel that every word of Yu Qing may become a foreshadowing and come true. For example, Yu Qing said that she wants to build a reputation that "in her formation, she is invincible", I am looking forward to it. Also [When Hibiscus spring comes out, no one can defeat it! ] It's also very touching!! The most important thing is my conjecture. I think it is definitely not that simple for the Yu family to be wiped out overnight. It may become the main plot in the future, and it may also be used to kill us... Please, author, I want to read it!! Woohoo, I really like Yu Qing! Why isn't it popular?

The plot has ups and downs. If you look closely, you will find that there are many foreshadowings and they are cleverly connected. Moreover, the author has a lot of imagination and some of the plots are quite easy to write. There is no female competition, only mutual help and punishment of evil and promotion of good! The protagonist Yu Qing is also a smart, witty, talented person who hides his secrets! Woohoo, I really like Baby Yuqing! She is kind, cute, perseverant, thoughtful, smart, resourceful, able to bend and stretch, dares to love and hate, and has a feeling of being in control! A quote I like recently: She struggled in despair, but also rekindled in the ashes.

The novel is very interesting, the author's writing is fluent, and the plot connection is pretty good. There are indeed some punctuation marks in the article that need to be improved, but overall it looks good. I give it a five-star rating, keep up the good work.

This novel is well written not only because of how wonderfully the author describes the time travel story, but also because it brings readers into the atmosphere created by the author! The author is a very talented person, and the plot has twists and turns that make you want to read it! In the novel, the author vividly portrays the character and destiny of the protagonist, especially the time-travel setting of a female supporting character, which makes readers empathize. We are all supporting characters in other people's stories, but as long as we can control our destiny, who is not the protagonist in our own life!

How should I put it, my laugh point is a bit low, let me laugh for a while. Although it is not my favorite type, it is also my favorite time-travel type. There are several places where I really want to laugh when I listen to it. Yes, the author is very attentive and continues to work hard to make the plot richer. I think it can be more funny. I personally think 🤔🤔🤔🤔

It's very good-looking. The plot is ups and downs and interesting. The more you read, the better it gets. It's a book worth reading. I really like the friendship between Xiang Shumi and Yu Qing, and I also like Yu Qing's character! Highly recommended, cool article!

It's so good, the plot is so rich, add a bookshelf first and then read it slowly, leaving footprints👣 Mainly because I don't have enough time and I need to review, otherwise I'll read it in my library👀

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I watched the beginning and then the fight at the end. Some humble opinions. When watching it, I did feel like I was watching a little girl accidentally enter the world of cultivation. But, the protagonist's golden finger seems useless. Generally, male videos directly obtain good things in advance that are not available in the early stage, making readers feel so happy. But this one doesn't. Just like an outing, experiencing the world. How should I put it, those who like it will like it very much, and those who don't like it may not be able to watch it. Nowadays, comfort novels raise expectations too high, and the acceptance is weak when encountering an ordinary possibility. Adding more surprises, fun, and contrasts may make a dull plot more interesting. If there is a story that makes you laugh so much that your stomach aches when you are writing it, chances are the readers will laugh too. On the other hand, I cried a lot while writing it, and readers may feel a little uncomfortable. Because others' understanding of the novel is much lower than the author's. That may not be true, I am also a newbie. Fighting is a weakness, and punctuation marks are a flaw! I thought that when the Lord asked me to watch it, I would suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. I'm thinking: There's a period missing here, a comma missing there, why is this ellipsis only half of it? Why don't you add a colon when speaking? I said a lot of things, some and no, and expressed my feelings. I think of a sentence to encourage the author: Writing is a lonely journey, and no one knows what the scenery is there until the end.

It's a very good book. I recommend reading it. It's very detailed. I love it.